A Poison Tree - Shravan revisited

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Folks,

It's been a while I've been thinking of this.

It's actually my Favourite Poem. Nith was supposed to do a full length analysis of this in context of Shravan but she was quite busy to implement.

I associate this poem with Shravan to the T, cause had the show not ended, This is exactly what Shravan would have done.

Vengeance. That would have been his weapon of choice. Give it a read, Sir William Blake indeed knew a thing or two about foes and vengeance.
Think Ramnath, Kamini, Aditya, Nirmala and Suman. You'll know who's the friend and who's the foe.





An angsty drabble will follow later next week. I just feel that Shravan's character by the end was butchered beyond recognition. Had his character developed as he actually was, "Badla" is what we would have gotten. The wronged was shown wrong, but I still find it difficult to accept. He was wronged and a comeback much like a phoenix was what I had expected. So this one is a re-visitation of who Shravan Malhotra really was!


Do let me know if your thoughts mirror mine.

Cheers!

Zoya

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Safire thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Absolutely in concurrence with you!!!
Expecting eagerly your write-up...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh absolutely mirror your thoughts Zoya. ..wanted Shravan to come out of this much stronger. ...and with no bitterness. ...zilch. ..
Reminds me of something I read. ..and then it stayed with me since ..
'Maybe the journey wasn't so much about becoming anything,
Maybe it's about unbecoming everything that isn't really you..
So you can be who you were meant to be in the first place'

I would have loved to see him make a comeback as a top lawyer...highly successful. ..and very much in control of his surrounding.

Did I write a mini OS on that😆...you only have yourself and the prospect of a write up promised to blame Zoya😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is one of my favourite poems and quite a memorable one too😳
And it does fit shravan like it was written for him.
Will be waiting for the drabble😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yeah Shravan was half done in the end. He could jever go completely bad and then redeem, nor could he simply phase out of it all just for himself and rebuild by simply rejecting the weeds.
Will eargerly wait for your writeup.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Safire

Absolutely in concurrence with you!!!

Expecting eagerly your write-up...

Saf🤗
How have you been buddy?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Oh absolutely mirror your thoughts Zoya. ..wanted Shravan to come out of this much stronger. ...and with no bitterness. ...zilch. ..

I know right! CVs made a mockery out of him..
Reminds me of something I read. ..and then it stayed with me since ..
'Maybe the journey wasn't so much about becoming anything,
Maybe it's about unbecoming everything that isn't really you..
So you can be who you were meant to be in the first place'
@Bold Whoa👏 That's damn deep! Makes so much sense...
I would have loved to see him make a comeback as a top lawyer...highly successful. ..and very much in control of his surrounding.
Makes two! I hated the drunkard looser...
Did I write a mini OS on that😆...
Nah, you wrote a very meaningful few lines! I wound't mind an OS in all honesty😉
you only have yourself and the prospect of a write up promised to blame Zoya😃
Hahaha Itna hopes high na rakho...

@Bold Your views are pretty profound dude!
I like!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perpetuity

This is one of my favourite poems and quite a memorable one too😳

Had you said this earlier, I wouldn't have believed.. But now, having read your poems, I can totally fathom this to be your top picks!
Post your works Resh! Please!
And it does fit shravan like it was written for him.
Indeed was!
Will be waiting for the drabble😳
Next Friday...

Resh🤗
Post your writings!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

Yeah Shravan was half done in the end. He could jever go completely bad and then redeem, nor could he simply phase out of it all just for himself and rebuild by simply rejecting the weeds.

Word! There was so much that could have been done but they choose the usual road, ML is always wrong Sigh..
Will eargerly wait for your writeup.😊
Oops.. Kuch zyada hi buzz kar diya maine😆

@Bold thanks for sharing your thoughts!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So apt for Shravan 👍🏼
He had bottled his emotions for too long
Like a volcano he would erupt sooner or later

Angsty Drabble 🤪
Waiting

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