Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 72

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Thank u so much !!🤗

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Speechless! !

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hey Zoya..yup missed out on Qasid I guess🥱..too much of travelling was involved.

I saw your detailed reply to Qatra though..i appreciate how you put just as much efforts into your replies as well.

Like I said..Loved Qatra!!

I fell terribly sick..it had to be during my annual trip to my parents ..sigh!...though I am slowly on my road to recovery now😳

.Thanks🤗..

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

First of all, sorry for not commenting since a while. 😭

Didn't unres the last res. 😕 Lara... very bad girl.

Awww... That's okay Lara🤗

Now, as I read the chapters, ask me what did I discover?

What did you discover Lara??

I discovered you're progressing as a writer with every single update.

You were a fantastic writer already when I first read your works,

and you're on your way to reach an even higher level with passing time.

OMG! Now I feel like I did manage to do something with my works! Now that this comes from you

Your dialogues give me visual now and it truly pleases my heart. 🤗

Sigh 🤗

Shraman relationship is long distance and it has a Byronic touch coated

all over it. It was a game changer moment, when they connected over the butterfly, and they realized their souls were connected.

It's got freaking soulmates written all over it!

I know right!!!

However, I can see they're in need of some more eye-opening moments, to reach the next level, love and intimacy. And I hope they get to that level when the

distance will be no more.

Yes! That is yet to be seen...

I do have a few more tricks up my devilish sleeves 😉

That Suman thinks about Shravan as her knight, is another highlighting moment.

That he'll return (whenever that will be), gives hope.

It is good to end a chapter with hope. 😃

(Now I can sleep peacefully)

Yeah.. After everyone's patience with all my cliff hangers, this was well deserved right?

Will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Me too!

Love,
Lara.

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Zoya Apii 🤗

Zainab 🤗
Finally agayi main

Yeyy!
Update was as usual superb

Thank you!
She called him and he picked up
They have sorted out MUs between them
Whatever is situation but he is there everytime
And Sumos story was touching specially last part of that story where there is hope
Loved it

I'm glad you did ❤️

Lots of Love ❤️
Zainab

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

My spot

Finally unress.
Ohhh title is so good.

Thank you!
Green monster is slowly engulfing Sumo.I just love Sumo not because she is hurting Shravan but she is so realistic here.She was rude which is definitely a bad thing but aren't we all at some point of time.And off course she is born without a filter on her mouth,there is absolutely no wall between her brain and mouth.What she thinks she speaks
I agree😆
Poor Shravan ,ek to assignments ka maara and now broken arm too and that will unknowingly fuel Sumo's green monster more.Amanda and Eric are so cute.And that Hindi part🤣.I can just imagine that.
Hahaha...
And Nanu is such a darling.Haan.
Nanu is bae!
Beautiful update Zoi.This story is so meaningful and just wow.
Thank you so much hon!

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Trust me sumo !!!!!

This Sumoness is harmful for his sanity !!😆

Plz clear the air soon! ! 😳

I I Ma'am!

For them the situation is so difficult... fear/fury of losing a friend coupled with fear/fury of losing that special someone !! Plus their vulnerabilities and tender age !! Hence,,such extreme reactions! !

Dealing with package deal is difficult! !😆

Oh yeah! Shravan koi kam package deal nahi hai 😉

Eric is one fine character! !👏

He zoned off for a moment...🤗

Ya bro! Love!

Pretty preety is her usual self! !

Yeah... No changes 😆

Love is in the air somewhere! !😳

Bekhayali main bhi khayal aapka hai !!😛

Ji bilkul, yeh kamal aapka hai😆

Ramu kaka u better behave yourself this time! ! Be a facilitator not a roda! !😲

Hahaha I have plans for the man!

Chandu halwai 🤣 Chandu ji airline pack bhi karte hain! !

Haan! Chandu halwai is very modern! 😳

Lol...Huddled in a corner. .. poor Papa! !

Papa loves son so much, kya kare!

Pout... Food...Eric...Guilt...I can very well relate !! #ItsAHostelerThing !! ❤️

Aww 🤗

Shravan didn't read the letter... why so !?!

Dard-e-dil, dard-e-jigar!

Jahan dil ke taar jude hain,,koi taar kya pade! ! #WishfulThinking! !😆

Wah wah!

Fate altering..but wait for destiny to take its course! !... such lines !!

Such line, Much wow!

Qasid ke haath unhone paigham bheja hai,

Kuch chupake Kuch sar-e-aam bheja hai !!

Dekh bhi lo ke koi sharmsaar hai bahut ,

Band karke lifafe main ek ehsaas bheja hai! !

Tabby! Kya kar dala tu ne, dil tera ho gaya!

Love!

Your couplets! Bas!

#Food #Khat #RamuKaka #Sumo #Sad #Guilt #Shravan #Envelope #Ehsaas #GenericWord !!

Bata bhi do ke lifafe main kya bheja hai! !😛 #cliffs! !

Hangers are a way of life! Pregnant pause na ho, toh maza kya!

😆

Lovely chapter! !

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

zoyi i have no words like always😆

Hahaha😳

u are marvelous i know same repeated words but what i else i can say everytime you update its not the same pattern or thing its always something different and new .

Thank you so much!

this update tells about sumo and i always wished our show had shown that part of her life but that never happened but u did it and cherrished that letter. then.shra forgiving her without reading that letter is so beautiful. the letter is most important thing in their life from show to our ff's. when shra is returning back and shraman bade ho rhee hai ..excited..

Mai bhi excited!
loads of love and hugs❤️