Sardi ki Dhoop - OS

Removed because the author is a crazy lady apparently who loves the forum to the level of addiction. This is me going cold turkey😊

I love you all and I will miss you guys too much.😭 breaks my heart to delete this

What do I write for you yaar...and what can one possibly write for you..

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

What do I write for you yaar...and what can one possibly write for you..

'Kya likhoon tere OS ki taarif mein mere humdam,

Alfaaz khatam ho gaye hain tere adaayain dekh dekh ke'

What beautiful shaayari yaar...each one of them.

The one shaayari I loved was kahin mere tarah tu bhi intezaar mein toh nahin part...the one he wrote when she joined Facebook.

Itni baar hasaya hai tu ne mujhe Dips. .aaj aadhi raat ko rula dita.

Nah sardi ki dhoop, na garmi ki chaao. .bas ek nasoor, what amount of pain that heart might have carried😭

Try publishing your work Dips, either these or write something to publish. ..you deserve to shine my friend!

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

so beautiful

and emotional

absolutely loved it

Dipti Darling you are just amazing... Ye poetry tumne likhi hai??? Amazing dear its beyond awesome. I just loved it... Its incredible dear... I m speechless now. No words to describe the beauty of this OS... Luv you yaar

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Dipti Darling you are just amazing... Ye poetry tumne likhi hai??? Amazing dear its beyond awesome. I just loved it... Its incredible dear... I m speechless now. No words to describe the beauty of this OS... Luv you yaar

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

One of ur finest! !

Loved it to bits! !

Edkv timeline! !👏

Those couplets man..! ❤️

Stellar update!!

This was heart wrenching yet so beautiful!!