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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Resh, how are you now?.I hope you are doing ok.. .
Get well soon dear..
Now coming to the story...
Finally suspense khatam hua 😉 😃...
So Shravan and sheher are college friends and Ramnath and sheher's father are friends. ..
Sheher also worked under Shravan...
Sumo knew "SAB KUCH" about sheher must be told by Shravan. ..
So sheher loved Shravan but did Shravan love her back?. ..
Love just happens, kyunki dil ke paas dimag nahi hota 😃 😉
Cliff hanger in the end, is it nirmala who betrayed Shravan?. ..
Update when you are healthy and ok and thanks for pm...

Love
Smita

Hi Smita!!

Feeling better now thank you 😳

Yup...Seher and Shravan go way back. They have a London connection.

Shravan ne 'sab kuch' bata Diya, helps a lot that way.

dil ke pass dimaag Nahi hota- Wah Smita👏

Sure babe..Will update as soon as I feel up to it.

Thanks for being with me!

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Thanks for updating di..How r u now??
Take care and get well soon❤️❤️

Coming to the chapter...Brilliant update di
Really like Sumo and Seher's conversation...
Aww...Shravan has told Sumo sab kuch about his past.. Every little thing
Feeling bad for Seher😒..She was blindly in love with Shravan..

"Rishabh was talking to a very famous model known for her striking looks. A pang of immediate annoyance that hit my heart surprised me as well."...Seher is feeling jealous it seems like a good sign for Seher and Rishabh's relationship❤️
Excited to know more about Shravan's life in London...
Waiting for next update
Take care and thanks for the pm

Meera🤗

Abhi fever kam hai darling.

Ya...I personally liked Sumo and Seher's conversation part too.

Shravan was Meera's mirage.

Jealousy usually speaks a lot if we are willing to listen Meera😃

Will update soon sweetheart.

You take care too. Thanks for liking this update.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: amks2016
Finally caught up with the update Resh :) good to know ur feeling better bro !!

In fact I read all 3 chapters again as muddled as I felt from last nite 😆 Had to get back to Shraman Land 😳

Glad Sehar n Suno had a normal convo .. Gauging each other .. ( prob what place the other had or still has in Shravan's heart ) .. My vivid imagination took me into a party nite whr two beautiful women dressed impeccably .. sitting in an open lawn with fairy take lights surroundings .. N men with tuxedos walking around or standing by the bar .. 😆😆

Really getting more n more intrigued by Seher n can't wait to see what will be the impact in Shraman's world .. N how Sehar's hubby fits in their bubble 😳

Take care Resh 🤗 N waitinggg

Hey Mayu❤️

I can understand, I myself had to jog my memory to get a good Shraman feeling😆

Your imagination about the tux and gorgeous women is so next to my own when I was visualising the scene Mayu😃

These are big shots , highly successfulpeople we are talking about. The party has to be classy right?

The girls gauging each other - bang on there champ!

Hmm..how Seher's husband fits in the bubble. .is what that's intriguing for me as well at this point.

Thanks for the review Mayu. ..I actually enjoyed it. Will update soon

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik
First of all, thank you for the PM!!!
Second, I love the direction the story is going in. Feel pretty bad for Seher though. But it's Sumo we are talking about. Sigh. Can't blame them both for being so in Love with the guy. It's Shravan after all. Hehe.

You are not well? Take care!! Get well soon!
Then you can update. Hehe

Hi Sara,

You love the direction the story is taking so far..phew. .I needed that vote of confidence from someone like you.

We can't blame them can we, heck, I am myself in love with the guy hook, line and sinker😆

Yep...am having a bad case of viral infection.

Thanks for the review. You do realise that I look forward to hear from you, don't you😳

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Unressed at Page 24.

Hope you are feeling better. 🤗❤️ for you.

Lubna.

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: amlavs
Nice update...
Feeling bad for tat girl...
Loved it...
Plz tc of ur health...
LavSriya

Hi LavSriya! !

Thanks for liking the update dear.

I'm feeling much better now😳

Lots of love!

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Hainn! Fever! Mujhe kuch pata hi nahin chalta! 😕Sorry! Get well soon honey bun.🤗

Coming back to chappy! Lovely is the word! Brilliantly penned! Seher n sumo's convo was fab! Sumo is a sweet heart! How beautifully she managed the situation! Aur haan Shravan se to humesha hi love at first sight ho jata hai! Uska koi kasoor nahin hai! ❤️

Will ve waiting for next chapter! And yes, again, wish u a speedy recovery!

Hey Sanjh,

I am super glad you liked the update. Yes Sumo handled it well

And its not rocket science to realise why one may fall for Shravan...it's but natural 😉

I was so very glad to see destined updated this morning. .mazaa hi aa gaya😃

I'm already feeling better. Will update at the earliest sweetheart❤️

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: priety.priti
hey reshma really sorry don't know how on earth i missed this wonderful SS till now may its started when i was away from forum for some time 😳😳
read all 3 parts in one go must say a different concept you brought 😛

i was hell scared in part one thinking that suman and shravan married to diff persons but sigh!! i let out my breath only in the end of part 2 which i was holding from part one 😲

song was too good...still its playing in my mind 👏

shravan and suman;s relation is crystal clear i mean he already told her each and every thing about him even though its about a girl as a open book and that is the strength of their relation is their deep precious friendship

"Abandoned" last line...this really pinched me in heart 😭

amazing dear, you are writing very well 😊

Priti

Hi Priti! !

Arrey. .hota hai baby. ..you might have been busy. Look at me. I haven't yet commented on the latest update of soulmates.

Life has been hectic.

Lol. .in the first part, I just thought of having some fun.

Actually I found it pretty strange that someone as happening as Shravan never had anyone fall for him. So came up with this.

That song Priti, I am listening to it this very moment 😃

Deep and Precious friendship - You said it there. Shraman are friends before anything else. Trust comes naturally to them.

Yup...abandoned. .the worst feeling ever.

I am happy you are liking the story Priti. Thanks for this detailed review sweets❤️

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv
how are you now, Resh di???
Hope you are doing good now.
sorry for commenting late. actually exam time, so couldn't help.

coming to the update.
the first chapter literally gave me a heart stroke.
like shraman ko kisi aur ke saath imagine hi nahin kar paye.
I think the greatness lies in Dilip sir's strong story n his characters.
of course credit goes to Nimik and also the forum writers who made Shraman , an epitome of love.

as i read the second part, *sigh of relief*, i felt good. and the story is in Seher's POV. badi ajeeb lagi, like Sumo n Seher together.

and coming to the third chapter,
i'm actually feeling better to know that it was just Seher who loved him, Shravan had no feelings for her. he loved only Sumo all the way along.
it's really nice that Shravan told Sumo everything.
SAB KUCH as you used😉
i'm feeling bad for Seher tho.
Hope she mends her relationship with her husband soon.

Please take care of yourself

lots of love❤️
Madhu

Hey Madhu,

Really sorry for the late reply sweet heart. health and home kept me busy.

I know your heart might have skipped a beat in the first chapter.

Happened to many here😆

See, you are really young now. But someday somehow you will understand that once you cross a certain. age , it's not difficult to have a normal chit chat with your partner's ex.

And yahan toh Seher ex bhi Nahi hai😃

All will be well with Seher. I promise.

I also wanted to tell you that I find you really sweet. ..just like your name.

You are really involved with all our stories and fun...a big hug coming your way for that Honey🤗

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hi Reshma, Hope you are feeling better now. Sorry I'm the last one to comment everytime. But I'm back home and today is my unressing day. Have a long list😆
Res...

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Reshma!!
What a chapter!!!! Totally loved this side of the story. It's her childhood love too. Wow what a beautiful triangle where even we love Seher. ShraMan are of course the one we love but Seher is such a character we fall for too. She had endured like Shravan and Sumo, but she loved the wrong guy even though he's the best.Her story is quite believable, as even in the show someone could have came from London. How can they resist him.😉😆

She is very straight forward. Didn't hide anything from Sumo, which is quite admirable. She is a good lawyer after all. Not negative but jealous of course. I love Seher. She loved him wholeheartedly but sadly he was already someone else's. Seher's emotions were very beautifully described Reshma.👏 She did so much just to be with him. My heart goes for your Seher.
Also the way she described Shravan's state of mind when he went to London was emotional. Can truly relate to Shravan. The whole chapter was incredible Resh, but the last two sentences were the soul!!!

He looked broken, you know like someone who has been cheated, robbed, like someone who has been. ."

"Abandoned " Suman completed it for me, her voice now a hoarse whisper, her face now totally pale.

Very well written!!!! Loved it. Can't wait to read Seher's reaction when she gets to know about the reason why Shravan felt abandoned that Shravan was Sumo's even before she met him.

You are an amazing writer Reshma, wonder why you never write before. But no complains, this was the right time and the right story for you.⭐️🤗for this beautiful chapter. Please take care and come back with a bang soon. Can't wait. Love you

Lubna.❤️