ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102)

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Yup i was.
Had a long day at school and opened IF as soon as I came home for some sukoon.
And yeah I don't really like sad stuffs but I don't really mind if it's Shraman and this one is really special.

Madhu 🤗
Thanks bro and ShraMan are indeed special ❤️

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
My god! Phenomenal! I have only felt this while reading A. Hajnal. You wrote it so beautifully, Shravan's plight, see I am out of words! Please do update soon. And next time a pm please.

Sanjh ! This is like the biggest compliment ever ! A.Hajnal is my fave I don't think I can ever write like her but thank you so much for this.

I am going to Buddy you 😃

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Dolly Chouhan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Wow!!

That was beautifully penned👏👏👏

Emotional again😭😭😭

I could really feel the pain

He was guilty

And that humorless laugh made my heart stop for a moment

Too good seriously don't have words for it...not able to express myself at the moment...👏👏

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Awesome chapter... Really emotional..

So happy that shraman have decided to stay cordial for their family..

Next chapter looks so interesting.. Super excited for it

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Arpi1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Lovely update...
I hope Sumo also realise her mistakes because mostly she is more at fault in their relationship

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

beautiful.. I am amazed and really really .. 👏

wish this ever ever happened. best friends hain dono inspite of all the hatred.. kabhi to laga hoga ki mu khol ke kuch keh dein.. kuch aisa jo dil ko chubhe... jo naya conversation start kare even if it was a fight..

wonderful thought process laid down by you here and wonderfully written as well

winner for me - He always belonged to his demons, which got the best of him.

👏

I am running out of emoticons in my head to put here.

disclaimer for next chapter is intriguing enough for me to comeback here and pester you for updating like abhi ke abhi..

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Wiccamaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

👏👏👏behtrareen... khubsurat... beinteha mohabaat ... ye fikr ye dard... amazing 👏👏

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

it very emotional scene between Shraman

Whatever the reason Shravan wants to give one chance for this relationship with his Sumo...

Nice update

Vinu

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Sanjh ! This is like the biggest compliment ever ! A.Hajnal is my fave I don't think I can ever write like her but thank you so much for this.

I am going to Buddy you 😃

Mine too! A.Hajnal is phenomenal, I have never seen anyone understood Shravan's turmoil perfectly except for her!, but after reading yours my god! You two are my recent favourites! So many to learn from you two!

Already accepted! Thanx for sending the req. 🤗

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
In just one week, he looked drained out, she drained him out and this marriage was the cause of his unhappiness.🥺


He always belonged to his demons, which got the best of him. #unfortunately


as she tried to calm herself, tightening her shawl around, protecting herself from the cold and he realised... from him. #breakingpoint


"I am merely trying to figure out what is my wife doing in the middle of the night, all alone in the cold."He asked this time, his voice calming a notch down, his eyes softer.🤗


Why do you even care? As you said nobody wants me." She said nonchalantly looking at him in the eyes, she was thrown aback by the pain in his eyes and the incredible amount of it. She had touched a sensible chord. #pain


"Mujhe laga tum chali gaye." #storyOfMyLife


Enough of these dramas! They would sort it out like adults.#Sigh


Deal?" He forwaded his hand towards her. #hope


in our room #EffortlesslyYours


Ye jo bhi hai, jaisa bhi hai, humara rishta hai and I don't want to make it a public display to the vultures out there." #AllForMyself


"The same applies to you Mr. Malhotra. Waise to mujhe koi khaas parwa nahi lekin agli baar tumne gharwalon ke samne ya kisi nokar ke samne sharab pee, then mind it Shravan, you'll think twice before touching a bottle in your life." #aww #care #sumoness


You shouldn't underestimate me, Mrs Malhotra."☺️not that we do Mr. Malhotra!


She drifted to these thoughts in mind, a small smile on her face... #peace #RightfulPlace


After all this was his life's case and it could take as many hearings she wanted, he was adamant to win this one. He wouldn't let her go. Not this time. He slowly enlaced his fingers with her, this was his promise to her.#ItsWorthIt


After reading several pieces about Sumo...her predicament...her fear...her desires...her insecurities,,its my favourite one! !I was never so moved.! This one touches the right chords in right proportion..! She has her share of mistakes but none of them acted as obstacles in relating to her..!

Absolutely stunning!
Ab to chalakne hain jaam,,inki baaton ke naam!😳

You should get the award of the best commenter ❤️
You just made my day I have a big grin on my face and my family must think that bacchi pagal hogayi hai 😆 I loved your reaction to every line

And calling this your favorite on Sumo just come here bro 🤗

By the way what do I call you ? 😛

Thank youuu 😃

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