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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Ye mujhe dedicated tha😲

Good morning!
N mujhe pata hi nahi chala!
Aap kar hi kuch aur rahe the!

LMAO!
Drama Queen!

@Bold
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Safire

Zoya,mere paas words nahi hai kuch bolne ke liye!!

Saf my love! Aap aaye yehi bohot hai 🤗
I'm sure this forum is still alive because of your writings..
Aww man! And then you say bolneko kuch nahi hai aapke paas..
Kamal karte ho aap!
You should write often...
Time willing I would.. But kya kare...

@Bold Thank you so much ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

Hey Zoya,
Hey Anu!😛
That was just amazing...I have no words to actually appreciate this whole episode...sooo verrryyy beautifully written...I mean it lietally brought me goosebumps...how do u manage to write sooo well yaar... 👏

Oh my! You guys with your forever amazing comments.. I have no clue how to thank anymore..

I m awed by ur talent...I really request you to take up writing seriously...u can b a best selling author...Not everyone gets to tap his/her talent so well...in fact not everyone has such talent...utilise ur talent dear...make d most out of it dear
Whoa! Anuradha! Aap kya bol rahe ho.. I'm not so good.. I just get away fine..
But I will surely give it a thought..


rgds
Anuradha

@Bold Thank you so very much!
What a compliment!
🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Unresd Noor ⭐️ @115

Oho!
Iss baat se Sukoon mila!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Chotte in every way! ! 😆
LMAO😆

provided I'm alive, ...a gust of wind bellows and you hear a random CHOTTE ... I was about to say, ,nahi aisa nahi boltey. ..😆 actual insaan waale feels. ..they ain't characters anymore. .. especially HIM !!
Don't worry, I said Astagfiullah in my head 😉
Besides, blame a certain GhostStar for that bit 😆

cause cuteness kya hai? Hot is in! And you are hot! And tall!"
Pushkie pie No matter how much i adore you,,I will agree with you !!😛😆
Hahaha Hotness bro, bhoot banke bhi hotness tapak ri itni ke ek jhalak hi aag lagaane kaafi hai!

Haha...Kamini Chachi does a Kanta Ben! !
Finally! Kisiko toh Kanta ben yaad aayi😆
Ladki ke saath!" 🤣
God! This is hilarious! ! 😆
Haina😉

Haye Ram!... #RaminiMoment! 😳
I shall never forget the two!

By the way who going to play villain here...circumstances? 😉
I! Me! Myself 😎
You know how sadistic I truly am!



Party ready !!! Noor hi Noor !!!
Wah wah! Thank you Ji, GIF ke liye!

He was so lost in the beauty that he missed a part of what his Dad said...ahaan! !
Ehem ☺️

but she is not mine. Hayo Rabba! !
Aapke hone hi duniya mai aaye the, Aap ne kaha kyun yun dil mai samaye the?

Suman noticed Shravan's eyes turn upset as he tried hard to mask it with his smile. .. he has some other plans! !
Very keen eye of observation Cap! He does have other plans!

She noticed and I am happy about it... aagey ki aagey dekhtey hain...😃
Yo!

Raghuvansh Tiwari... I feel he has a vital role play! !
As always!😳

He could allow himself this one night of "Noor" before tomorrow dawned and he reverted to denying his feelings. ❤️

I can allow him this, I can allow myself this one night to bask in his "Noor" before we both go back to being friends at the break of tomorrow. ❤️
Ji...

Noor Mehfil main aamad se unki,,
Pur Noor hain ye nigahein inki !!
Noor faila hua yoon aaj ki raat hai,,
Noor jo aaj Noor ke saath hain !!

Noor jo aaj Noor ke saath hai!
Khatam!
Mehfil loot li ❤️

Beautiful beautiful song !!
IKR!

The update is nothing but 'NOOR' !!
Yeyy!

@Bold Thank you so very much Tabby!
I love you!
And your couplets more so 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Unresed Noor @Pg..

Wait a sec konsa page.

LMAO😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

O ya!

Unresed @Pg 116!
🤗
Chota hi hai ha!
😛

Your perception of chota?
God save me!
🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wait a sec first...
Tabby Dagebaaz!
Wo couplet nahi tha pehle waha na?
Dhokha hua mere saath!!
😭 😭

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Yedi is here with her RES!!!!

****
Unres
I resed on 13th Oct!
😲 😲
Yikes!!!!
This is the longest one!
*Muh Chupaaying*
Besharam!



Zyaada bakwaas nahi karti ha..
seedhe Upi pe aate..As usual ha😆
Haan thank you 😆
Zealous si Zoya🤗
Nikka sa Nik 🤗
Noor...Ye title kaha se laate chun chun ke?
Dimag se bro!😉
And the way they are justified in every update!⭐️
Yeyy!

Pushkie and Shravan..the cutest duo ever!!
Lamp Post..Sumo ka asar dikh ra😆
Sangat ka asar dikh raha hai 😆

Arey I so love it when Shravan calls him Chotte..But jealousy!
#SiblingThing
Chote to hai n rahega!
Aur kya!

Old people stuff😆
A 60 year old Pushkie Pie..🤣
Cute AF!
Aaye haaye ye to imagination mein bhi chotte hi lag ra.
Hahahah!
And Shravan ka oldie lagne ka chance hi nahi..ha Pushkie as Motu tab bhi jealous hi hoga😆
Shravu hot old man hoga! Like Milind Soman ☺️ 52 years old and yet slaying it!


Suman Overdose..Yaha bhi😆
Well hai to Sumo overdose hi!
Yo!

Cause cuteness kya hai? Hot is in!...Baat to sahi hai😉
Meri favourite ladkian aapki ho gayi and aapko perfume ki padi hai!...😆
Haaye bechaara apne bhai ki hotness ka maara🤣
That sounds wrong😆
LMAO! Sab ka dimag gutter mai hi hai!

Aap na! Ladkion mai koi interest nahi hai ab bhi aapko na...Now that sounds terribly wrong Puskhie🤣
Ji! That was the idea!😆
Kamini Chachi (Ekta Kappor inspired)😆
I love my drama!
Pehle to kaala teeka...😲 chachiji ko kya hua!
MEre saare characters acche hai, with a hint of human jealousies ..

Aisa to kuch nahi hua ke aap aise react kar rahe ho...Damn🤣
Thu thu ho jaayegi...Itni fikr chachiji!
Aur kya!

Isko ladkion mai interest hai! In the plural!...Haanji in the plural but un Plural ko?😳
Lol..

Iss ne hadd kar di! Isko toh ladkion mai koi interest hi nahi hai! Haye Ram!"...O shit🤣
Ram...Na Chachi na😆
Ramu kaka ne suna kya?
Ramu neeche hai na, he didn't hear 😆

Pushkar Tharki hai and ye Shravan woh hai...😆.
'Woh' kya hota hai?
Am so bhola bhaala baccha na!
Lol.. tu!

Haaye bechare ka kaan..ouch!

"Kya? Kya nikal jayega? Kehne ka matlab kya hai tera? ...Chachi sixer pe sixer maar ri🤣
Pakda aapne! Ke kya nikal jaayega 😆
Mera kaan aur naam kharab kar rahe ho...rhymes perfectly!
That was the idea 😎

Khandaan to kamaal hai and upar se Zoya ne likha to dhamaal kar kar diya😆
Hahaha
Btw that chetti chetti of Lalaji...haaye!
Yes!
That Holi waala song of Lalaji and Shravan
Wohi yaad dilana tha!

Ramnath..He was always a good and caring father!
Agreed!
And yes Shravan deserves it!
That I Love you baccha...Love it!
Me too!
But as much as he missed it, living away made him stronger...Thats true!
It made him see his worth!
Indeed a blessing in disguise.
Sometimes it takes time for us to realise that whatever happened, it happened for a reason..for our own betterment!
Word!

Ma..Kiss on forehead..Moments of these three.❤️
Family!
I so so love these beautiful moments Zoya.
His parents are there with him maybe not as husband and wife but as his parents that too happily and thats what matters.
Thar's all that matters indeed!

My son is back...I love it so much for some reason!
Good, it was meant to be loved 😆
That proud tone here of a father ❤️
I forget the pain of living away from the one person my life belongs to...This is something!!
Haina..

That Party epi
Ji bas wohi yaad karvana tha...

Shravan putting an arm around him..Ramnath's speech...Loved it!!
Glad!
Sumo in Royal Blue..Ohoo!!
Jhalli, His Jhalli...A gorgeous Lady but she is not mine...Bang on there!👏
Sab bol diya!
Sab kuch!
Sumo chashmish ki thi Shravan ki nahi..according to the heartbroken Shravan!
Wait for it!

Shravan and Pushkar on either side of Ramnath...Now thats a proud moment!
Sooo loved when he acknowledged Varun too❤️
Family bro, family!
Pushkie pie and him addressing Ramnath as Bade papa..Always adored their bond. Respect waala!
Ekdam, and mere wala Ramu deserves it too😆
Shravan is upset..kyu ji?
Fir chodke jaane ka chal ra kya kuch?
Uske dimag mai chal ra bohot kuch, aap intezaar karo bas..

Nanu..The most loved person!
His mere presence brings a smile!
I love him!
He was Shravan's voice of reason...So true!
The little interaction there was just Love... emotional!
Yeyyy!

Suman Baccha...Aailaa 😲
Shaant baalike!
Ye Ramu kaka itna accha kaise ho gaya re.
Mera Ramu hai iss liye... I tried to base him on the lovely daddies I've seen around me!
Bada emotional kar ra!
Haaye but I loved it so much ya ❤️
Pata na kyu?
Of course!

The Malhotra's and Tiwari's as a family
Peg sheg te gallan mithiyaan!
The family reunion was ❤️
Masst!

Kamini discussed with Mausiji the details of the Jagrata she wanted to organize to ward of any evil eye the kids of the family may have...
LMAO!



Chachi ko kya ho gaya 😲😆
She's my Kammo! So she's nice!

Shravan...haaye ya❤️
The song...well yahi baj ra hai while reading and typing and sooo loved it ya!
Thanks for the recommendation!
I love it! Its too soothing!

Shravan nihaaroying Sumo and how...Sigh!

What a sight to behold!

That one glance...and it hit him!
Sigh!!!!!
Zoya only you can do it so subtly🤗
Shukriya!

He could allow himself this one night of "Noor" before tomorrow dawned and he reverted to denying his feelings...
I can allow him this,I can allow myself this one night to bask in his "Noor" before we both go back to being friends at the break of tomorrow...
What to say here!
👏 👏
Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho!

That gesture of asking 'what' and in return the answer in another simple gesture of shaking head...Simple but cute and effective!!
I love it! That bonding!

The ending had it all!
Damn it was beautiful!!!!
The end quote..❤️
Thank you!


Loved the upi and the song and the title so so much!!
Thank you!
Pleasure was mine!

Keep writing and I will keep reading!
That I'm sure of!
Love you ya🤗
Nikka sa Nik




@Bold Thank you so very much Nikster!
🤗
Love back!

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