Sardi ki Dhoop - OS - Page 10

Pyaar kar ke tumse apne dil ka aashiyana jala diya,

Fir bhi khaakh hui dhadkano me tumhara naam sunai deta hai

Wow amazing, this depicts his pain after Sumo's betrayal, his hatred yet his helplessness that he can't get over her even after going away from her.

Bhulane ko hum chale wo dastaan jo bani hi nahi,

Lagta tha pyaar na sahi dosti ke liye pukar loge ek baar.

Mayoos armano ko mitane me lag gaya mai lekin,

Meri yaado ke gaao se tera dera ab tak uthaa nahi

Splendid. No matter how hard he tries Sumo doesn't leave him or rather he doesn't wanna let go off her.👏

Has leta hoon bol bhi loon shayad,

Har chehre me magar teri muskurahat ki talaash hai.

Jab nahi milti mere dil ki khushi kahi bhi,

Fir se apni chuppi me tujhse baate karne lagta hoon.

Beautiful. Shravan's always searching for her everywhere and is only in peace when he's with her memories. 👏

Hazaaro dafa dekha hai chaand ko badalte hue,

Uske har roop ki aadat hai ab.

Aaj mere chaand ko dekha hai pehli baar,

Itna badla badla sa par mayoos sa kyu hai,

Kahi meri tarah tumhara dil bhi intezaar me to nahi?

This one got my eyes welled up. Shravan would have thought this one when he saw her for the first time in years. Very well written Dips.

Bhoolna chaahte the har dard ko jo dil ne saha hai,

Pehli baar kisi ka sahara lekar dekha bhi ...

Par kambakht sharaab bhi itni nakafi hoti hai sukoon dene me,

Ya fir tumhara dard hi itna mera hai ki bas jaan ke saath hi jayega.

Jispe Pyaar ka nasha ho koi aur nasha nahi chadta. You proved this saying right in this one. He tries to run away from her even with his new escapade but is pulled right back. Amazing. 👏

Kisi naye chehre me apna kinara dhund lo, kehte hain dost

Koshish karunga, soch ka chala tha mai is baar.

Har leher me tum hi tum hote ho mere toofan

Har Kinare me tumhari talaash karta hoon ab bhi.

Meri kashti ko hi zid hai bikharne ki tere haatho har din.

Loved this one ⭐️. No matter how much he tries, she is in him and he's ready to be shattered by her rather find a new friend. Beautifully written Dips. Truly Shravan!!

Be waqt ki ye barsaat, din me raat jaise ye baadal,

Kitni suhani lagti thi, jab ek chaate me hote the hum aur tum.

Aaj dekho, wohi barsaat hai, wahi baadal bhi

waqt bhi waisa hi laparvaah hai jaisi ki tum ho,

Par tum nahi ho kahi ...

Tum jaise hi bewafa mere saare mausam lagte hain aajkal.

Everything he sees, feels, he relates it to her. 👏

Ek arsa beet gaya par lamhe jaise abhi beete hain.

Ab bhi aankho se nahi bojhal hoti tumhari hasi, tumhari baatein

Kitni baar jala doon inhe, dubo doon sharaab me, aansuo me

Fir ubhar kar aati hain kambakht, nayi si lagti hain har pal

Kyu nahi saanse le sakta mai, jaise auro ki chalti hain... asaani se.

Wow Speechless!!!👏 specially the last line. He not someone who moves on and forget, he is special and you truly depicted his character in this one.⭐️

Aaj fir wo din hai, dastoor wahi ban gaya hai ab to,

Mai hoon, sharaab hai aur tumhari tasveer fir se.

Har baar mitaata hoon, fir nayi ban jaati ho tum

Har baar bhulata hoon, fir has kar yaado me a jaati ho.

Fir se kagaz kalam lekar shayar ban gaya tumhare liye,

Aur ye bhi mere wafadar nahi hain...Karna chahta hoon nafrat tumse,

Inko pyaar hi aata hai bas is bewafa tasveer pe.

No matter how much he tries, he just can't hate her. Very well said yet again.

Na sardi ki dhoop ho tum

Na garmi ki chaao ho mere liye

Bas ek nasoor ho mere dil pe laga hua

Fir bhi na jaane kyu tumhari har baat yaad hai mujhe

Kyu tumhari har betuki baat pe aaj bhi mujhe bas pyar hi ata hai.

Perfect follow up to the one he wrote when he was wanted to confess his love. She is indeed Nasoor for him that he have to and want to live with it, even if it just receive pain in return. Beautiful Dips. 👏⭐️

Badi shiddaton se paala hai maine apne har jakhm ko,

Itni asaani se maafi nahi de paunga

Yaad to tumhari har baat hai lekin,

Tumhe fir waise hi pyar nahi kar paunga

You know what this one justifies Shravan saying Kaun Sumo. The pain he endured has given him right to not to forgive her so easily.

Aaj tumhare aansuo ka marham lagna tha,

Mere har jakhm ka ilaaj banna tha inko.

Dard ke badle dard, beizzati ka thoda sa zeher

Sab kuch taye tha, aaj meri jeet ka din tha.

Haar lagti hai kyu lekin fir se wo aansuo ki ladi...

Kyu fir se jakhmi sa baitha hoon tumhari tasveer lekar haatho me

Even though he hurt her, he was not happy. The venom hit back at him. Her tears made him hate himself for hurting her.

Suhani lagne lagi hai subah fir se,

Panchiyo ki awaaze bhi dil me fir se utarne lagi hain.

Bachpan ki yaadein, ladaiyaan, tumhare nakhre

Fir se taaza hone lage hain

Tumhe mil gayi hai dosti shayad

Mera humraaz mil gaya hai fir se mujhe

Wow!! What a comeback Dips. From the hurt and pain to the new feeling of happiness just to get her friendship back. For just being with her.Beautiful.

Os ki boonde jo chali gayi thi kal dhoop sekne,

Dekho aaj fir se aa rahi hain apni pattiyo se milne...

Phir laut aya hai pyaar mera bhi unhi ki tarah,

Tumse mila hoon aaj ek nayi roshni mein phir se.

So happy for Shravan. he found his sunlight his love back. He's started smiling, started living again.

Jakhm kuredna koi tumse seekhe,

Lahoo bahaana tumse seekhe koi

Mere pyaar ko sazaa mili hai fir se,

Dil todna kabhi mera bhi dil tumse seekhe

Pain back in his life. So well written, reflects Shravan's state of mind. 👏

Aaj pata chala meri saanse girvi hain

Tumhare paas, tumhari dhadkano ki mohtaaj hain ab bhi

Dua me haath tere uth nahi rahe

Meri nazre jhuki hain unke bebasi ke bojh tale

How can someone love someone so love. This guy is just out of the world. Don't have words to express right now. Feeling overwhelmed.

Chaand ki roshni mil jaati hai fir ek muddat ke baat,

Junoon bhara ishq bhi milta hai aisi hi shiddat ke baad

Tumhari has saas, har dhadkan har shikan se waakif hona chahoon mai har pal

Tumhari julfo ke saaye me hi rehna chahoon mai har pal

Jab paas ho tab chaah badhe, jab duur ho tab bhi lage aas paas ho

Ye kaisi manzil hai ishq bhi, ki pyaare lagte hain itne lambe raaste...

Tum sach kehti thi...Mil jaate hain dil jo bane,Ek duje ke vaaste

Lubna❤️