SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 43

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww TAKE A BOW GIRL...this was beyond marvellous sooo damn beautiful amazing fantabulous heart-touching intense emotional bittersweet so simple yet so so indepth so meaningful sooo love it...read all chapters in one go hun...Thank you so so much hun for this Masterpiece...

Hey Spandana!!...wow, you liked this so much 😃, I must have gone right there then!!...Have a big big smile on my face right now😃

Btw can I please request something if it is k Can you please please write few more parts or atleast prologue..I mean a conversation of ShravanSumo about how Shravan admires his Sumo for helping Seher give a peaceful closure & thus helping Shravan to get rid of his long time guilt & also Seher's confession to Rushabh about Shravan but how Rushabh smiles & tells Sehar like how he knew it from before...I dont know if I'm making any sense but still I would love to read a conversation between ShraMan & Sehar & Rushabh regarding this issue from your pov...please please write if possible...Thanks alot love...

I can't thank you enough for all those kind words Spandana, I am feeling so encouraged seeing you so excited. Yeah, the track you suggested is very much similar to the plot line, I have in mind for the epilogue to this story. Honestly, wasn't really planning on an epilogue, since I felt that the story is quite tight woven. Delta's demand and your sweet words have pushed me to think about one😳

After reading all parts in one go, I'm LITERALLY in tears don't know if these are tears of relief or peace or happiness or pain or all emotions combined but Thank you so very much for this Beautiful Creation dear!

And after reading your comment, I am extremely overwhelmed. I just wanted to write something a little different from the other talented writers here. I'm so super glad and touched that you appreciated my effort. Thanks a ton dear!

Lots of love hugs,

A big hug coming your way as well for this swell comment🤗

Spandana

Originally posted by: Safire

Very nice ending!!

Will remain in my mind forever!!!

Thanks for the PM!!!

Originally posted by: suprisomya

Amazing yarr

Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Hi there! That was a beautiful update Reshma. It was the best closure Seher, or for that matter, anybody could get. Such a simple story, but goes straight into the heart. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this from a third person's point of view. So the third person found love too. That's good!

Great story. Even better story telling! Please come back with another one soon!

Until then,

Goodbye Shravan

Nuts

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

It's phenomenal di

"Woh tumhe door rakhta tha kyonki main uske saath hi thi har waqt. Woh mera chehra tha, jise uski nazar talaashti thi." Love this line

Clingy and possessive Mr. Malhotra😃😃"Oh you have no clue Seher, the guy is jealous of the air I breathe" 😆

"I have never had anyone fighting for my attention. So I am grateful for the undivided heed that Shravan pays me. " Shraman have gone through alot now they deserve all the love and attention

Sumo not only helped Seher to completely move on from Shravan but also made her realize how much she love Rishabh❤️

"Found you"..Both Seher and shravan found their soulmates

Beautifully written.. Loved it

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Couldn't find my res! It was beautiful Reshma! As I said, I am in love with you Seher! Really she is just my kinda girl!

So many analysis, so many praises you have got already, but the thing, that made me close my eyes with content was when, Rishav asked Seher, that did she miss him, and she said, found you! These two words described the state of Seher! Truly she found her love!

Then, of course, ShraMan moment was 😳👏

Dialogues were ❤️

Nothing more to say! A lovely story, with a lovely ending!

PS when are we getting our next story??

Originally posted by: LubSha

Unress...

Hey Resh,

I knew it would end soon, but it ended too soon or maybe I'm in too much love with your story that I don't want it to end. But I also know that this story was Seher's perspective, for her closure. You cannot stretch it too much. This was a perfect ending. Just perfect. I was always waiting for how Seher would react once she knows the truth, and she reacted very gracefully. Love your Seher, she is someone with no pretense, no hiding facts, just lost in love that didn't get closure, something that was stopping her from living her life to the fullest.

Lubs, you gave understood her so perfectly man. .mesmerisingly perfect!!

There was a different kind of calm in your Sumo which differentiates her with others. That only could go with your story. She seemed just too overwhelmed by Shravan's love. The fact that they openly talked their feelings to each other was commendable. You presented it in such a way they appear so mature to not only handle the each other's presence but also sort things out.👏⭐️

That was my idea Lubna, to portray them this way. I assumed that they would be a lot more peaceful in their demeanour once they finally become one.

Sumo making her realize love for Rishabh was really amazing. Sometimes when you don't get closure it's like hanging somewhere, being there but still not there. Seher was with Rishabh but was somehow not with him. But the realization of her love for Rishabh sure gave her the happiness she deserved. so happy for her as much as for ShraMan.

I swear, I am very happy as well for Swhere, she deserved a cessation.

You know when I heard Parineeta chopra's song "Mana ke hum yaar nahi" after Namik tweeted about it, I thought of Seher. Something in those lines made me relate that song to Seher. Very few songs get to my faves list and this is one of them, so whenever I will listen to it I will think of Seher.

Hey Lubs, was meaning to request you for a parody on this song, suits Suman after Shravan destroyed stuff in PCT and she sat crying in the rain.

Thank you so much Resh for giving us Seher!!!😊

❤️❤️

Now coming to ShraMan. Their love was and trust was undeniable. I am a very emotional person and when I was reading this, I was even overwhelmed with their silent talk, something that we fans have so much connection with these characters who are just not mere characters anymore. The way you describe everything is just too amazing (which will get you in trouble now😆) because just like Dips I demand an epilogue too and with all the details of farmhouse.😆😳

So waiting for the epilogue...

Yup. .I don't seem to have much of a chance, so I will be doing an epilogue 😃

Lots of Love❤️🤗

Lubna.

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Pehle toh sorry for not UNRESSing...Pata nahi kaha RESses bikhre pade hai😆
I loved the last part a lot...!!!!👏
Beautifully written...Mai bata du ke maine tumhare update karte he padh liya tha...1st😃Seeher and Sumo convos were hell beautifully penned..!!⭐️
I still dont get why didnt you start writing before man??
Roller coaster of emotions...U found a perfect word for ShraMan's emotional journey..!!👏Ramnath and Sumo bond as told by Sumo❤️

I was never short changed. My love was never disrespected . A man who had suffered so much when his own love was mocked at, could never laugh at mine. The fact that he had discussed me with Suman proved that he did feel guilty of never giving me my closure.
Amazing written para this was..!!!👏👏👏

Woh tumhe door rakhta tha kyonki main uske saath hi thi har waqt. Woh mera chehra tha, jise uski nazar talaashti thi
Amother amazing one👏
She found Rishabh..I knew Sumo would make her realize her love for rishabh..😃
All in all I loved the whole whole update...ShraMan moments...naughty😉😆
par why last chappy???Tie breaker toh mangta hai.😃😃
Atlast so so sorry for not unressing your posts on time..Heartly sorry...
Hope to see you with something new soon...
ANU😳🤗

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Anu baby, the fact that you read it and liked it is enough darling.

Comment nahi bhi kiya, toh bhi chalega

Here I go "Awww!!!"

AISA MAIN NAHIN BOLNE WALI😉

And here..."Kamini..!!!"😆😆

Even if it's after weeks, I will be waiting for your comments!!

I always enjoyed reading Anu, plus writing, as you very well know, involves hard work😆...so didn't write any thing for a long time.

@bold true...😆

Hey , I am so glad you noticed the Ramnath and Sumo bond, very deliberately included in this story, wanted to show Sumo getting all the importance that she never received otherwise.

I juz waana thank you for adding that..It was a treat and heart melting moment to read plus if we take onscreen chemistry of niki and satyajit sir in the show it would had looked beautiful too..

Let chapter coz Seher got her closure baby.

U r right par meko aur chahiye tha..😭

Tie breaker ke liye epilogue likhoongi😆

U HAVE TO...!!!!no excuses regarding thaat..Warna mai vaha aake mar dalu teko😆

Thanks a lot Anu 🤗