SS- Goodbye Shravan-Epilogue updated on page 61

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Res kiya tha fir bhul fayi! Could have said the name! My name is quite nice yaar! 😉

Arre Sanjh. ..Eva means Deepti. .uska aur Deepti ka competition hota hai pehle res karne mein on my thread. Aaj dono nahi kar paaye. So they are pulling each other's legs😆

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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

@Sanjh. Arey i am not saying about you. 🤣

Tujhe toh thank you bol rahi hu. Yaha ek competitor hai mera. 😛 Tu nahi karti toh wo kar lete. Aur phir meri chopsee ho jaati. You saved me from getting chopseed. 🤣

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Fever!! 😕

Take care 🤗

We desire for hot,,burning updates...,, burning with fever,,nayyy!!

'Seher' ki zindagi ki nayi seher honey waali hai..,is mulaqaat k baad..!!

I like her..!😳

Shravan ki London life..heart breaking! !

However,, one who was 'abondoned'...has been avowed forever !!

Story is awesome!!

Get well soonwa!!

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: evaviego
@Sanjh. Arey i am not saying about you. 🤣
Tujhe toh thank you bol rahi hu. Yaha ek competitor hai mera. 😛 Tu nahi karti toh wo kar lete. Aur phir meri chopsee ho jaati. You saved me from getting chopseed. 🤣

Huhhh! See mujhe firse kuch pata nahin chala! Sare dramaqueens!🤣 Ab to lagta hai, mujhe sare comments bhi dhyaan se padna padega! 😕 Btw eva, maine bhi mazak main hi kaha! Nothing serious! Hope ab firse kuch miss na kiya ho!

Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

No baby, i did not take it seriously. Serious aur mein. 🤣

I thought you took it seriously 😛

And dont worry ab agar kuch miss hoga. Toh wo bhi bilkul aise hi pata bhi chal jayega.😆

Ab agar maine yaha comment kiya na. Toh mujhe bahar phenk diya jayega yaha se for spamming the thread unnecessarily. 😆

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: evaviego
No baby, i did not take it seriously. Serious aur mein. 🤣
I thought you took it seriously 😛

And dont worry ab agar kuch miss hoga. Toh wo bhi bilkul aise hi pata bhi chal jayega.😆

Ab agar maine yaha comment kiya na. Toh mujhe bahar phenk diya jayega yaha se for spamming the thread unnecessarily. 😆

😆

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

wow

amazing update

absolutely loved it

continue soon

superb

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good..

Thanks Mystic❤️

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta
Superb, u explain very well. Obviously when n shrvn was in London he felt empty bcz he missed his sumo. And seher is one who narrate some interesting and cute incident as well. Waiting for next part.

Hi Harshita!

Glad you are liking the plot. Shravan used to miss Sumo in London for sure. Seher used to be around him there. She would be the best one to tell Sumo how he used to be there.

I will PM you once I update next part sweets😳

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#160

hey reshma really sorry don't know how on earth i missed this wonderful SS till now may its started when i was away from forum for some time 😳😳

read all 3 parts in one go must say a different concept you brought 😛

i was hell scared in part one thinking that suman and shravan married to diff persons but sigh!! i let out my breath only in the end of part 2 which i was holding from part one 😲

song was too good...still its playing in my mind 👏

shravan and suman;s relation is crystal clear i mean he already told her each and every thing about him even though its about a girl as a open book and that is the strength of their relation is their deep precious friendship

"Abandoned" last line...this really pinched me in heart 😭

amazing dear, you are writing very well 😊

Priti

Edited by priety.priti - 8 years ago