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Safire

@Safire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hey Saf,
I am feeling much better now,Thanks.
It's viral fever, so I might take a day more to recover.
I'm glad you are liking the story so far. Please do let me know if you find a disconnect anywhere😳

Resh,glad you are recovering.

Regarding the story i don't feel any disconnect anywhere.

Even if there is one,i am sure you will be connecting the dots gradually as you are a very talented writer.

Take care.

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Arpi1234

@Arpi1234

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Resh, how are you now?.I hope you are doing ok.. .
Get well soon dear..
Now coming to the story...
Finally suspense khatam hua 😉 😃...
So Shravan and sheher are college friends and Ramnath and sheher's father are friends. ..
Sheher also worked under Shravan...
Sumo knew "SAB KUCH" about sheher must be told by Shravan. ..
So sheher loved Shravan but did Shravan love her back?. ..
Love just happens, kyunki dil ke paas dimag nahi hota 😃 😉
Cliff hanger in the end, is it nirmala who betrayed Shravan?. ..
Update when you are healthy and ok and thanks for pm...

Love
Smita

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Thanks for updating di..How r u now??

Take care and get well soon❤️❤️

Coming to the chapter...Brilliant update di

Really like Sumo and Seher's conversation...

Aww...Shravan has told Sumo sab kuch about his past.. Every little thing

Feeling bad for Seher😒..She was blindly in love with Shravan..

"Rishabh was talking to a very famous model known for her striking looks. A pang of immediate annoyance that hit my heart surprised me as well."...Seher is feeling jealous it seems like a good sign for Seher and Rishabh's relationship❤️

Excited to know more about Shravan's life in London...

Waiting for next update

Take care and thanks for the pm

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Finally caught up with the update Resh :) good to know ur feeling better bro !!

In fact I read all 3 chapters again as muddled as I felt from last nite 😆 Had to get back to Shraman Land 😳

Glad Sehar n Suno had a normal convo .. Gauging each other .. ( prob what place the other had or still has in Shravan's heart ) .. My vivid imagination took me into a party nite whr two beautiful women dressed impeccably .. sitting in an open lawn with fairy take lights surroundings .. N men with tuxedos walking around or standing by the bar .. 😆😆

Really getting more n more intrigued by Seher n can't wait to see what will be the impact in Shraman's world .. N how Sehar's hubby fits in their bubble 😳

Take care Resh 🤗 N waitinggg

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

First of all, thank you for the PM!!!

Second, I love the direction the story is going in. Feel pretty bad for Seher though. But it's Sumo we are talking about. Sigh. Can't blame them both for being so in Love with the guy. It's Shravan after all. Hehe.

You are not well? Take care!! Get well soon!

Then you can update. Hehe

Edited by PrincessAshVik - 8 years ago

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Hainn! Fever! Mujhe kuch pata hi nahin chalta! 😕Sorry! Get well soon honey bun.🤗

Coming back to chappy! Lovely is the word! Brilliantly penned! Seher n sumo's convo was fab! Sumo is a sweet heart! How beautifully she managed the situation! Aur haan Shravan se to humesha hi love at first sight ho jata hai! Uska koi kasoor nahin hai! ❤️

Will ve waiting for next chapter! And yes, again, wish u a speedy recovery!

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Sanjh tujhe yaha comment karna tha toh right below the update RES kyon kiya? 😛

Well thanks for doing that. Mein tera yeh ehsaan kabhi nahi bhulungi. 🤣

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minho

@minho

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Very nice update 👏 get well soon dear 😊 health comes first hum to yahi hai aap apna dhyan rakho aur thik hoke update krna 👍🏼

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#149

I am really glad if i couldnt RES first, a certain someone could not do it either. 🤣

What a WOW update. 👏

I must say. Down with viral fever and coming up with such a near to perfect update. Kamaaal bandi ho aap.

Ek toh the way you write. There is something about it. It is so enticing.

I have a feeling that Seher has some resemblance with you. Hai kya?

Poor Seher. Yeh pyaar humse kya kya karwaata hai nahi. Unrequited Love. 💔 But Milte toh wo hi hai, Jo bane ho Ek Duje Ke Vaaste.

The last paragraph. 😳 This is gonna be way more interesting than i thought. 😉

Take care of yourself and get well really really soon. 🤗

XOXO 😉

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: evaviego
I am really glad if i couldnt RES first, a certain someone could not do it either. 🤣
What a WOW update. 👏
I must say. Down with viral fever and coming up with such a near to perfect update. Kamaaal bandi ho aap.

Ek toh the way you write. There is something about it. It is so enticing.

I have a feeling that Seher has some resemblance with you. Hai kya?

Poor Seher. Yeh pyaar humse kya kya karwaata hai nahi. Unrequited Love. 💔 But Milte toh wo hi hai, Jo bane ho Ek Duje Ke Vaaste.

The last paragraph. 😳 This is gonna be way more interesting than i thought. 😉

Take care of yourself and get well really really soon. 🤗

XOXO 😉

Res kiya tha fir bhul fayi! Could have said the name! My name is quite nice yaar! 😉