SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61 - Page 42

Originally posted by: evaviego

Beautiful. 👏

No matter how many times i read it, it always leaves a smile on my face and i can never get bored.😳

Love the way you go deep into even the tiniest of moments.😊

Wherever Shravan is or whatever he is doing his mind is always where Suman is and love how he steals quick glances at her.

Suman is the soul of Malhotra family. 😊

Woh tumhe door rakhta tha kyonki main uske saath hi thi har waqt. Woh mera chehra tha, jise uski nazar talaashti thi. #Touching.

Clingy and possessive Shravan. Lucky Suman. 😉

Missed me?" "Found you" WOW.

We do not meet people accidentally, everyone comes in our life for a reason, and Suman crossed Seher's path to set her free. To give her, the much needed closure.

Indeed, not all goodbyes are sad. 😊

Seher. I am gonna miss you really bad. Never thought i'll fall in love with someone apart from ShraMan.😊

Bland comment it is i know. Always fall short of words when it comes to your updates. Lets just say the beauty of it leaves me dazed 😉

We need a tie breaker update. 😉

Originally posted by: amks2016

Damn ! Res 😊

Unressi 😛

I've bin itching to re read n unress .. And it showed in my actions from last nite n today how unres setfull 😆 I was through out #sighlife

Mayu, trust me, your excitement for my work is very motivating sweetheart, truly!

Resh whatte Beautiful end 👏👏👏... So the good bye was from Sehar now I'm sooo much at peace 😆

Rem I told you was not comfy with "Goodbye Shravan" title .. So Shravan is still around ( happy dance) 😳

Ya I remember you telling me that you weren't comfortable with the title, but the title came simultaneously to me along with the story idea, so kind of stuck on to it😃...relieved that you liked the ending of the story!!

Tis a Tie btwn Delta & Eva 😃 we are relieved too 😆 party toh banti hai ( Baadshah ko bulaya Jaye ) 😛

Arre nahi. .now they are demandinga tie breaker..so..might have to come up with an epilogue 😕

Now cmg back to what I actually was waiting for :) how beautifully interwoven n interconnected this story progressed. . Hats off Resh

Thanks Mayu 😳

I'm glad Sehar got her closure .. She was never his 😳 rite she never was his .. It was Rishabh " found you " was ❤️

The lines .. You were imp. But never mine ..

You met ur soulmate .. I met mine

You hve found peace and I hve found mine

Powerful intense and meaningful 👏

Found you part somehow moved me too while reading. We are always blessed with what we desire I guess, perhaps even better, but we invariably fail to recognise.

Sumhow I new she would realise Rishabh meant more to her than she believed ..it was inevitable .. But how the realization was bought by Sassy Sumo was classic and brings out the excellent art of your story telling/writing 👍🏼 #thestoryteller

Would love to know what's going on in Shravan's mind when he sees both these ladies conversing .. The aspect that he had never mentioned Suman to Sehar at any point if time in their relationship shows ...he never put Sehar in his frame of life .. only Suman Tiwari was there :))

Looking out for your girl/wife always makes her feel wanted... Here SM scores big time .. . The clingy Malhotra ❤️ achieves jus that :))) he gives her a punishment for being away Is drool worthy 😳 My breath hitched when Shravan looked at Sehar n Sehar said good bye Shravan ( no idea why ) may be it's the way u hve projected the character of Sehar 😊

Story listening was a big part of my childhood, perhaps my love for story telling stems from there 😛. I can only fathom Shravan being more clingy than romantic after marriage. He clearly had the requisite qualities 😉...Seher, yup, modelled her the way I would want anyone to deal with rejections, with ease and grace. There's more to life, not necessarily better, but definitely more.

Rishabh was always there n the same person liked his character sketch too ( after Pushky I like this guy 😳) Sehar n Rishabh convo very cute there !

Finally The Sassy Sumo ... What maturity she shown while dealing with her husbands past 😳 Sehar needed a closure but it was equally important for S&S too ..

Her observations of Sehar's reactions in those few hours deducing that she cannot be a threat to her is 👍🏼

Suman lucky Tiwari Malhotra " teda hai par mera hai " ❤️

Thanks Resh for this lovely story fell in Love with Shraman all over again❤️.. If there is sumthing like that existing😒 (as #MoveOn has not happened ) 😕

Rishabh again was modelled on the qualities, I would like to have in a guy. Confident and caring. Suman was equally observing as Seher, actually aren't we all girls😉

Move on for me looks impossible Mayu, like I told Eva and Delta the other day, I might be the last soul to leave this forum😆

PS : may come back again to rant .. N thank you Dipti for convincing Resh to give this classic .. Eva ur gifs are my favorite now 😳 and Hope Spandana's request is adhered too as I'm sure many want it too :)))

Yup, an Epilogue looks inevitable now!

Love

Mayuri

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

So,,Mr. Malhotra gave one hour ten minutes of Mrs. Malhotra read him,,,for Sehers closure..!!

I am just curious to know his thoughts all this while! !

He was clearly noting their demeanours..! #TheEyebrowRaise...#flyingKisses!!

You will know that soon Tabby, I am being coerced into writing an Epilogue 😃

And,,Sumo wanted to give Seher her closure and to Shravan freedom from guilt..!!

Someone whose love was mocked at...never laughed at her..!!

Ain't these two adorable !! ShraMan they are..!! No wonder they make us head over heels !!

Yup, it does, and perhaps also explains why in spite of our maturity, get worse than school girls gushing over them.

So,, Shravan had told Suman everything about Seher... but Seher has not mentioned Shravan to Rishabh! ! Exactly,the way Shravan never mentioned Suman to Seher..!!

Rejections!! You keep them to yourself! Therefore they hurt so bad !!

Even people who don't pursue denials...keep them in a corner..!!

Trust Tabby to Tap what was written between the lines. Have you ever wondered why it was my birthday wish to read something that you have written? You dance this beautiful waltz with words, both the ones that were written and the ones that were left for comprehension.

I did have a mind to make Seher tell Rishabh by the end of this chapter though, but then , just let it go. Some memories aren't meant to be shared, I thought. Let's see how I shape this part now.

Missed me... found you..!! and on the cue,,Mr. Malhotra makes an exit..!!

A grand one at that😛

To each his own... can't agree more !!

Makes two!

When Seher had clapped for Suman,, post her performance ... that moment i knew she had moved on !!

Consciously she hadn't,,,unconsciously she had..! !

Her quest finally ended and she found where she belonged..! !

Bingo again Tabby, meant to keep her character progression steady right since the clapping part. Any viciousness, no matter how cleverly buried inside wouldn't allow those hands to come together for an applause.

Red suits you...to black suits you..!! It's going to be a night to remember for them..!!

You are the only one to mention the red part too, another feather to your hat of a skilled reader, character progression of Seher ended at this part. .Black suits you. She had arrived home.

Bidding good byes! ! Closures! ! Smiles! !

Such a beautiful story !! Seher,,what do I say..,just love her to bits !! Koi apna sa..!!

She has become part of the tale... Jab tak ShraMan... tab tak Seher..!!

Seher. ..I will miss her grit.

Amazing !!

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Beautiful ending 👏

Shravan found his soulmate in Sumo & Seher found in Rishab 😊

Keep writing 👏 & Thanks for PM 😊

Vinu ⭐️

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

mind blowing ending

absolutely loved it

thank you for writing it

superb

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

hey Reshma,
I really loved ur SS...very nice plot...n equally nice end to it too...keep it up...do treat us to more of ur works...

rgds
Anuradha

Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

Res
Unress

This is really wonderful 👏 Not enough words to Express how beautiful is this ending...
Sumo told everything related to her and Shravan's relationship to sheher and how despite so much problem, so much difficulty finally they found themselves and are now happy and content. .
Sheher also realised that Shravan was never her as his Heart belongs to suman from childhood and he can never give that place to anybody else..
Sumo in the end letting sheher realised her love for her husband..
Shravan is going to file a case against sumo for the reason that she stayed away from him for one hour, ten minutes 😉 😃
You were important, but never mine.

You have met your soulmate, I have met mine.

Suman was right, your goodbye was painful because you never explained it to me.

Now, that my picture is clear, I don't find you anywhere in the frame.

You are with the one you belong to and I am with the one, to whose love I surrender.

You have found your peace, I have found mine. What a beautiful ending 👏
Thanks for pm and keep writing like this..

Love
Shrujani

Originally posted by: Rahi111

Hello reshamainar di

Bahut aachi ending ki aapne 👏

Aap bahut aache ho

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

After sumo saying she was the reason for Shravan's state 10 years back, sheher remembering how devastated,,shattered, broken Shravan was when he came to their House..
Suman narrated each and everything of their relationship right from childhood times when they shared a beautiful friendship to how she mocked him infront of all school to how they friend again after Shravan coming back from london to how Ramnath played evil trick to separate them to how she almost got married to aditya to how they got married in court to how Shravan destroyed her dream wedding..
Sheher realised how Shravan and suman's life was never easy, how they have to face so much hardship to be together..
But despite everything that happened, in the end their love conqured all the hurdles and finally they are together Forever. .
Poor Shravan akela rehna pada par usne court marriage kar ke jo galti ki thi uski saja nanu ne ushe de di 😉 😃
ForgivenessThis is the best thing about sumo, she forgive and forget.. She forgive Shravan for everything and now she also forgive Ramnath for all his sins and now became a daddy girl..
Sheher here thinks how she take her parents love for granted, she realised how much sumo must have craved for parents love where as she is so lucky to have them in her life..
Woh tumhe door rakhta tha kyonki main uske saath hi thi har waqt. Woh mera chehra tha, jise uski nazar talaashti thi.
Woh pyar nahi kar paaya tummhe kyonki mai ne uske pyar ko kabhi samjha hi nahi, woh auraton ke pyar ka mazaak udata tha, kyonki main ne uske pyaar ko mazaak bana diya tha Best line 👏
Sheher after listening to sumo understands that why Shravan couldn't love her because his heart already belongs to someone, then how can he give his Heart to her..
The most painful good bye is the one that is not explained Wow 👏
Shravan is extremely possesive, never allowed his wife to talk anybody for that long 😃 😉 "tedha hai, par mera hai" 😃
Sumo letting sheher realised that she is now in love with her husband and it's just premature exit of Shravan that kept him in her thought..
Shravan's antics 😉 Sumo par case karega 😃 Always like their cute fight..
You are with the one you belong to and I am with the one, to whose love I surrender.

You have found your peace, I have found mine. What a beautiful ending 👏
Thanks for pm

Love
Smita

Originally posted by: minho

Deeply written, amazing update 👏 this is last chapter 😭 will miss your story.. Come soon with another fantastic story 😳