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dhanyata

@dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#621

Amazing update. this track is awesome. shravan's anger, hurt and both their disappointments are portrayed beautifully. thank God, Ved seems good guy. otherwise he would create more problems. Sumo has come a long way, I mean she understood she has duties as wife as well and trying to be comfortable around shravan. I think, now shravan should reciprocate. Always angry young man means sumo will be suffering a lot. adi diya are cute. when they were fighting shraman were helping and now they became one to help shraman. I like the way, how you keep the couples balanced to support each other. good work👏

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#622

Omg!! This was a real emotional rollercoaster. ..and was amazing too...seriously amazing and made me cry like anything seriously i cried soo bad in ages coz i am not much an emotional person 😭😭😭 please shraman ko sath le ao but i love this track too...these two idiots God! But amazing ...please please update soon ...waiting becomes impossible after such awesome chapters😊

Dolly

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#623

amazing...
beautiful... loving..
their love, their longing for each other
beautifully penned...
...emotional one...
why can't they always fighting...
thanx for PM...😊
loved it...

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Rubyag23

@Rubyag23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#624

This was such an amazing update...🤗. This ved himmat kaise hui uski sumo ko proppse karne ki... Accha😈 hua puch pada usse...👍🏼. Update was Full of emotions yaar... Well shraman ka patch up karado can't wait... 😭I guess now shravan will go to paris with sumo... Pls update soon... 😛

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#625

Amazing update..

Hope shraman will sort this out soon

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#626

Sorry dear but I wanted to say something... You are making it a typical tv serial where they have thousands of problems loads of misunderstanding but they never speak even they never try make things normal... Sumo typical heroine bn gyi hai sorry heroine nhi vamp.. And shrawan cheeje buri lgti hai toh baat karo na baby bas Robot Ki trh command accepted kerna hai... Be a man bro fight for you... BAs tolerance se kaam nhi chalega I want a typical confrontation not silly fight... Adhi baatein karo gussa Ho k chale jao W*F man... Think about it Delta and sorry if my words hurt you.

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MadhuGupta

@MadhuGupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#627

You are a brilliant writer.wonderfull update. Every scene you written very nice.big thank you for this beautiful story & every update.😊 I will wait next update.

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#628

Plz Dipti meine unress kiya hai page 86 per plz padh lena... Lamba chouda likh hai iss baar, I m really frustrated this time so maine apni saare bhadaas nikaal di... I hope u won't mind.

Vinu😉

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago