SHRAMAN SS - DIl Sambhal jaa zara last part updated on pg 20 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Beautiful OS..One of my fav episode just before that nirmala fiasco nd the songs are so apt..

Confession on Tiwari killa's terrace.. just Loved it

Shayar shravan is amazing..

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

This is my 200th post. I wanted this to be special and it cant be more special than commenting on this beautiful OS.

Aww so sweet of you, you gave your spl comment on my OS thank u dear 😃

This is awesome, amazing, perfect, superb...I'm just out of words.😳

This is just soo nice.

I always love this episode.

The way he says "AAJ MUJHE PHIR SE PYAAR HO GAYA HAI SUMO, TUMSE" looking at the moon... I love him.❤️

its one of my fav too the way he says aww i cant stop my ❤️ for falling for him

The way Shravan was talking to himself about how he tried to forget her and failed pathetically is just awesome. And he was questioning the moon and took his permission. It cant be anymore cuter.

At the same time, she was talking to the moon and speaking her heart out how much she loves him.

well its my pov ke whenever we are alone we can speak heart out no boundaries no restrictions its just pure you and for this discussion who will be the bestest buddy other than that pure moon☺️

And and and he came to propose her.

The proposal is so perfect. who can say no for such a cute proposal.

And finally their kiss was cherry on the cake.😳

thank you so much i am really very bad in romance 😳, glad you liked that

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT.👍🏼

INFACT YOU MADE MY DAY PRITI.😊

OMG really glad 😊

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS.

its my pleasure 😃

LOVE❤️

Madhu

Originally posted by: Safire

Awesome writing!!

But ek objection My Lord!!!(Government Servant hone ke vaasthe)😉

Please don't get offended, this is just for fun!!!!

Originally posted by: vimikrao

No tamatar no ande dear yeh tune kitni ache si likhi...They could have turned the story anywhere like this in the show...but girls u did good job...well done girl...

Happy Valentine's Day girl but belated & thanks for PM

Vinu

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Tumhe tamatar aur joote chahiye??Aur woh bhi iske liye??😳
Yaar mere pass xtra joote nahi hai aur tamatar bhi khatam ho gaye hai ghar ke...Market jaana padega laane...
Issiliye u get...👏

haha tamatar khatam ho gaye 😆 thank you mein bach gayi 😳

This was trully awesome yaar...
Loved it to the core...
Songs choice👍🏼👍🏼

Dialogues ka kya batau...Loved every dialogue and Shravan's thought...
Awesome penning down bae..!!!

song sunate sunate idea aaya aur likh diya, was not sure abt dialogues...manat aal ani lihun takal 😳

Government office🤣 i was like kuch vi..ainvayi..🤣

i was laughing while writing this 🤣 how this type of thing can come in my mind lekin meri bimari hai mein jyada der serious nahi rah sakati 😆

All in all loved it wholly...
Super se bohot bohot uppar wala OS...!!!

thank you 😃

Lots of hugs and Silk bubblies to u..Aur woh nayi vaali Silk oreo bahi...😳
need to try it 😳 seems its yummy 😉

Luv ya...!!
ANU😳

Originally posted by: Tiii28

You are such great writer
Very well done
Such a nice os on shravan
All emotions are beautifully expressed
Shraman and their confession in a beautiful way
Again a very nice update 😊

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww this is sooo beautiful cute sweet lovely dear

Love,

Spandana

Originally posted by: Edkvforever

Beautiful OS

Gajab ki shayri madam,

Mind blowing Confession

Loved it

Originally posted by: arshuaar

awesome...
beautifully penned...
Shraman...
loved it...
shayari mind blowing...

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Too good...👏👏

Loved it❤️

The shayari lol!!!🤣

Perfect confession on perfect moment

This couldn't be better girl

And your song selection omg!! That's my favo👍🏼

And the end😳 I am a tomato right now

Seriously loved it to bits

Please write more priti. ..you're such a wonderful writer...

Humein apni kala se vanchit mat rakho🤣

Dolly😃