Hide n Seek.. Shraman FF - Epilogue 2 page 101

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

humaira

@humairayousaf78

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#591

awesome update

happy for diya and aditya

but shraman huh😭

and wo ved ka bacha os ki to me...😡

ab hamara hero sumo ko bachany ay ga na???? plz os ko time pe bhej dena

plz plz update sooon yar tension se pet mein dard ho raha ha🤢

Quote

adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#592

Wow .. such a wonderful update .. ❤️

I love how u capture emotions in words.. Like the first scene hesitation,and love .. so nicely .. Sumo always has dreams about him ..😳

Diya - Sumo convo was awesome,like bestie sharing problems .. emotional .. how she cares for ppl she makes imp in her life ..

the fight in drawing room between adi-diya was so like natural and then bang ! our shraman fought... I liked that " what .. you also want to go smwer" poor pushkar 😆...

They both were confused about the situation , but then shravan was only thinking the career aspect..

She was emotional about the baby,coz though at the moment she is trying to focus on her studies and want to earn and repay money asap,but down there she always puts relations above everything ..

I don't understand why do ppl always blame Sumo .. I mean was that not bipolar on shravan's side saying that "Ridiculous girl.. Tumhe kya samajh me ayega relationship me do logo hote hain.. Tumhara decision, tumhara confusion aur tumhari Zid.. iske aage tumhe naa hi kuch dikhta hai na samajh me ata hai.." I mean didn't he say that he doesn't want her to change decisions just for his sake & he's her best friend 1st & is with her always .. Also like isn't she trying to give her 100% in their relationship,she's trying to open up after marriage,though slowly,but she is .. She's confused coz all her life from childhood to marriage,she has only looked up shravan for everything,her whole life revolves around him,even in london all she does is study,work and then go home to spend time with shravan ..All her life she's spent being a burden,and single never has she had the liberty to do what she feels,so its difficult for her to take such big decisions but she's trying completely ..

I just loved that she was there for Diya when she needed her,and how nicely she made across Aditya to realise such a big thing .. Ah ! there problem is solved and both nutheads are sulking ..

I love Sumo-Pushkar bond .. and their fights .. "its difficult to bond with aunties" He is such a brat ! In a moment he invited trouble by agreeing for pub ..sumo was never happy with hiding about her husband .. Pushkar was like unknowingly giving hints about them to Ved .. But I just loved our Sumo wrestler-"only my friends call me Sumo" 👏 and ye pada , chamat .. she immediately showed him his place .. But Ved was drunk,will he stop at that and dear pushkar is no help and is bar to,hero bhi naraz hai .. so who will support sumo .. Update soon .. (comment bot zada hi bada ho gya na,next time se ni hoga😳)

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Res
****
Unress

Yeh lo.. Ho gayi jhagra.. In logon ka kuch nahin hoga... Bechara..shravan was not prepared! 😆 Hope agli baar prepared ho.. Lovely moments... At last Adi maan hi gaya... Chalo... Abhi Shravan ko ved ke bare mein pata chalega to kya karega...
Thanx for the pm.

ha ha but you dint tell.. how you likes this plot change.. you know na I had to change it because you wrote it back there in 2 lines !! 🤣

Edited by deltadawn - 8 years ago

Quote

deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: Nik03
Res 😊
****
Unres
Wonderful update buddy... 👏
Sumo is soo dumb... 😳
Bechaara Shravan sab kuch bol ke samjhana padta hai... 😆

😆 glad you liked it.

Loved how Sumo stayed with Diya...a true friend indeed..!!
Shravan and Sumo fighted over Adi-Diya issue...uff!!

I soo loved the whole ultrasound scene...adorable one ❤️
Loved how Aditya huged Diya n sorted their issue...well written buddy!!

Sorry thoda sidetracked hua to because of them.. but better them than shraman in this situation 😉

In dono ki fight to khatam ho gyi par apne ShraMan to abhi bhi wahin atke hai... 😛
N am hating this ved more n more...!!
Aur ye pada chamaatt... 😃 ...way to go Sumo!!
Maza aa gaya... 😆

I so want to see Shravan teaching a lesson to this Ved... 😛

ye ho bhi sakta hai.. wait n watch

I really love how you show human feelings soo aptly...be it in case of ShraMan or Adi-Diya where they both are rigid in their prospective but still misunderstood or misread each other...and at last their love always brings them closer... ❤️

Exited for the next part buddy...!!
Thanks for the pm n plz update soonish...!!
Loads of Love n 🤗

thank you and hope you have enjoyed your birthday thoroughly !! 🤗
Nik

Quote

deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246
Wow .. such a wonderful update .. ❤️
I love how u capture emotions in words.. Like the first scene hesitation,and love .. so nicely .. Sumo always has dreams about him ..😳
Diya - Sumo convo was awesome,like bestie sharing problems .. emotional .. how she cares for ppl she makes imp in her life ..
the fight in drawing room between adi-diya was so like natural and then bang ! our shraman fought... I liked that " what .. you also want to go smwer" poor pushkar 😆...
They both were confused about the situation , but then shravan was only thinking the career aspect..
She was emotional about the baby,coz though at the moment she is trying to focus on her studies and want to earn and repay money asap,but down there she always puts relations above everything ..
I don't understand why do ppl always blame Sumo .. I mean was that not bipolar on shravan's side saying that "Ridiculous girl.. Tumhe kya samajh me ayega relationship me do logo hote hain.. Tumhara decision, tumhara confusion aur tumhari Zid.. iske aage tumhe naa hi kuch dikhta hai na samajh me ata hai.." I mean didn't he say that he doesn't want her to change decisions just for his sake & he's her best friend 1st & is with her always .. Also like isn't she trying to give her 100% in their relationship,she's trying to open up after marriage,though slowly,but she is .. She's confused coz all her life from childhood to marriage,she has only looked up shravan for everything,her whole life revolves around him,even in london all she does is study,work and then go home to spend time with shravan ..All her life she's spent being a burden,and single never has she had the liberty to do what she feels,so its difficult for her to take such big decisions but she's trying completely ..
I just loved that she was there for Diya when she needed her,and how nicely she made across Aditya to realise such a big thing .. Ah ! there problem is solved and both nutheads are sulking ..
I love Sumo-Pushkar bond .. and their fights .. "its difficult to bond with aunties" He is such a brat ! In a moment he invited trouble by agreeing for pub ..sumo was never happy with hiding about her husband .. Pushkar was like unknowingly giving hints about them to Ved .. But I just loved our Sumo wrestler-"only my friends call me Sumo" 👏 and ye pada , chamat .. she immediately showed him his place .. But Ved was drunk,will he stop at that and dear pushkar is no help and is bar to,hero bhi naraz hai .. so who will support sumo .. Update soon .. (comment bot zada hi bada ho gya na,next time se ni hoga😳)

mere update pe OS likh diya tumne to 🤗

but you supported and understood Sumo.. I love you even more 🤗🤗

Its Oxford.. so Ved do anything much after this.. so don't hold in your breath till next update. Relax... she will be safe. hide n seek has no over dramatic stuff... YET !! 😉

Quote

Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Indeed I have... 😳
And your update made my day... 😳

Quote

Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#597

Marvelous piece of writing!!

Hope Shravan and Sumo soon become like Adi and Diya...

Quote

imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#598

I love this Sumo... She is so cute, innocent but intelligent and sparky. She tries to keep a balanced head on her shoulders. She is always there for friends and so intelligently she solved the intense situation between the new would-be-parents.

She was not wrong, you know, when she wanted time to study and make her career before moving ahead with her marriage. But Shravan misunderstand her reluctance then, and he hasn't understood her point now.
But I am sure.. if something like this springs up on our favourite couple here, atleast one of them would handle it maturely... And the other would follow suit albeit after lots of drama( even they can't survive without fighting)
I love how much Shravan loves his Sumo but sometimes too much love can cloud your judgements. I hope they are able to resolve their differences soon. Would love to see them get all lovey dovey again
I am not scared of this Ved-guy track.
Uske liye hamari Sumo wrestler hi kaafi hai. Lambu ki zaroorat nahin padegi.

Love
Shveta

Quote

adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: deltadawn

mere update pe OS likh diya tumne to 🤗

but you supported and understood Sumo.. I love you even more 🤗🤗

Its Oxford.. so Ved do anything much after this.. so don't hold in your breath till next update. Relax... she will be safe. hide n seek has no over dramatic stuff... YET !! 😉

Glad for that ... update soon .. can't wait for ur updates ..😊