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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: lenana

You have just made me fall more in love with Shravan.

Lovely lovely lovely writing.


Thanks lenana. Is that your name dear? Talking for the first time I think. Welcome to the forum and gang🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

OMG this is as beautiful as it can be...
I am falling in love with ShraMan more and more...
The songs are so beautifully penned and it shows the real Shravan. ..
I can't imagine how much Shravan loves his sumo. . It is Beyond my imagination... .
Absolutely wonderful OS


Thank you dear 😃

Itna pyaar imagination me hi hota hai 😉😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
RES.
sach batau toh meri ab itni aukaad nahi rahi ki mein aapke shots mein comment karu.

darr lagta hai. nervousness hoti hai.

Itne ache writer ko apne views kaise bataye koi.

Phir bhi i'll try 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Beautiful shayri...
dil ki batein jo na aye zuban par likhi hai meine apne dil ki panno par yeh mehsoos kar ke tum ho mere saamne ek khuli kitab ban kar.

Beautiful OS..

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Beautiful shayri...
dil ki batein jo na aye zuban par likhi hai meine apne dil ki panno par yeh mehsoos kar ke tum ho mere saamne ek khuli kitab ban kar.

Beautiful OS..

Vinu


Wah Vinu... Got the gist that too peotically 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: evaviego

RES.

sach batau toh meri ab itni aukaad nahi rahi ki mein aapke shots mein comment karu.

darr lagta hai. nervousness hoti hai.

Itne ache writer ko apne views kaise bataye koi.

Phir bhi i'll try 😳


Pleasr do warna dhamkiyaan mai bhia chvhi deti hoon. Likhna band kar dungi😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
this is one of best oneshot I have ever read...those beautiful blue lines is successfully showing shravan's inner feeling of these 10 years...awesome work dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: deltadawn



Happy march ab tax bharo!! Thanks mayu. Tumne padha dil garden garden ho gaya. Dusri baar padha mai to faint ho rahi huun aaj😆



Yahan tax nahi hoti dipti :))) so march happy happy hai 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
So beautiful. Very awesome 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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D(didi) itna talent kaha se layi yarrr...thoda idhar bhi pass on karde. ..those shayries were bang on man!
He never stopped thinking about her...their love man❤️ and you make it look more beautiful
It was emotional and beautiful both together. ..👏👏👏
All i can say that


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