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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Great update Zoya.

Thank you nuts!!!😛
Eric does not fail to amuse, as usual. He's a cutie, nevertheless.
Haina!
The smile is evident on Sumo and Shravan's faces. That is such a sight to imagine.
Oh you bet!
Poor Pushkar left out of the loop, but manages to get his Sherlock brain on track. Waiting for the next part.
Sorry to have kept you waiting so long!
Nuts

@Bold thank you so much hon!!!
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Khush Mizaji ka banke sabab,,
Nijaat Mayoosi ke silsilon se dedi..!
Inaayat hai ye dosti unki,
Raahat dil-e-muztar ko dedi..!
#ShraMan !!

Damn! You slayed it!!!!!!!
What a couplet 👏
I love it!!!

Shravan stood silently and Eric got the message. "Tell me when you want to, if you want to. And I'd love to speak with her someday.."
Eric is a Jaani... #Friendship goals !
He absolutely is!!!!!!!!!!😳

Raghuvansh Tiwari wouldn't be worth his salt if he didn't see where it came from. "Shravan se dosti ho gayi?"
Nanu is a Jaanu... #GuardianshipGoals !
Such a chilled out patriarch him!

"Jhoot toh aap bolo mat mujhse... Sumo se baat hui na? You'll are back at being friends?"
Pushkie is Jaan... #FrnFamGoals!
Pushkie pie is love!!!!!

Dear Dairy! ! It's always my favourite part!
Mine too!!!!

Her liberation brought me peace too. I guess that's what happen when you care for each other.
but I guess I loved her more as a friend than any thing else and truthfully speaking that is enough...
So much of depth for that age... I wonder what the future holds !!
Let's say whatever it holds, will be handled by these two well...

"I fell in love with her when we were together, then fell deeper in love with her in the years we were apart."
" Nicholas Sparks, Dear John
Dear John
I love it!

I loved the fact that he chose to stay in London...made her understand,,and she understood !!
Finding yourself is the biggest milestone in life! !
I know right! It would defy the purpose of this FF had he returned...

"To say I love you' one must know first how to say the I.'"
" Ayn Rand, The Fountainhead
Haye! Love! So apt!

"Himmat nahi hui.." Suman replied. Sums up everything!!
What if that last string breaks!! Holding on to hope !!
What ifs are the biggest questions one can ask...

"Nahi.. yeh ke library mai tere paas hone ka ehsaas hota tha, padthi thi toh lagta tha tu wahin hai..."🤗
Sumo is a Jaaneman !!
Yo!

Their conversation was so real..!
Brought back so many faded memories...some phone calls made,,some received..! At times when the known's become an unknown number !!
Won't let that happen here though...

"Tell me Sumo, kuch toh hua hai?"😲

It was as though they had never fought.
I know right!
Apologies aren't needed,,acknowledgement is !!
That was the whole issue right! Acknowledgement. That was all that was needed and never given...

Another fabulous update!
Thanks love!!!

P.S IF ditched me twice,,I hope m third time lucky!
You were!

@Bold Thank you so much Tabi!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Res

--unres--
Wow dear...it's an awesome update...🤗
Thank you so much hon!!🤗
ShraMan became friends again...
Yo!
Their happiness are written completely on their faces...
Haina!!
So happy to see them happy...
Me too!!!
Diary part was amazing...
Shukriya!
U r rocking with ur magical writing...
Aww that's sweet of you to say, thanks 🤗
Am so falling in love with ur writings...
Title 👏
Yeyy!
This 🤗 is for u...
Right back at you!! ❤️
Lots of love.,..
LavSriya

@Bold Thanks so much for your lovely words!!
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinynew

Hey Zoya!!!!I hope U remember me ??😊

Of course I do! Welcome back!!!
So finally the wait has came to an end with the update of yours...Let me tell you at the first place YOU ARE A GENIUS. ...The way you are unfolding the story ...it's just amazing...
Thank you so very much Shiny! I'm glad you love the pace!
Shravan's conversation with Eric...superb...
Bros for life!
His conversation with Pushker...was something so right and apt...
Haina!
And now coming to the my most favourite part of the story was his conversation with his diary. ...loved it to the core!!❤️
Diary is my fav bit too!
Btw I even loved his conversation with sumo...
I'm glad you did!
In the nutshell I am in love with the chapter...
Hahaha In a nutshell, that makes me very happy!
Your ff is really making me fall for Shravan more and more and obviously my adoration for shraman is just reaching heights...Thank u so much...for this wonderful chapter...
The pleasure is all mine!
Love
Shiny...
P.S. *sounding greedy* but waiting for the next update ...😳😛
I kept you waiting too long... Sowiii!!

Thank you so very much Shiny!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priety.priti

this update itself is a bliss zoya

amazing 👏

Thank you so very much Priety!!!
Means a lot to me!
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Safire

Wonderful and emotional update!

Great writing👏

Thank you so much Saf!
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ab toh unres kar de Arpi 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome
A lot happened in this one. Nice to see this phase of their life when they were kids but apart. I am so happy to see their friendship getting back on track.

Lovely update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya...🤗
Res
****
Unres
Zealous si Zoya🤗
Finally am able to unres 😕
Coming straight to the upii!! 😛

Marassim...
My interest in Urdu is increasing day by day 😳
Here you are working on the dynamics of Relations...specially in this upii!!
So the title is just perfect...Loving your titles❤️

So here Nirmala Mata didnt tried calling or meeting Shravan!!
Its better if I leave her to you Zoya 😉

I always had loved this thing in Ramnath from the very start till the end...His respect for his mentor!!
It was always there.

Eric...That inner secret 😃
I guess thats why we love Eric from the very start😛

Being a best friend has got to do with being there no matter what, support and aid. It's got to do with keeping secrets. And also not pestering the person into giving information. If Eric deems right, he will tell me....The most beautiful definition of friendship I have ever heard. 👏
True Friendship which is rare...rarest of rare!!

Oh Shravan...Please be my Friend
N am serious too 😆

Shravan and his glasses...Haaye
Prom 😕
N who knows how it feels being hurt better than Shravan!!
Slowly he is letting go of his past...Not at once but slowly❤️

Amanda's reaction 😆
Well she is somewhat like Eric!!
Or is there another inner secret Zoya?😉

I'm substance over style...Oh you surely are Shravan❤️
Mamiji...Not bad at heart though.
Her character was one of a kind...BitterSweet!!

Sumo...Ek din mein badi ho gayi!!
Even though she was that bubbly girl still but she grew up that day!

You my dear Zoya are showing us HOW ShraMan grewup...How and what made them what they were in the show.
Thank you buddy 😊

Sumo didnt want to tell Shravan about her prob...No one know him better than her!
Our selfless Sumo ❤️

Shravan smiling as he stood at his room's window, placing a palm on the glass as if trying to feel the downpour....
Pata hai na Zoya kya yaad aa gaya?
Haaye ❤️

Self dependent Shravan...An answer to Sumo's baseless insult after marrige in the show!!
Bulls**t it was!!


when God gives you more than you need, donate. One smile brought on a face owing to something you did, makes life worthwhile... 👏
It gives you inner peace...It makes you content and it makes you human!!
Proud of Shravan n you Zoya 🤗

Sumo's declaration...Aww
How much I loved it!!
Both have feelings deep down, aware too but dont want to accept !!
N am ready...Ok eager for that surprise Zoya 😳
It warmed the corners of his heart that were long frozen...It gives so many feels ❤️ ❤️
He is healing...his broken heart is healing...Slowly!!

Chup kar lamboo! Dimag hamesha se tha, bas...N I completed it in my mind like - Ghutno mein tha coz dil ghutno ke neeche hai na 😆

ERIC!!
What had happened?? 😲
Heart ripped out n crushed 😲

But they would ride this through. No matter what it was, they would handle it....#FriendshipGoals
He wasn't going to lose any more people, he wouldn't let fate have its way again...A persom once hurt comes out way much stronger than before!!

N Shravan is much more...A true n devoted friend, a hurted soul but a pure hearted soul.
He'll help Eric come out of this mess.

I dont this this is related to Amanda...It seems much more serious...A mild guess though 😛

Well no idea about Nimmo's absence n not interested much in her though 😛
But is there anything more to it than it seems??

Next with Diary Scene
Well fav part ka to ab tak pata chal gaya hoga na Zoya? 😆
N I want pm...Ok?

Loved it Zoya...The Whole❤️
Had seen immense growth of ShraMan as individual , as friends...Of others too.!!
And mainly of RELATIONS here ❤️

Am really really eager now.
N yess!!
Even though I had tried hard, like really hard to keep it short n I dont know how long it is now??😆

Thanks for the pm??
No!!
Do pm me always...Can say you this..right ?

Love you buddy 🤗
Nikka sa Nik

P.S Ignore the typos !!😛
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Zoya Apii 🤗
Amazing update as usual
Shramans friendship is great they share their happiness pain and help each other
I liked what Shravan told Am about friendship
And I think Eric likes Amanda
I will wait for next update

Lots of love ❤️

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