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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#921

Sorry Zoya i was away from the forum more than a month now.
i couldn't catch earlier managed to read today 😭

1st part of the update was really funny. 😆 Pushkar's nautanki, throwing all the things to Shravan, pouting & whinning like small kid.

Kamini is one step ahead she thought Shravan is gay 🤣 OMG this lady.

Party was good Ramnath introduce Shravan & Pushkar both heir of M & associates.
Shravan was emotional after he met Nanu.
Sumo in her blue gown she must have looked liked Cindrella
Shravan just lost himself in her beauty and his hidden feelings are again awakened after seeing her 😳

Thanks for PM Zoya
I think one more update is yet to read

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#922

Sumo dreaming of Shravan that to kissing her, so naughty wala dream 😆
Shravan in her room that too on her bed, trying to figure it out her coherent words. 😆 She has slapped him only because he didn't kiss her 🤣

This guy is almost ready to kiss her if she wasn't wake up from her sleep 😉

She was indirectly praising him, Shravan was comparing himself with Hrithik Roshan 😆

She was his Sukoon he feels contented being around her
Both have feelings for each other let's see when this feelings made them confess each other. 😳

Hope we get them see confess their feelings for each other soon not like in the show @ the end of the book 😆

Thanks for PM Zoya
Finally i read both the parts

Edited by vimikrao - 7 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#923

Zoya next chapter on this thread or thread no.2 ?😉

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#924

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Zoya next chapter on this thread or thread no.2 ?😉

O yeah...

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sujatha

@sujatha-4

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#925

superb update dear... Pushkar n Shravan scene was mind blowing... every scene was awesome...puskie kitne ladkyon ko pasand karta hai yaar...ladkiyon k chakkar me Shravan Ko maar dalega pagal Pushkar.

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orion23

@orion23

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#926

Originally posted by: Ivvy
Mesmerising...Complete magic and exquisite
Just loved it
And I'm so glad you did! Thank you so much Sidhi 🤗
P.S: Sorry, can't comment long (exams n assignments hai and in short am doomed😭)
That's alright, you came, that's all that matters!
All the very best love! Nail it!
Thanks for PM Zoya
Pleasure!
Love, Sidhi

@Bold Thank you so much

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orion23

@orion23

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#927

Originally posted by: BloodRune
"Chasma beech mein aayega" 🤣
That was such a Sumo thing!
Oh you bet 😆
Oh, I really enjoyed it!
I'm glad you did!
Tha balance of the "Pappi" and then the not-so-hidden feelings pouring out. I know it will take a while but I really want to see them as boyfriend and girlfriend. ❤️
Eventually, here's hoping!

@Bold Thank you so very much Rohina!

🤗

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#928

Originally posted by: swatiagarwal89
So 1st time on IF...😊
So glad you came!
U excel at writing emotions... Literally writing them...
Shukriya...
I was so lost in reading this .. didn't even realise when it ended..
Aww yey!
Sumo's dream.. to Shravan watching her changing expressions so ardently has been penned down beautifully...
Thanks love!

So they both knw what the other one feels... But even after being positive about everything.. they still want to give it time...
Yeah, apprehension thy workings are strange!

Sumo ka Sapna part seriously got me rolling... I m still laughing over the chashma beech me aayega...!!!!
Hahaha😆

The whole cover-up portions from both the sides was hilarious... Especially the way sumo fumbled for words before finally uttering Hrithik Roshan's name...
She didn't know what hit her😉

Jealousy plays the magic almost everywhere...😉
Oh hell yeah!

Shravan ki shayari again reminded of the show I cannot get over from... N d 1 u wrote was amazing.. though i had to Google certain words since I m not so well versed in urdu...😆
Aww sorry, I forgot to give translations, didn't I?

So basically this piece was again an awesome work by u... N as I ve already told u many times... I love your writings...
Shukriya dude!

I ve stopped guessing upcoming tracks in any story.. since I had tried many times before but failed miserably... So whatever u ll write to continue this relationship ka progress would be better than my imagination... So I ll patiently wait for the next update...😊
Hahahaha I like how you put it!

Seeing Alfaaz ka update meri neend urr gayi... But ironically after reading the whole thing I felt a certain SUKOON n now I can sleep peacefully...😆😆
I hope you did sleep well, and no pappi encounter disturbed you 😆

1st post to comment after almost an year... I guess it sets a record for being silent...😆
Wow! I wish I had that kind of a talent!
Lots u love
Swati

@Bold Thank you so much Swat!

You're a darling!

🤗

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: shirlys
Sooper awesome update zoya..thanq for the update.

Aww man!

Thank you so much sweets!

🤗

Pleasure was all mine!

😛

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#930

Originally posted by: bworm
O my..rhat was lovely
Wormy 🤗
Both want the same but...going slow.
Yeah, slow simmer..
Lived the concept.
Beautifully written.
Thank you so much love!
Thanks for the pm Zoya
Pleasure!

@Bold Shukriya 🤗

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