ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Wow!!

That was beautifully penned👏👏👏

Emotional again😭😭😭

I could really feel the pain

He was guilty

And that humorless laugh made my heart stop for a moment

Too good seriously don't have words for it...not able to express myself at the moment...👏👏

Hey Dolly glad that I was able to move you 😊
I could imagine Sumo having such a moment.
Thank youfor commenting ⭐️

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Awesome chapter... Really emotional..

So happy that shramanhave decided to stay cordial for their family..

Next chapter looks so interesting.. Super excited for it

Thank you and you'll get a pm for the next update as you asked for 😛

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Lovely update...
I hope Sumo also realise her mistakes because mostly she is more at fault in their relationship

She will it's a matter of time 😉

Originally posted by: deltadawn

beautiful.. I am amazed and really really ..👏

wish this ever ever happened. best friends hain dono inspite of all the hatred.. kabhi to laga hoga ki mu khol ke kuch keh dein.. kuch aisa jo dil ko chubhe... jo naya conversation start kare even if it was a fight..

wonderful thought process laid down by you here and wonderfully written as well

winner for me -He always belonged to his demons, which got the best of him.

👏

I am running out of emoticons in my head to put here.

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Deepti you always leave me with a smile on my face. I am glad that you loved that line .
Everyone loved the disclaimer by the looks of it 😆
Thanks it means a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

👏👏👏behtrareen... khubsurat... beintehamohabaat... ye fikrye dard... amazing👏👏

Wah wah kya baat hai 😆

Originally posted by: vimikrao

it very emotional scene between Shraman

Whatever the reason Shravan wants to give one chance for this relationship with his Sumo...

Nice update

Vinu

He can't let her go.
Thanks Vinu 😛

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Mine too! A.Hajnal is phenomenal, I have never seen anyone understood Shravan's turmoil perfectly except for her!, but after reading yours my god! You two are my recent favourites! So many to learn from you two!

Already accepted! Thanx for sending the req. 🤗

The way she writes Shravan is out of the world! 😳 Man you are just too nice but I'll take it anyway 😆
Much Love 🤗

Wah ! wah ! that kicking him was 😆 but the fact that they both care for each other no matter what is not hidden .. though they are poor with words ... Sumo's pov & her thoughts was great .. whatever she was feeling but down there she had hope .. & now even Shravan realised that he can't make their marriage suffer coz of world .. Their bickering was 👏 they being like old shraman , fighting with haq ..

hey you slay me, you really do 👏