Hide n Seek.. Shraman FF - Epilogue 2 page 101 - Page 40

Amazing update.please next part soon.

The 1st was awesome,I did imagine in last part,Sumo teaching Raghu making punjabi food ..And Shravan is a kiddo,can't wait to have food made by her .. And how she tc of her 😊 London darshan was gr8 ! and how she said such a big thing so easily-Ab tum yahan ho toh ye Ghar hai,Shravan was overwhelmed at her love and innocence .. And she's so cute - no no no hahaha.. And she forgot about it once up and again when she realized,she's like 5 yr old and that line what did u see from london eye - buttons of your shirt ..👏😃 But she's melting down slowly .. The jealous Sumo part was 👍🏼,she could have left her to ashes by sending daggers at her,if possible..😉 wanna see more of jealous sumo later and ofcourse a jealous shravan too,at some point of time .. Shravan is so thoughtful,saving her of all the Q&A session ❤️ And the last scene was so cute and lovely,I knew this wud come but the magic of your words is smtg different,she behaving like a kindergarten kid,so cute but acceptable as he's really her family,parent,love everything..And she said ILU ,wow .. But that when he turned and saw her crying like a child behind and returned again ,that was a heart stealing moment🤗.. waiting for next ..

Lovely update dear...!!
J Sumo is too good...!!
Loved their moments together in London... 😳
Exited for the next part...!!
Thanks for the pm.. 😊
Love
Nik

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

The 1st was awesome,I did imagine in last part,Sumo teaching Raghu making punjabi food ..And Shravan is a kiddo,can't wait to have food made by her .. And how she tc of her 😊 London darshan was gr8 ! and how she said such a big thing so easily-Ab tum yahan ho toh ye Ghar hai,Shravan was overwhelmed at her love and innocence .. And she's so cute - no no no hahaha.. And she forgot about it once up and again when she realized,she's like 5 yr old and that line what did u see from london eye - buttons of your shirt ..👏😃 But she's melting down slowly .. The jealous Sumo part was 👍🏼,she could have left her to ashes by sending daggers at her,if possible..😉 wanna see more of jealous sumo later and ofcourse a jealous shravan too,at some point of time .. Shravan is so thoughtful,saving her of all the Q&A session ❤️ And the last scene was so cute and lovely,I knew this wud come but the magic of your words is smtg different,she behaving like a kindergarten kid,so cute but acceptable as he's really her family,parent,love everything..And she said ILU ,wow .. But that when he turned and saw her crying like a child behind and returned again ,that was a heart stealing moment🤗.. waiting for next ..

U won't believe but i have to tell u that i read ur entire ff today itself. Fortunately today was a holiday so i got time to go through a new story... I must say ur storyline is very unique. I successfully finished reading all the 23 chapters in one day itself... All the fault is yours only... Bcoz of the interst u maintained in each chapter, i was compelled to click on another chapter and read it... Jokes apart yaar, i am not liking your story at all ... coz i am loving it yaar... one thing is clear u r a fabulous writer and know very well how to keep the readers interested in the story... I loved how suman realised her mistakes and shravan is so sweet yaar very caring... Jealous suman was the best part... Eagerly waifing for future story ... Loved it... Pls update soon

Originally posted by: Rubyag23

U won't believe but i have to tell u that i read ur entire ff today itself. Fortunately today was a holiday so i got time to go through a new story... I must say ur storyline is very unique. I successfully finished reading all the 23 chapters in one day itself... All the fault is yours only... Bcoz of the interst u maintained in each chapter, i was compelled to click on another chapter and read it... Jokes apart yaar, i am not liking your story at all ... coz i am loving it yaar... one thing is clear u r a fabulous writer and know very well how to keep the readers interested in the story... I loved how suman realised her mistakes and shravan is so sweet yaar very caring... Jealous suman was the best part... Eagerly waifing for future story ... Loved it... Pls update soon

Awesome update 🥺 ..thank you so much for this I love you update 🤗 I really wanted them to confess again 😉 ..waiting for next update please update soon