The Long Wait (ShraMan TS) : 16+ (updated part-2 pg1)

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minho

@minho

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Nice and beautifully written os 👏 👏

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Hey swarnima you are really good at this ...beautifully penned it was...glad that you updated the second part...yes it seemed quite incomplete before but now it is beautifully complete ...ease keep more of them coming ...will be waiting

Dolly😊

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

I have updated the OS(didnt want to remove it 😉). Do read it.

Hey,the update was written very nicely!!!!!

There wasn't an iota of vulgarity in your story!!!!

Well done!!!!

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

It's really very cute... Lovely... You should write more and more...

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

"Shravan, I really wished to know ki tumahara chashma sach mein utar gaya tha, ya phir sirf handsome dikhne ke liye nhi pehante ho?"

"What!! "

"I mean you need to improve your aim 🤣 #sumoness

"Sumo, promise me that you'll always stay with me. "

"Always", she reassured, "but do you promise to love me the same way?"

"With every breath I take." ☺️

Beautiful! !

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

so beautiful

and romantic

loved it

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Crazypiya

@Crazypiya

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Ohhh swaruuu
What can i say man...
Beyond my words...
Love the impatient sumo...
And the way you penned down the emoyion...
Mindblowing

And shavan is so naughty he teased her like any thing
A big hug yo u dear