The Long Wait (ShraMan TS) : 16+ (updated part-2 pg1) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Ohhh swaruuu
What can i say man...
Beyond my words...
Love the impatient sumo...
And the way you penned down the emoyion...
Mindblowing

And shavan is so naughty he teased her like any thing
A big hug yo u dear

Originally posted by: evaviego

Beautiful OS Swarnima...!!!

"I mean you need to improve your aim! " She just cant wait right..!!! 😊😳

Bold Sumo has always been a bliss to read..!!

You dont have to be nervous or scared about writing anything here.. we all are crazy for such fluff.

So bindass likho.. It will definitely be loved by all...!!!

I loved it.. ❤️

Originally posted by: pisces17

Hi Swamima,

First...thank you so much for dedicating the part 2 to me. I am overwhelmed...

Now to your wonderful updation...Excellent...awesome...running out of words to describe it...

your sumo dialogues are excellent...

"I mean you need to improve your aim! "

No. I want you just as much, I thought it was pretty visible.

"Why else do you think we are together here!

THANK YOU THANK YOU ...😊

keep more coming...

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Love you too Suzie❤️

Swaru

P.S.: hey wow this post changed my username to a more suave shade of blue. A senior member now. 😃😉😎

Oye Congos😃🥳