SHRAMAN SS - DIl Sambhal jaa zara last part updated on pg 20

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Tumhe tamatar aur joote chahiye??Aur woh bhi iske liye??😳
Yaar mere pass xtra joote nahi hai aur tamatar bhi khatam ho gaye hai ghar ke...Market jaana padega laane...
Issiliye u get...👏
This was trully awesome yaar...
Loved it to the core...
Songs choice👍🏼👍🏼
Dialogues ka kya batau...Loved every dialogue and Shravan's thought...
Awesome penning down bae..!!!
Government office🤣 i was like kuch vi..ainvayi..🤣
All in all loved it wholly...
Super se bohot bohot uppar wala OS...!!!
Lots of hugs and Silk bubblies to u..Aur woh nayi vaali Silk oreo bahi...😳
Luv ya...!!
ANU😳

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

You are such great writer
Very well done
Such a nice os on shravan
All emotions are beautifully expressed
Shraman and their confession in a beautiful way
Again a very nice update 😊

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Awww this is sooo beautiful cute sweet lovely dear

Love,

Spandana

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deepoceaan

@deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS

Gajab ki shayri madam,

Mind blowing Confession

Loved it

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

awesome...
beautifully penned...
Shraman...
loved it...
shayari mind blowing...

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Too good...👏👏

Loved it❤️

The shayari lol!!!🤣

Perfect confession on perfect moment

This couldn't be better girl

And your song selection omg!! That's my favo👍🏼

And the end😳 I am a tomato right now

Seriously loved it to bits

Please write more priti. ..you're such a wonderful writer...

Humein apni kala se vanchit mat rakho🤣

Dolly😃

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EmeraldStar

@EmeraldStar

Achiever

+ 13

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Beautifully narrated... 👏

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Kaash kuch aisa Mil jaata, ,hamey to mili bun maata! Khair!

It's a beautiful one... perfect song selection !

Terrace...moon n love birds!...loved this two way confession! 😉

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Arpi1234
Such a lovely OS 👏
Shravan and sumo's confession mindblowing

Thank you 😊

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Nik03
Res 😊
****
Unres
Hey buddy...!!
Awesome piece of writing dear... 👏
Shravan's confession ,wait ,longing in hus own words...❤️
Red rose... 😳
What a lovely confession bud... 👏
Sumo's I Love You was what he wanted to hear for 10 long years...n Sumo finally confessed giving him that much needed assurance n happiness... 😳 ❤️

Teri yaadon ne government office bana rakha tha dil ko...
Na koi baat suta tha na koi kaam karta tha... 😆
Loved it!!

Beautiful songs...n perfect ending bud... 👏
Loved it!
Thanks for the pm n keep these coming 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

thank you so much dear, glad you liked my first ever attempt of shayari's and songs i have selected 😃, he kept so many emotions inside his heart for 10 yrs 😳

love to u too 🤗

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