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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
'Sabab rone ka woh pooche,
Toh bas itna bata dena,
Wahan hum has nahin paate, jahan par woh nahi hote'

Too little Sumo and perhaps too late.

You didn't value him then, and your remorse is of no value now.

Usse kaun batayega ki tum roti ho, kya fark padhta hai.
Kisi ki baaton par yakin kahan hoga usse, tum ne toh uske yakin par hi vaar kiya hai.

Just make use of that technology called telephone lines girl and give him a call. . You have no idea how you are going to yearn for him going forward.

Awesome Piece Zoya, a tad too small though but perfect in itself.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
Resh
Prii aj kal slow ho gayi hai tušŸ˜†

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Unres
Zo šŸ¤—
PriišŸ¤—
Aww Inna chotu update !
Haan maine bataya tha na, yeh series ke updates chotu honge...


Kitna cute GIF! Par yeh sarcastic lag rašŸ˜†
Title šŸ‘ šŸ‘
Thank you!
Sumo ne apne fake friends ko jhaad lagayi
Party!!
"Sumo ab tumhare nakhre nahi uthane padte, tumhari zidd nahi poori karni hoti, paise kis par kharchoon?"
Bechara Shravan. He misses her so much
He does


I have always liked Choti Sumo's character .
She was mean to him at times but she also had an innocence which made you forget all her mistakes .
Word!

Nanu is ā¤ļø
Nanu is bae for life!
Dear diary


It touched my heart ..Really ā¤ļø
Beautiful dialogues !
Thank you Priii!!!


We were the very best of friends,
Or at least that's what I thought,
I don't hate you; I'm just disappointed,
You turned into everything you said you wouldn't.




Aapne yeh baat Haider Ali Khan se bulwa di!
Dil mea, hayeee!!!!
Koi itna hot kaise ho sakta haiā˜ŗļø
Length was never a problem for you . Drabble or OS, you're best in every category šŸ‘
Shukriya!
Awesome start !!!!
Loved it
I'm glad you did!!!
Don't make us wait for long 😳
I shall try!
Loads of love ā¤ļøšŸ¤—
Love back!!!
PS.- Resh I unressed it first
LMAOšŸ˜†

Prii meri jaan!
I love you!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: amlavs

Sooo beautiful...

Thank youšŸ˜›
I have read all ur stories manyyy times...but this is the first time am commenting...
Yes, I noticed!
Wat to say it's amazing as usual..
While reading I got tears in my eyes...it is very touchy...
Awww man😳
Eagerly waiting for ur next update...
Love. .,
LavSriya

@Bold Thank you so much LavSriya!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: bworm

Nice start dear. Looking forward to more.

Thank youšŸ˜›
A Different look at this beautiful friendship.
Maybe here shravan will not be too hardened and sumo more empathic towards him.
Maybe...
Excited about reading more.
Would love a pm when you update
Absolutely, done!

@Bold Thanks so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res 😳
****
Unres
First of all a very happy one year anniversary to you Zoya...šŸ¤—
Happy anniversary to you too Nik! šŸ¤—
Ranjish...It was within both of them.Sumo ko khud se, Shravan ko sab se.!!

Word!
Beautiful Title bro...ā¤ļø
Thanks bro!
Sumo do realised her mistake after her bestie left...But she did thats what matters..!!
Am sooo happy that you chose to write from this point...Now it'll define EDKV very differently in Zoya style!!😊
Aww man! Thank you😳
Shravan felt soo lonely n lost. 😭
Shravan had always pampered Sumo, fulfilled her every wish, done literally everything that was in his reach to make her happy...N now he dont know what to do without her... šŸ˜•
Yeh he's pretty lost...
Sumo is also missing him...thats new to see now!!
Hoga bhi aakhir its ZOYA's SUMO!!
Hahaha yesšŸ˜‰
Wapas aaja na yaar...This simple line line said soo much.It touched me.Beautiful one...ā¤ļø
Dil se nikla tha na iss liye...

I soo loved how you have shown Nanu worried about Shravan more than Sumo as he was alone there ,all by himself whereas Sumo had her nanu n family with her...Soo much needed...ā¤ļø
Nanu was always a darling, except for his blackmail heart attacks šŸ˜†
Shravan cried while talking to Nanu... 😭
My heart goes out to him...!!
Koi chidaane waala nahi hai par uski Sumo bhi to nahi hai... 😳
Not for very long šŸ˜‰
Shravan ki diary...Thought that she misses him...Discarded it...N then...
Diary, I miss her......Aww!!...So loved it!!..ā¤ļø
Me too!
The ending was lovely...!!
I don't hate you; I'm just disappointed,
You turned into everything you said you wouldn't.
...So true!!
Thank you!
All in all a blasting update Zoya... šŸ‘
Shukriya!
Truly Loved n enjoyed reading it immensely bro...ā¤ļø
I'm glad you did!😃
Thank you for writing it... 😊
You're welcome!
N I do want a PM...!!
Waise tan dassan waali gal nahi si par tussi specially keha si tan kar ke main mention kitta e... šŸ˜‰
Hahaha yes PM aa jayegašŸ˜›
Loads n Loads of Love n šŸ¤—
Nikka sa Nik šŸ˜†

@Bold Love back ..
Zealous si ZoyašŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: evaviego

Ranjish. Wow. That's a beautiful title. šŸ‘

Shukriya šŸ¤—

Finally Sumo stood up for their friendship. Wow. šŸ‘

But the harm has already been done. šŸ˜•

Has it?

Par sab thik bhi ho jayega . haina? 😳

Maybe... Maybe not... Who knows šŸ˜†

Naanu ki baat suno. Phone utha aur kar baat. Dont repeat the same mistake again. This is what i wanna say to Sumo.

I shall convey your message to heršŸ˜‰

Shravan. My heart goes out to you. Always.

Diary, I miss her... And my eyes just welled up reading these 4 words.

He was always so tormented... But my Shravu won't be so badly hurt.. Ever!

Chotu Sharav in London. That is something we never got to see. I will be really glad if you will explore that part too.

Ji...

aapki Writing style ki toh tareef kiye hum kabhi thakte nahi. But off late, I am blown away with the presentation as well. 😊

I'm glad you are.. This series will be presented differently than my other works...

itna chinnu sa update. Thoda aur badaa ho sakta hai na. Just thoda. šŸ˜‰šŸ˜›

I shall tryšŸ˜†

@Bold Thank you so much Eva šŸ¤—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

ranjish...i didnt even knew what that meant untill my mummaji explained to me.

she was like beta parso science ka exam tu hindi kyun padh rahi hai...
i was like mumma ek FA reh gaya thašŸ˜›
ROFL🤣
you made me lie...and stop grinning Zo di...i'm a poor child who should be studying but instead i'm doing everything except studiesšŸ˜†...but then this piece is a fair mean to kill timešŸ˜‰
Beta padhai pe hi dhaayn dijiye aapšŸ˜† Mummy ko jhoot bol rišŸ˜†

like literally Sumo is giving up her god forsake of a cool attitude and getting into the guilt ridden mode of hers...i'm impressed
Haina!!
but mera baccha..poor shravan, far seas away,,all alone 😭
its completely reasonablefor him to think he was not impoertant for Sumo, she god damn prooved it to him😭
He's a strong boy, he will be okay...
so excited to read the upturn of events in the coming days
update soon
I shall try!
love
arpita

@Bold Thanks so much Arpita!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Excellent start...

Shukriya!
Good that sumo broke her friendship with all for nothing friends of her...
Shravan's monologue really awesome..How his Mother left him, how sumo betrayed him, even he thinks his father also wrong...
He does think that way yes...
Sumo missing Shravan 😭.. Nanaji asked sumo to talk to Shravan to clear the misunderstanding which is nice...
Dairy scene was really Heart touching...
"When my own mother doesn't miss me, why would Sumo? "when your Mother left you, then there is no reason for you to believe any body but he went to sumo but she rejected their friendship..
Update soon
I shall try to..

@Bold Thank you so much!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

Amazing startšŸ‘

Thank you Parrot! 😃
I absolutely loved the concept of story starting from where shravan left for London!
I'm glad you do...
Now both sumo and shravan are lonely, she did right thing by breaking her friendship with her so called freinds!
Haina!
Would love to read how sumo apologizes to shravan and how their friendship blossoms to love!
I'd love to write...
Update soon!
Sure!

@Bold Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: --Amulya--

Awesome, I so used to wish such a closure for the teenage version, Zoyi you made my dream come true through this.

I'm glad I did Amulya!
Thanks!

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