SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 41

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice ending!!
Will remain in my mind forever!!!
Thanks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Eva this is for the tie celebration !!


Its not a TIE. But theeek hai. Aap bhi kya yaad rahoge 😉 😛

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Posted: 8 years ago
It's phenomenal di
"Woh tumhe door rakhta tha kyonki main uske saath hi thi har waqt. Woh mera chehra tha, jise uski nazar talaashti thi." Love this line

Clingy and possessive Mr. Malhotra😃😃"Oh you have no clue Seher, the guy is jealous of the air I breathe" 😆
"I have never had anyone fighting for my attention. So I am grateful for the undivided heed that Shravan pays me. " Shraman have gone through alot now they deserve all the love and attention
Sumo not only helped Seher to completely move on from Shravan but also made her realize how much she love Rishabh❤️
"Found you"..Both Seher and shravan found their soulmates
Beautifully written.. Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn


I know resh ka thread and she will do replies. But mai khud ko rok nahi sakti ab!!
Tabby I am in love...with that sizzling hot vampire mind of yours 😆 see @bold for reason.❤️




😳😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi there! That was a beautiful update Reshma. It was the best closure Seher, or for that matter, anybody could get. Such a simple story, but goes straight into the heart. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this from a third person's point of view. So the third person found love too. That's good!
Great story. Even better story telling! Please come back with another one soon!

Until then,
Goodbye Shravan
Nuts
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally managed 😛
Unress page 52 :))
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Posted: 8 years ago
Couldn't find my res! It was beautiful Reshma! As I said, I am in love with you Seher! Really she is just my kinda girl!
So many analysis, so many praises you have got already, but the thing, that made me close my eyes with content was when, Rishav asked Seher, that did she miss him, and she said, found you! These two words described the state of Seher! Truly she found her love!

Then, of course, ShraMan moment was 😳👏

Dialogues were ❤️

Nothing more to say! A lovely story, with a lovely ending!


PS when are we getting our next story??
Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
reshma what a perfect closure for seher, its true when we love someone at one point of out life but if it wont be reciprocated then it will always occupy one tiny corner in our heart for forever 🥺
it was much needed closure for seher but some the way she handlled all the situation was really appreciating its very tough to talk about you own husband, your love of life with the person who fall for him at some point in past when you were not around ⭐️

the way suman described seher's reactions on rihabh's action was too good that shows how keenly she was observing seher while all their discussion 👏

and naughty shravan how he stayed away from his wife for complete 1 hr 10 mins 😉

amazing update dear but you ended very soon but its okay you did perfect end ⭐️

keep writing more such awesome pieces, i am waiting

Love
priti
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356



Lol...take your time sweetheart😆



Done !! Unres page 52

But may come back to rant 😕 kitna kuch kehna Baki hai # EDKV unfinished ending Ki tarah 😕 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LubSha

Res.. have a lot to write about.

Unress...

Hey Resh,

I knew it would end soon, but it ended too soon or maybe I'm in too much love with your story that I don't want it to end. But I also know that this story was Seher's perspective, for her closure. You cannot stretch it too much. This was a perfect ending. Just perfect. I was always waiting for how Seher would react once she knows the truth, and she reacted very gracefully. Love your Seher, she is someone with no pretense, no hiding facts, just lost in love that didn't get closure, something that was stopping her from living her life to the fullest.

There was a different kind of calm in your Sumo which differentiates her with others. That only could go with your story. She seemed just too overwhelmed by Shravan's love. The fact that they openly talked their feelings to each other was commendable. You presented it in such a way they appear so mature to not only handle the each other's presence but also sort things out.👏⭐️

Sumo making her realize love for Rishabh was really amazing. Sometimes when you don't get closure it's like hanging somewhere, being there but still not there. Seher was with Rishabh but was somehow not with him. But the realization of her love for Rishabh sure gave her the happiness she deserved. so happy for her as much as for ShraMan.

You know when I heard Parineeta chopra's song "Mana ke hum yaar nahi" after Namik tweeted about it, I thought of Seher. Something in those lines made me relate that song to Seher. Very few songs get to my faves list and this is one of them, so whenever I will listen to it I will think of Seher.

Thank you so much Resh for giving us Seher!!!😊

Now coming to ShraMan. Their love was and trust was undeniable. I am a very emotional person and when I was reading this, I was even overwhelmed with their silent talk, something that we fans have so much connection with these characters who are just not mere characters anymore. The way you describe everything is just too amazing (which will get you in trouble now😆) because just like Dips I demand an epilogue too and with all the details of farmhouse.😆😳

So waiting for the epilogue...

Lots of Love❤️🤗

Lubna.

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