A Poison Tree - Shravan revisited - Page 2

Originally posted by: sapphire3

So apt for Shravan 👍🏼
He had bottled his emotions for too long
Like a volcano he would erupt sooner or later
I know right! Jwalamukhi😆
Angsty Drabble 🤪

Abhi se pagal ho rahi hai tu...
Waiting

Originally posted by: orion23

Saf🤗

How have you been buddy?

Originally posted by: Safire

Feeling young because of all you cuties!!!

Originally posted by: orion23

Resh🤗

Post your writings!!

🤗

What a beautiful poem Zoya. Read it first time now but can easily relate to Shravan.

sumo and pushkar characters are also butchered very badly... I couldn't quite connect with sumo's character after accident track when she started her Self Respect lecture.. That is why after PCT fiasco when she was crying in rain I couldn't quite sympathaze with her.. Yes Shravan character was destroyed mercilessly by idiot cvs 😡.. . The "SAB KUCH" and bedroom dialogue was as disgusting as it can be... Really want to give some of Shravan's sassy thappad to those cvs 😡

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Oh absolutely mirror your thoughts Zoya. ..wanted Shravan to come out of this much stronger. ...and with no bitterness. ...zilch. ..

Reminds me of something I read. ..and then it stayed with me since ..

'Maybe the journey wasn't so much about becoming anything,

Maybe it's about unbecoming everything that isn't really you..

So you can be who you were meant to be in the first place'

I would have loved to see him make a comeback as a top lawyer...highly successful. ..and very much in control of his surrounding.

Did I write a mini OS on that😆...you only have yourself and the prospect of a write up promised to blame Zoya😃

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

🤗

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

sumo and pushkar characters are also butchered very badly... I couldn't quite connect with sumo's character after accident track when she started her Self Respect lecture.. That is why after PCT fiasco when she was crying in rain I couldn't quite sympathaze with her.. Yes Shravan character was destroyed mercilessly by idiot cvs 😡.. . The "SAB KUCH" and bedroom dialogue was as disgusting as it can be... Really want to give some of Shravan's sassy thappad to those cvs 😡

Reading it for the first time n its so so soo beautiful Zoya...Loved it..❤️
Soo aptly describes Shravan.

A sense of humor that lights up a room
An attitude to burn down a house
A deep soul to drawn even the best swimmers
Read these lines somewhere n Shravan came in my mind instantly.

The most soulful character I have ever seen...❤️ ❤️

Thanks for sharing Zoya... 😊
N waiting for your writeup...