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Posted: 7 years ago
Zoya Apii 🤗
It is beautiful update
She sends him food prepared by her
I am waiting to see what will Shravan do??
He will read that letter or not ?
Lots of questions are in my mind

P.S. Sorry for late and chotu sa reply
I'm busy in college adjusting in new environment with new people .

Lots of love ❤️
Zainab
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Res! !

I know I haven't unresd last one yet. ..will take some more time! !
Will unres both asap !!
Thanks for pm

Even am waiting for your comments Tabby.
I Love your couplets❤️
Edited by Nik03 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
ZOyi..*hugs*
like always awesome update..
qaasid beautiful title ..
so here ramnais is qaasid till now ramnath is so good enjoying his role..
sumo sent him food made by her so good..
Eric is like pushkar love him ..
shra is still angry with sumo..
looking forward..
lots of love
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Posted: 7 years ago
Am in Deep ,I haven't unressed the earlier one yet I'm here making another res.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Am in Deep ,I haven't unressed the earlier one yet I'm here making another res.

You are only on res fest.
Join the unres one too...like me😎
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unres

Zo 🤗

Priii 🤗
Lehja ❤️
Poor Shravan he is loaded with lots of assignments and sumo must be thinking he is busy with Amanda 😕
Now he broke his arm too ...that would lead to more misunderstandings
Yes and Yes!
Amanda ne sumo ka phone uthaya

LMAO🤣 This is hilarious😆

Hahahahah Indeed😆
Jealous or not , Sumo was too rude .
Yes she was!
I'm happy Shravan gave her back .
IKR!😎
The chess part is my fav one from this update .
It's shows your depth and maturity
Aww Thanks love!
Beautifully penned 👏
Nanu is such a darling ❤️
He is
Sumo is now dying in guilt ..good for her . The girl doesn't have a filter in her mouth.
She will learn to have one!
Awesome one 👏 👏 👏
Shukriya!
Loved It and love you...you know that?
Yes, I do!
Take care Zo 🤗

@Bold Thanks love!
❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting comment 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

Mine!!

****
Unres
Zealous si Zoya🤗
Nikka sa Nik🤗
Long time bud!!
Sorry for being late...as always😕
Enough with your sorries!
Coming straight to upi...
As always I loved the tittle ❤️
Lehja...way of speaking!
N this upi deals with lehja in such a layered way.
Well done buddy!!👏
Thank you so much!!!
Lack of interaction between ShraMan...hmm!
It only inc Sumo's restlessness and jealousy and that turned into anger.
I agree here...
Shravan broke his arm...ouch!!
Poor baby.
Yeah, I wonder why I broke his arm though😆
Eric's accent laced hindi...aww!😳
He must have looked cute as always ofcourse.
He did😉
Sumo thought about her previous mistakes so decided to call him to clarify...nice Sumo!!
But again a MU.
Sometimes they are neccesory in times like this.They have their own importance.
Working on a relationship only serves to make it stronger 😛
Eric and Amanda's care for Shravan was too good.
He isnt alone afterall.
Yo!
Painkillers ...they are worst sometimes.
Cant blame Shravan here.
I don't like them but they are last resort at times...
For me both ShraMan were right at what they were feeling or saying.
Even though most of the times its Sumo who's always at fault but not fully here for me.
Word!
"I dont know tumhe takleef kis baat se hai, ye ke Am saath thi ya ye ke for a change I was enjoying my life"...I can understand where all this was coming from.So much is happening around him.
Haina!
"You think ke at the hint of someone better, at the hint of a better life, main tumko chod ke chala jaaunga"...You hit home Shravan.Thats what she is feeling right now...thats her biggest fear.N you dont have control over yourself when you feel something like this and with Sumo, she have only you. The fear here at this point is acceptable...Its natural.
She did that stupidity but why?
Its her insecurity and fear and jealousy is making the matters worst.
Sahi baat! Perfect Nik!
"Ye tumhaari soch hai Sumo. Giving up on people is something you do, not me.Tumne mujhe apni zindagi se insult kar ke nikaal diya tha."...This hurts...it does!!
As you hinted Zoya...Khalish abhi bhi baaki hai Shravan mein.
He may have forgiven Sumo but he didnt forget and forgetting is what takes time...a very longgg time.
Oh hell yeah!!!!
"You're important to me Sumo"...she is much more important for him.
Shravan ke dil mein ranjishein hai magar pyaar bhi hai kisi kone mein...Ranjishein or pyaar ki kashmakash Sumo ko takleef dengi or Shravan ko bhi.
It wont be easy for both of them.
Both are miserable.
Time is all they need...
Ramnath-Niramala...They did, they learnt, they're guilty, they're trying...But it all had already affected Shravan in the worst possible way.
But as they say, better late than never.
Yo baby!
Happy that they are atleast trying...everyone deserves a second chance.
More happy that they Both accepted their mistakes and apologized to the other coz actually they both were wrong and not just the one.
It was necessary ya.. Show mai shot kia tha dimag ka...
End Mai Ramu and Shravan ke alawa sab doodh ke dhule the
Really loved Nanu here...he is the sweetheart!!❤️
Beautifully captured the minor details while writing the whole scene btw Ramnath and Nanu.
Shukriya!
As Shravan has said about Ramnath Nimmo's decision about getting together for their son...I agree with Shravan here.
They shouldnt try just for him but if they think that there is a chance for both of them as husband and wife.
To stay apart is much more better than living together and hurting each other.
Baaki lets see what you have in your mind for them here.
Currently, I'm not sure😆
'Bacha ab or nahi sahega"...I loved it for some reasons.❤️
N I love you Zoya for always adding something like this...very simple but touching.
Thanks ya love!
"Arey Chup!!...Mera matlab waise nahi tha"...Hilarious it was!!
Loved this scenario buddy!!
Hehehe...
Loved how Ramnath informed Nirmala about Shravan.❤️
Haina!
And Sumo...It was actually a 'kaand' baby...Sumo special kaand!!
Poor soul...again guilty.
Na chahte hue bhi Shravan ko hurt karti hai phir khud hurt hoti hai!!
Jhalli!!
Poori...
Zoya my buddy...you have successfully thrown light on all four points you mentioned...
Yeyyy!
There was unpredictability...Shravan's injury, Ramnath-Nimmo milan.
There was judgemental behaviour...of Sumo.She didnt inquired but judged Shravan and Amanda just like this.Learn to have control on your tongue Sumo specially when Shravan is involved.
There was the difference of Lehja...Lehja of Sumo which worsened the situation..
There was Guilt...ye to bharpoor matra main uplabdh hai hamaari Sumo ke paas...or ab to Ramu kaka or Daalmaata ke paas bhi!!
Well, now that you put it this way, sounds good!
Zoyaaa...my magician of a writer.
I love you re.🤗
I love you too re🤗
I have said this many tims but still...Your writing does something to me...touches me deeply every damn time.Thank you...you know na why?
I'm glad it does, makes me feel like my cap has at least one feather😳
N I sooo love your gyaan...keep it coming...I need it specially!!😉
Okay beta😆
Cont soon if you can or else I'll wait eagerly.
Lots of Love and bigg beary🤗
Nikka sa Nik


Thank you lovely!
Love and hugs back!
🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Hmmm..interesting chapter.

Personally suman is getting on my nerves. She needs to grow up. Shravan is very patient with her.
Shravans equation with his parents. .was interesting insight.

Thanks for the pm.

Looking forward to the next one.

Thank you for your appreciation 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: HappyLibran1910



Nice update Zoya I hve been reading this FF regularly n keep waiting for your updates :) it gives me a feel of watching a show from HumTV .. The names of each update is so well thought 👏
Aww Really! Thank you so very much 😛
Sumo patha Nahi kiya kha Leti hai jo aisi harkate karthi hai 😕 poor Shravan now waiting to see her remorseful reaction :)
You will be surprised!

Shravan toh is ma fav so always I'm biased 😆 he is ❤️
Mine too!

@Bold Thanks hon!

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