Alfaaz - A ShraMan FF - Now Moved to Wattpad - Page 41

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Awesomeee

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Awesome update as usual Zoya!!...I am definitely gonna go down saying that some day!!...same dialogue, with no alteration😃

Hahaha... Thank you Reshma! Means a lot to me!

From Shravan's blinding grin to Sumo's garden sit in, everything shrieked of pure bliss. From the appeasement at being asked for forgiveness from your wrong doer to the abatement at being forgiven for your misdeed, relief was the feel around this chapter.

That's what I was going for and am I glad you caught it...!

Eric as usual being equally concerned of Shravan's smiles as he was connected to his gloom, made me feel very complacent. His presence was now as soothing as his purpose.

I know right!

Pushkar the Poirot smelt that what others couldn't, the early blooming of a very strong ardour between the two very important people in his life. He's been a favourite of mine always.

Makes two!

Nanu and his not so nano nazar, in youth we learn, in age we understand.

Agreed!

The Dear diary entry marked the exit of Shravan's restlessness.

For the moment it sure did...

What I absolutely loved was Shravan's decision of staying back in London. He had found himself there, he needed to make a fine discovery out of it. He owed that to himself, to the years that he spent in the misery of a low self esteem.

I'm happy we are on the same page!

Now that they had found each other again, it was only a matter of time before they would find their dreams.

WORD!!!!

'Tum mil gaye ho toh ab aaina bhi dekhenge.

Abhi Abhi toh nigahon mein roshni hui hai'

Wah wah! Kya baat bol di!

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Amazing!! hamesha ki tarah I loved it so much

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Jahanpanah !! 😊

Deepti!😃

Pehle to sorry I was out and I was still reading bit n parts but finally aaj shaanti se I read the entire update so my comment is here a the tail end.

That's alright hon, no issues!

You have maintained the cuteness level of these two so so well.

Thank you...😛

Its endearing to read the conversation and although the mind tries to find hints of love in there it is made to realize these are 16/17 year old, so there is this longing but its more in finding the comfort back in their friendship which they got back.

Haina! It's insanely important for them to have the trust back!

And its the beauty of friendship , the easiest relation to not have knots even after it is reinforced.

I have to agree ...

The happiness in both their days is shows so simplistically.

Yo!

Pushkar the lawyer !! awesome.

Haina!

Will wait for the next one.

Sorry to have kept you waiting so long!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

This story is sheer love. ❤️

Mrinaaa🤗 So good to see you!!!

Thank you so much!

Every diary entry was so emotional that I cried. 😭

Aww... Sowii!

Continue soon and do PM me. 🤗

Sorry for being late and PM has been sent😃

~ Mrina <3

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Unresd at 47!

Phew! !

Crazy IF!

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

"Let's just say, I got my friend back."

"Duh! I never left you." 😃
"friend with a sumo wrestler "and" She will beat you to a pulp " really Eric is funny 😃
Eric is Shravan's dad 😃

You just dad zoned him😆

Eric really understood people very well and that's why he didn't ask any further questions to Shravan..

Haina!
Both Shravan and sumo are very happy and that didn't go down well with others 😃 par unn logo ko kya patah ye dono kyun khush hain 😉
Chuppe rustom!

Nanaji knows both sumo and Shravan in and out, so very quickly realised why sumo was happy..
"That's it! I'm Sherlock frigging Holmes!" 😃 Pushkar's Lawyer brain..
Bromance 😃

I loved their bond! It was so pure!
Wonderful diary scene again 👏 Now I know why Shravan doesn't want to come back as he wants to make his father, nanu, sumo proud of his achivements and about love, then as he said it is more as a friend that he loves her. .

Yo bro!
"Tere mai sirf ek manufacturing defect hai, mai toh poori defected hoon." 😃
Sumo padhne jati hain library Main 😃 Shravan ye sunkar pagal hogaya hoga 😃
Very nice Phone convo in the end..

Thank you!
Thanks for pm
You're welcome!
Love
Smita

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Zoya Apii 🤗
Chotu ❤️

I'm so happy to see you 🤗

Firstly sorry for late reply *kaan pakad ke Solly*

Aww... Koi baat nahi.. It's cool!

I know you had exams!
Aap toh magician ho

Haye sacchi?😳
Such an amazing writer you are 👏
Bas itta hi bolungi warna Nazar lag jayegi

Hahaha! My mom would say something similar😆

Thank you ji!
Coming to updates they are mind blowing and specially lastest one their connvo
They have comfort and understanding between them which makes their friendship more strong
Haina! Ekdam cute!

Appi I'm loving titles they are apt

Yeyy! Thank you!
Having a true friend is a blessing coz we can share our pain happiness everything with them.
*Claps* for updates

Shukriya🤗


Lots of Love ❤️
Zainab

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Pehle to kan pakad ke sorry 😉 I m out of country kya Karon time nehin mil raha. 😭 to read updates.
Arey wah!

In that case you should enjoy your vacation! Yeh sab can wait!
Eric was nice guy the way he reacted he came to know Shravan has a friend other than him that too girl friend his reaction was worth watchable 😆 Shravan was obvious with his behaviour he was on cloud nine after his conversation with Sumo last night, he felt everything beautiful around him just in a day.

I know right! Some bond there!

Wah re wah kya jadoo hai Sumo Ke pyaar ka 😆 their convo was much awaited Sumo wanted to tell something to him but didn't tell waiting for right time to tell. Kahin usse bhi pyaar nehin huwa 😉
LOL! Who knows😆
Thanks for PM Zoya 👏
You're welcome love!
Vinu

Originally posted by: Nik03

Finally Unressed @ pg
wait a min...Konsa pg no tha? 😕
😆
Ok Ok...@ Pg 48
🤗 🤗