SHRAMAN SS - DIl Sambhal jaa zara last part updated on pg 20 - Page 17

Originally posted by: priety.priti

are nahi baba abhi nahi pahale soulmates me shraman ki shadi kara du yaar pm bhi aa rahe hai aur wattapad pe kitane sare comments aur massages bhi 😔aur waise bhi yeh wala update dhamkedar hoga aur bada bhi toh usamehi thoda time lagega usake bad esaka epilogue😳

Originally posted by: Tinna28

Bilkul sahiii aa rahe hai aapko msg 😆
Once my exams will finish na
Mein aapko tang kardungi update ke liye 😆😆ki jaldi do
Itna late kar diya soulmate 😉
Chalo koi nahi , koi toh update de rahe hoh aap

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Haha my bholi bhali si tii baby tumane shayad thik se padha nahi meine kaha tumhare update ke sath mein apana update dungi😉

Originally posted by: sweksha

superb dear ...their conversation was well planned...shravan's dialogue was so emotional...feeling satisfied with this end...please give us a epilogue with shraman's scene please...there is no shraman scene ...awesome update thanks for pm dear

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww this is such A Beautiful Heart-touching Masterpiece on Our Beautiful Classic EDKV...you have portrayed all feelings relationships so amazingly fab just loveee it dear...Thank you so much hun for such a wonderful story...If u don't mind please write an epilogue like ShraMan' life in London & also ShraMan reuniting their Families in India...Thank u!!

Congratz on your 1000th post dear!!

Lots of love hugs,

Spandana

Originally posted by: Safire

Nicely penned!!

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Goldie ki golden update !!

yup golden update ke kuchh spl chahiye na toh bas yeh save karke rakha tha 😉

Jaane kitne aankhon mein aansu hain,,

Jo update ko padke mile hain..! 😭

ohh tabby sorry dear etane asu dene ke liye i was laso in tears while writing this 😭

The trio scene was uff !!

Song selection perfect!!

Too overwhelming! !

thank you so much glad you like song and trio scene 😃 it was always exhalarating to hear such things from you hon

This story can have a season 2!!😳

season 2 nahi pata yaar epilogue soch rahi hu abhi toh😳

Originally posted by: HappyLibran1910

Your ending it :(( it was a very beautiful narration Priti 😳 you covered so many aspects of the characterization 👍🏼

Hope you come up with more 😳

Mayuri

Originally posted by: vimikrao

My pretty Priti.😛

What an ending amazing girl but only my complaint is less Shraman scenes in the last chapter.😲

Only Ramnath & Nirmala confession, Shravan's delimma & his angerness & outburst & his forgiveness to his parents that too only Sumo asked for him.😒

Epilogue hai kya agar hai toh sir Shraman scene pls, waiting

Thanks for PM

Vinu❤️