ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102) - Page 20

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Their love is the kind of love where you know you are about fall, despite everything you go ahead and take the plunge in the hope that the other will be there to save you from drowning...this is where previous chap ended...or should i say,,this is the everything about the present update! !

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">In the quest of creating a man, he had killed the child inside him and as much as he tried he couldn't bring him back... so,the truth finally dawned upon... this is Ramnath Malhotra from post Urvashi Fiasco...who could see through the acts of his son and was apprehensive of his own creation..!</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">#ChildhoodLost #NotTheInnocence </font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">fingers which were rubbing soothing circles in the back of his hands, writing her name into his skin...Yeh moh moh ke dhaage,,,Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe..!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">His fingers traced the soft skin of her cheeks, he felt the need to assure his heart that she was really here, with him...Yeh moh moh ke dhaage,,Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe..!</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Sometimes, he felt that she had a little bit of him inside of her and it made him think that perhaps they were not that different... they are not... #Vulnerability !</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">He could openly admire her. She was here with him, for him...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">#BeautifulMorningRoutine ..!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Emerald earrings, small and delicate yet they shone under the light."They made me think about you."Wortha thousand emeralds !!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">So she settled for his hand and gave it a little squeeze... yeh moh moh ke dhaage..,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"Aapne ghar ? Ye ghar tumhara nahi hai kya ?" He looked almost hurt... kya banda hai ye! !</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"Chalo." He interwined their fingers together... Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe..!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"Tumhe kabhi bhi kisi cheez ke bare main baat karna ho to main hoon. Jab tumhara dil chahe, to bula lena, main poch jaon gi.".. call it a woman's intuition..!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">"But she didn't take it, she told me that you would find your way back to her, but I proved her wrong."... she will find her way back to him this time..!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Ramnath-Shravan confrontation was everything I have ever imagined !! It cannot trust me cannot be written in a better way..!! I could visualise it like a reel play...!! 👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">True to their characters! !</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Take a bow !!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">It might seem Ramnath was late,,no doubt he was... but it's never too late to make amends..!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Shadows of past keep following you... there is no escape !! Had he developed fondness for his present illusionary life,,it would have been more painful !!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#333333">The last part! ! There was vulnerability,, there was dread,, there was pain,,..but there was determination and there was love...!!</font>
Darkness engulfed him as oxygen left his body... nervous-breakdown😲
This is the sound of heartbreak, it's silent... this line can kill...!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Fabulous piece..!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">P.S ..."and when all the wars are over, a butterfly will still be beautiful."</font>

You know what I love about your comments ? You are always able to see what the writer is trying to convey and sometimes you draw parallels that even writer was unaware of (courtesy last time comment) 😆
Ramnath and Shravan's confrontation was in my mind since a very long time especially after the episode when Ram said "ye jante huwe ke wo tumse sacha pyaar karti hai."
I so badly wanted Shravan to say something.
Shadows of past keep following you... there is no escape !! Had he developed fondness for his present illusionary life,,it would have been more painful !!
Completely agree I think this applies to all of us there is a part of us who is always ready to forgive someone who has hurt us especially when it's someone close because somewhere we still don't believe that they can hurt us. I am glad that you loved the last line ;)
You really need to write something !!!
Thank you 🤗

You know what I love about your comments ? You are always able to see what the writer is trying to convey and sometimes you draw parallels that even writer was unaware of (courtesy last time comment) 😆

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

the truth is out

what will happen now

cannot wait

continue soon

Wait and read ;)
Thank you !

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Sorry.. As if crying once wasn't enough I had to go to your post repeatedly and read it up.

So in spite of the feeling of certain death inside my heart by the end. Your words oh beauty make me come die one more death again.

she had a little bit of him inside of her

If only he could always keep that in mind. but then the blows of his life are so big that its hard to keep remembering all this every moment.

Their waking up together. paradise. The tree has its roots supported by the soil , the same soil it holds so tight against the gush of the flood. A biosphere between the two of them. #shraman

Ramnath's confession came a tad bit too late. Yes truth is necessary, but there is a way to put it forth for the person you claim to love with all your heart. this was only cleansing for him, but Shravan took his assumptions and left before any correction could be done.

One touch that heals, one touch that can rip open a wound and make it bleed. That is Sumo to Shravan.

Sal... is it going to become part of my fitness regime to bow down to your writing proves??

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You know I usually press the button post just before sleeping because when I wake up you are always one of the first to comment and your comments always make me smile actually all of you, no need to apologize just the fact you read it bohot bari hai ;)
If I could add two scenes in EDKV, it would be ShraMan waking up in each other's arms and Shravan breaking down and Sumo consoling, alas :(
Like I said the writer in you can be felt :)
About Ramnath well next update is going to be tedious and you are right about the cleansing, man you see what I was trying to do there more in the next update ;)
And is it going to be a part of my daily routine to smile like an idiot in front of your comments ? 😆
#NoOriginality #BrainDead
Thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: amks2016

Such an intense and emotional update Saleha 😭Your description and narration is excellent ..

Every Time u update I read the entire series again n never get bored but simply in awe of the characters Dilip Sir created and the leads hve portrayed it so beautifully ..

Your take on EDKV story is close to dilip Sir's portraying the emotional quotient of S&S in your own way👏

I'm so late n mostly all have written what I want to say n I fully concur with them ... Keep your spellbounding updates cmg😳

Love Mayuri

Mayuri !
So glad you read it and the fact that it reminds you of the show just makes me so happy and don't worry comment when you can :)

Originally posted by: evaviego

RES

#200😉

Bro I didn't even realize 😆
Ah jaldi se unress kardo 😆

hello,
read all 5 chapters in one go few days back...very nice... loved it...plz update soon

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Sorry for making you cry, you are in for some tears!
Haven't read Zoya's work, will do after exams but I am sure she nailed it ;)
I didn't read the book but remember reading quotes from her a long time ago so I think I got inspired
😆
Thank you so much Sanjh 🤗

Originally posted by: AnuradhaMG

hello,
read all 5 chapters in one go few days back...very nice... loved it...plz update soon

Thank you, update coming in a few minutes ;)

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

This one book you should read! You are just too good!👏

Thanks for the recommendation, in dire need of good books 😆