ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Oh my god!!

That was soo emotional😭😭😭

You penned his emotions sooo beautifully. ..👏👏👏

Completely stuck to it...

Please try to update soon😃

Rona thoda zaroori hai 😆
Shukriya Dolly ;)
And the update is here

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hey Sal,
Just got to know that your name is Saleha in the comments but I'll call you Sal as some does. I don't know how I missed this one.

Excellent write-up. You described Shravan's plight so beautifully, we all felt his pain. Kudos to you. Shravan is a very complex character yet you made his emotions simply out for us to feel. He's feeling mad but yet guilty, he's feeling victorious yet defeated and you described it really well. Waiting for the next update. Thanks.

Lubna.

Hey Lubna, yes some people call me like that 😆
I am glad you people liked it because he is not an easy character to understand.

Much love ;)

Originally posted by: anum20jamali

Hi Saleha!!

Remember me? I had asked about a story based on d track dat Namik had mentioned in his periscope chat? D 1 Wer he will go i nto severe depression after knowing his dad's truth..U had told u r gonna write a story on it in Feb? Is dis d same story? Thank u so much, I was so eagerly waiting for it. And u hv written it so marvellously. Plz continue soon😊

Of course I remember you, yes it's based on the track. I hope I am able to write what you people want to read !
Thanks !

Res 😊
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Unres
Mind blowing update dear... 👏
You are too good at writing emotional stuffs... 👏

Sumo in her subconcious was seeking comfort in Shravan's arms... 😳 ❤️
This one week drained out Shravan completely... 😕
Sumo's painful thoughtprocess is written beautifully dear...so loved it!!
He always belonged to his demons, which got the best of him....❤️
It applies to both of them!!

Shravan is right...Sumo is trying to protect herself from this Shravan which she wasnt familarised with...This Shravan is a stranger to her...!!
Cold n emotionless Sumo... 🥺

Both didnt want to accept openly but it was pure love n care towards each other that they were hiding behind their so called deal!!

Finally cordial relationship for now atleast... 😛
You just slayed it in expressing their pain, guilt, agony,anger... 👏
Loved it immensely...❤️
Exited for the next part...cont soon

Thanks for the pm buddy 😊
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Thankyou so much for the pm .I've read before i received it.😉

Superb update!!!

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Thankyou so much for the pm .I've read before i received it.😉

Coming to this chapter, it's AWESOME.

You slayed it.

It's really emotional.

His care, concern for her...loved it.

Broken hearts need time to heal.

Hope they mend their relationship soon.

And I guess alcohol is a catalyst here. Hope drunk Sumo spills her feelings for him.

Good that they decided to be cordial atleast for their family.

All in all its superb and I loved it.

Update soon and a big hug for the pm.

Love

Madhu

Were you lurking around ? 😉
Indeed broken hearts need time to heal...
Well let's wait for the next chapter 😉

A big hug for this comment even though I know you don't really read sad stories 🤗

Originally posted by: Safire

Superb update!!!

Looking at the disclaimer for the next update,I am sure I will not be having sleeps till next update...

No do sleep, the next chapter will leave you sleepless I think 😉

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Were you lurking around ? 😉
Indeed broken hearts need time to heal...
Well let's wait for the next chapter 😉

A big hug for this comment even though I know you don't really read sad stories 🤗