ShraMan FF: Holding You, (C18 pg 102)

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Spandana

@sptrno

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

"This is the sound of heartbreak, it's silent"

Awww this is it..you made my poor heart cry so much...I have said this before also, you know the best part of your writings is they are filled with FEELINGS TOO MANY EDKV FEELS SHRAMAN FEELS...u make us cry make us smile make us smile through tears...But this update was extra emotional beautiful really touched our hearts too deeply sob sob...

Amazing beautiful wonderful updates as always hun...

Thank you so much for such lovely updates...

Lots of Love Hugs,

Spandana

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#182

wow

the truth is out

what will happen now

cannot wait

continue soon

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
There were so many instances where this update touched me.
The new feeling of waking up next each other, that had almost become a routine, that short pilow fight followed by hs sprint, his first proper gift to her, the way he admitted once she was away from his hearing shot that he would miss her hamesha, and finally when he realised that she was a rock to him, the one that could repeatedly crash his heart and shatter it, and at the same time the one who would allow him to lean against it in storm.

Ramnath 's finally free of the baggage he carried, unfortunately it's Shravan who has to bear the burden now. You showed his pain so well Saleha, it felt so real.

Now my worry is Shravan, would he include Sumo in the list of his wrong doers? He already does think that she sold him, her act being something which I personally never approved of. I am so curious to know what happens going forward😃

Great update here Saleha!!

Thank you 😳
About your question, right now he is in a state of mind where everyone he has ever loved, has wronged him (in his mind) so he might put these people to the test ;)

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik
This was so so beautiful!!!

Thank you Sara :)

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: vimikrao
It is beautifully written

No words to describe. U r amazing. Shravan state of mind beautifully written. I hope Sumo bring him out of this.

Vinu

Shukriya Vinu 😳

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Faith28
Such an intense and emotional update...too good...im glad ram came clean with his revelations finally... It'll take time for shravan to heal n completely forgive his papa...his anchor his strength his sumo is there to sail him through these difficult times...👍🏼

I see a new reader ;)
Let's see how she handles him 😉
Thank you for commenting !

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#187

Sorry.. As if crying once wasn't enough I had to go to your post repeatedly and read it up.

So in spite of the feeling of certain death inside my heart by the end. Your words oh beauty make me come die one more death again.

she had a little bit of him inside of her

If only he could always keep that in mind. but then the blows of his life are so big that its hard to keep remembering all this every moment.

Their waking up together. paradise. The tree has its roots supported by the soil , the same soil it holds so tight against the gush of the flood. A biosphere between the two of them. #shraman

Ramnath's confession came a tad bit too late. Yes truth is necessary, but there is a way to put it forth for the person you claim to love with all your heart. this was only cleansing for him, but Shravan took his assumptions and left before any correction could be done.

One touch that heals, one touch that can rip open a wound and make it bleed. That is Sumo to Shravan.

Sal... is it going to become part of my fitness regime to bow down to your writing proves??

❤️

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#188

Such an intense and emotional update Saleha 😭Your description and narration is excellent ..

Every Time u update I read the entire series again n never get bored but simply in awe of the characters Dilip Sir created and the leads hve portrayed it so beautifully ..

Your take on EDKV story is close to dilip Sir's portraying the emotional quotient of S&S in your own way 👏

I'm so late n mostly all have written what I want to say n I fully concur with them ... Keep your spellbounding updates cmg 😳

Love Mayuri

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: sptrno

"This is the sound of heartbreak, it's silent"





Awww this is it..you made my poor heart cry so much...I have said this before also,you know the best part of your writings is they are
filled with FEELINGS TOO MANY EDKV FEELS SHRAMAN FEELS...u make us cry make us
smile make us smile through tears...But this update was extra emotional beautiful really touched our hearts too deeply sob sob...




Amazing beautiful wonderful updates as always hun...





Thank you so much for such lovely updates...







Lots of Love Hugs,

Spandana

Spandana you write the cutest comments ❤️

Whenever you say that it reminds you of the show it makes me so happy ;)

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#190

Unresd!

I know I m late! 😳

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