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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#601

Res me first. 😉 😆

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Sorry sorry res kar ke unress karna bhool gayi...

Hi dipti

I dont understand what I should comment I m just confused myself... Mujhe na samaj mein nehin a raha kya kahoon... Jab ek sab teek karne ko hota hai toh doosra mooh pher tha hai... In dononka yeh Tom & Jerry wala fight kab tak chalega.. Till then they will be in London like this only...Ved came to know Sumo is married now he won't trouble her... Again they had argument... She was so happy when Aditya said cake has been ordered by Shravan her face lit up like 440W bulb but as soon as she came to know he didn't do it, when he said he forgot her birthday her face become so small even without saying anything she left from there... So what is the use of wrapping gift for her & kept it @ home & handmade greeting cards when he didn't give it to her...ab itna bhi kya gussa Shravan tum ek wish bhi nehin kar sakte apni biwi ko uski birthday per woh bhi pehla birthday after their wedding...

Jab itna dawa karte ho u loved her since childhood... When your ego is not letting you to bend down... Mana ke she has asked you she needed space but now she trying to come closer still you r doing like this...

Such mein Dipti mein Shravan se yeh expect nehin kiya I thought he is more sensible than Sumo but his ego is more to him than her love... Chalo mein bhi dekh thi hoon kab tak yeh aise hi ladte rahenge.. koi toh jhuko for God sake... 😡 jab tak ek doosre se baat karke sort out nehin karoge how can this misunderstanding will clear.. 😡 dono ne milke raita pehlaya hai jaldi se clear karo...

Sorry for late latif... Kal raat ko hi padh liya per comment nehin kiya plz mera comment padh lena... 😉

I m sorry agar mere comments se tumhe bura laga ho toh.. Mein Shraman ko khush dekh na chahthi hoon bus meri yehi ghuzarish hai... 😲

Thanks for PM

Vinu

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Marium Haris

@Mariumharis

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#602

I was just wondering whether u updated..

And yess u updated..

In love with it..

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#603

Hey Dips,
What an update yaar, full of emotions, but only sad ones. 😭 Please Dono ko mila do. I hope Shravan Sumo ke peeche Paris chale jaye. At least wahan to nahi ladenge ye dono, hopefully. Aaj show me Berry ki pitai hui aur yahan Ved ki. 😆
Patch up karwa do inka... Shravan ka dard bahut zyada ho gaya.

Lubna.

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#604

thank you dips for giving me this update a big bear hug for you🤗

coming to the update there are many ups and down but more downs, in a successful marriage its really imp to speak out mu,feelings right away but seeing shraman i felt bad and put me also in dilemma that love is really that much difficult like they are reasoning 😲 they just need to sit and talk instead of blaming each other, they need to understand each other which is deficient in their relationship, whenever ego comes in any relationship it will prejudicial to it (same we saw in show)

i just hope they will not stretch out their relation till breaking point if they will then things will be more worse.

Their passionate love to each other need to be rejuvenate(a big sigh) 😔.

Both are so sensible mature persons but still when it comes to them they wont use their intelligence (akal ghas charne chali jaati hai 🤔)

But the update was flawless, perfectly written your words gave complete justice to the turmoil going beneath their heads👏

and i know you have solution on this very well, really like the way story is going on you are doing full justice with your strong headed SHRAMAN 😉

i am falling more and more for this FF with each update

OMG meine etana bada comment de diya sorry dips 😳

Please take care of our SHRAMAN 😊

Luv

Priti

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: Mariumharis
I was just wondering whether u updated..
And yess u updated..
In love with it..

thank yew Marium 😊

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hey Dips,
What an update yaar, full of emotions, but only sad ones. 😭 Please Dono ko mila do. I hope Shravan Sumo ke peeche Paris chale jaye. At least wahan to nahi ladenge ye dono, hopefully. Aaj show me Berry ki pitai hui aur yahan Ved ki. 😆
Patch up karwa do inka... Shravan ka dard bahut zyada ho gaya.

Lubna.

baadlo ke piche se jab suraj aata hai tabhi achcha lagta hai... meri story ab tak itni itani light hearted rahi hai .. itna to chalta hai kyu 😉

Paris... hmmm.. achcha idea hai

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kranti

@kranti

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#607

Nice update Dipti as always. Waiting for next one Eagerly with all Jhagda sorted out...

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: pritiyerne
thank you dips for giving me this update a big bear hug for you🤗

coming to the update there are many ups and down but more downs, in a successful marriage its really imp to speak out mu,feelings right away but seeing shraman i felt bad and put me also in dilemma that love is really that much difficult like they are reasoning 😲 they just need to sit and talk instead of blaming each other, they need to understand each other which is deficient in their relationship, whenever ego comes in any relationship it will prejudicial to it (same we saw in show)
i just hope they will not stretch out their relation till breaking point if they will then things will be more worse.

Aren't most newlyweds like that..upar se inki padhai aur ladai to bachpan se khatam hi nahi hoti !!

Their passionate love to each other need to be rejuvenate(a big sigh) 😔.

inka number bhi ayega

Both are so sensible mature persons but still when it comes to them they wont use their intelligence (akal ghas charne chali jaati hai 🤔)

But the update was flawless, perfectly written your words gave complete justice to the turmoil going beneath their heads👏

thank you thank you 😳

and i know you have solution on this very well, really like the way story is going on you are doing full justice with your strong headed SHRAMAN 😉
i am falling more and more for this FF with each update

OMG meine etana bada comment de diya sorry dips 😳
Please take care of our SHRAMAN 😊

ab tak to its worl famous that I love love love big comments where I get to think over wha tI wrote as well.. its not a planned storyline so your comments help me think of the next turn.. you know I will start writing the next chapter only after I get comments about how people felt and what they wanted to see.. so keep em coming !! 🤗

Luv
Priti

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: kranti
Nice update Dipti as always. Waiting for next one Eagerly with all Jhagda sorted out...

tea to bullet train ka speed hai ladki !!

ek update aya nahi ki dusra.. ruko.. gehri saas lo... next update me do din lagenge.. 😉

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#610

Res
****
Unres
Dhamaakedaar update buddy... 👏
Loved it..!!

Loved Pushkie's bidaai... 😆
ShraMan-Pushkar bond is so adorable... 😳
"Ab bas karo aap log ladna.."Iske to door door tak koi asaar nazar nahi aa rahe...!!

Ved confessed his love... 😲
But got a punch in return...ab Shravan ki Sumo ka haath pakdega to yahi hoga na... 😳
"Next time you try to touch my WIFE yehi zinda gaad dunga tujhe."...Woah dialogue man..!! ❤️
Phir ladaai... 😲
N both were as always right in their places...uff!!

Loved how Sumo took Shravan's side infront of Ved... 😳
Thank God Ved waala issue solve hua...ya nahi???

N am loving Adi-Diya also...They are adorable 😳
Shravan is ignoring Sumo.. 😕
Adi-Diya are making efforts so that that ShraMan patch up...Keep going 😳

Sumo's bdy collided with Valentine's day...they would have celebrated it together but these thick skulls...!!
Both are Stupid..!!

Both cut the cake n fed each other...n atleast ek hug to mila... 😛
Shravan had bought a gift n a handmade card for her...Aww 😳
But he lied...Oh God..!! 😕

It was an emotional update dear...but well written!!
Ab ShraMan ko mila do ya...pretty plzz!!

Thanks for the pm n dear 😊
Loads of Love
Nik

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