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Posted: 8 years ago
It was really funny in the starting when Shravan saw Sumo in pink salwar,he was thinking in his mind, I didn't kiss u since 64 days, is rate se toh main sanyasi ban jaunga tumhari padayi khatam hone tak... 😆🤣

But after that big jhtka not only for Shraman for us also, Nanu fell down from stairs got injured, heart attack. 😭 & sudden marriage...Shravan was too caring the way he asked whether she is ready to marry him in this situation...hai main toh mar gayi, itna pyaar karne wala won't get anywhere...Sumo is really lucky to have him in her life...

Ab Nanu nehin rahen how Sumo will take sudden demise of her beloved Nanu, he was everything to her, Shravan has take care of her I know he do that but its difficult for Sumo... 😭

Ab shaadi ho gayi now it will be interesting to read how they take their relationship...😉😳

Thanx for the PM & super update👏

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for updating Dipti. It's been very boring and I had lots of holiday work to do. Your SS is kinda stress buster .
Coming to the update when adi and diya came, i thought that it's going to be a light-hearted chappy. But nanu's death is really painful. I just hope that shravan supports her. And maine to Shraman ki big fat wedding imagine ki. Par yahan to kuch aur hua. But after reading your 17 chapters I'm sure you'll pull the story nicely.
Thanks for the pm and update soon as always you do.
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Madhu

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really emotional update dear...Emotions beautifully penned down!!
Sumo lost her nanu...biggest support since childhood..!!
So ShraMan are married now...
Lets see what happens next ...!!!
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Nik
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's sad nanu is no more, how is she feeling. Her most beloved person, her world is crash now.
Kuch bhi circumstances ho, per shaadi to ho gayi. Waiting for nxt how shravan handle her, take out from her sarrow...
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Jerry... When people fail to handle their own EQ.. they put circumstances as the reason.. 99% cases..

Relationships need work... No one can just declare they love each other and then simply live happily ever after... Right?


Yup..We can never deny that relationships needs time Nd efforts from both sides..
Coming to newest chapter.. it's so much emotional.. nanu's departure wasn't expected but I think that's what you wanted to convey tomorrow is unpredictable..
I m sure Shravan is gonna be Sumo's support system at this moment but I m a bit worried as shraman are married but shravan still doesn't know what's going on in Sumo's mind..I mean y sumo wanted to meet shravan at Cafe..
Waiting for next chapter

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Deepti, first of all tons of sorry, for unressing this late. Was a bit busy from morning. But read it as soon as you posted. Okayy now, thank you very much, for dedicating this chapter to me, and of course my debate partner Naamika. It means a lot. And yes, Deepti ki story hai, woh dekh legi, and my god, kya dekha tumne!

Like shravan saying, is tarah se sanyas ban jaunga, bechara! Really felt for him! And Bechari Sumo! I really didn't expect nanu's demise will be so soon. And the way you described, every word was so apt that I couldnt even think of. And yes ShraMan Shaadi! The much awaited! Sumo ne shaadi kar to li, abhi aage kya hoga! Really want to know.

Again, my deepu darling, thank you so much for writing this wonderful story! A big hug for that!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn


Thanks adi.. always like your analysis !!
Please do think of writing something on Shraman soon 😃 I am sure you can come up with something awesome.
Its easy to be a critic but difficult to create smtg as beautiful as u do and many more writers over here .. I'm not so capable yet .. but I love reading shraman stories and urs is smtg awesome ..

Diya gave her POV.. it was important for Suman to find some parallel for comparison rather than shutting down her mind to the idea completely. circumstances are different but can be handled...is hope enough. and hope takes the world forward..
Rightly said .. hope does give strength to take fwd .. I see ur POV too ..
I wrote this part 3 times.. and scrapped all story lines I came up with since yesterday evening hence the delay..
I understand its very difficult to weave a story.. I hope I didn't offend u by giving my POV on diya sumo convo .. I was just telling what I felt ..
would wait for your next update .. excited to see what happens next ..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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U r love.

Amd I wouldnt get offended by your eagerness to read what O am writing ever... Or else I ll have to go back to writing in my diary!! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
After reading this part I'm at loss of words to Express my feelings that how amazing writer you are. It's so realistic.
Exactly one year ago my maternal uncle passed away. He was just 34 yrs old. He was the person whom me and my parents trusted most in our all relatives. My parents used to say that in future if anything happens to them the only person that they believe will take our responsibility would be my uncle. He was the man with heart of gold. No matter what situation,he was always there. You're absolutely right most of us never see the fact that tomorrow may never be there. I remeber the day before he left this world I was there at his home and my father came there so we can go our home and my uncle was insisting me and my brother to stay for some more days at his home but we just ignored his request by saying that we'll meet him soon and I still regret that. He was really close to my mother as he was her only brother so when he passed away my mother was just not responding to anything. Neither she was crying nor speaking. I was in the same situation now where shravan is. I was so scared for my mom.
This is the first time after his death when I'm talking about him so freely. From last whole year wherever anyone tries to talk about him I always avoided to talk about him and I have two reasons for that firstly because of my mother and secondly I'm still living in that guilt that he was insisting me to stay but I just ignored it that day. I really miss him.
P.s. sorry for above comment. I know it's not related here to anything and for its length too but I really wanted to talk about him and I think no place is better than this forum.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naamika

After reading this part I'm at loss of words to Express my feelings that how amazing writer you are. It's so realistic.

Exactly one year ago my maternal uncle passed away. He was just 34 yrs old. He was the person whom me and my parents trusted most in our all relatives. My parents used to say that in future if anything happens to them the only person that they believe will take our responsibility would be my uncle. He was the man with heart of gold. No matter what situation,he was always there. You're absolutely right most of us never see the fact that tomorrow may never be there. I remeber the day before he left this world I was there at his home and my father came there so we can go our home and my uncle was insisting me and my brother to stay for some more days at his home but we just ignored his request by saying that we'll meet him soon and I still regret that. He was really close to my mother as he was her only brother so when he passed away my mother was just not responding to anything. Neither she was crying nor speaking. I was in the same situation now where shravan is. I was so scared for my mom.
This is the first time after his death when I'm talking about him so freely. From last whole year wherever anyone tries to talk about him I always avoided to talk about him and I have two reasons for that firstly because of my mother and secondly I'm still living in that guilt that he was insisting me to stay but I just ignored it that day. I really miss him.
P.s. sorry for above comment. I know it's not related here to anything and for its length too but I really wanted to talk about him and I think no place is better than this forum.


Hey its always good to share or it comes out eventually in some form... The intro I wrote is from my life as well. I lost my kaka the same way and something recently led me to re live all of it again..this was a way of letting my own emotions out. Glad you could relate to it and let out ur feelings as well.

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