Hide n Seek.. Shraman FF - Epilogue 2 page 101 - Page 25

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

OMG Dips...what a update...i am on shravans side really all abt suman where is he in this...he have already carved for his love for ages now madam choose her family and not to him really man kon samzaye use...

really loved cafe wala scene and "'Don't create a scene. ..either explain without tears or I can live with my assumptions" dialogue was like cherry on cake 👏. I really liked this story soo much

Thanks for the pm...really thankful of that you clear out thought of ending this lovely ff from your mind 🤗

Luv

Priti

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Your dialogues are bang on .. loved their reunion and then how shravan became the much needed best friend as he had promised .. The cafe scene and dialogues were 👏 .. But the fact is whenever we read shravan we assume namik playing it and all our heart becomes partial .. 😉 but deep down shravan has never been in sumo's shoes though he is her biggest support system and esp in this story , he has been her guiding angel but since its sumo who has been living in that house and has no one except nanu , after getting so much love from ram and nirmala ,like her own parents,she has a fear of losing them by offending them by her mistakes.Due to her mami's taunts and living like an outsider in a house full of ppl,she's more vulnerable,low confident,over thinking and always puts her family before her own happiness,that may be one reason she wants to repay the debt asap so that she can live happily her married life and think just about her relationship and happiness.. Being a girl most of us will agree that life after marriage does change for a girl and one is bound to get distracted .. So she's not completely wrong over here ..

Being shravan , who's been in love with the girl for so many years and still afar,he wants to makeup for most of the moments lost,and wants to give all the happiness to his girl,and he is right over there.. but he's always had freedom,love,care and confidence to take his decisions ,and he had a loving family,one thing suman craved for and lacked,this is the reason he's lacking to understand sumo's fear of marriage .. I think he needs to show her that she can confide in him and create that confidence in her that she lacks ,to teach her to think about her happiness,and he'll be there to tc if smtg goes wrong ..he needs to fight her mental demons b4 she can become her own self ..

This makes it all the more interesting to see how these two cutiepies tackle each other .. and make peace ..😊❤️

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Kya lotcha hai yeh... 😡

Misunderstanding never clears between these two... She wanted some space so he stopped all the contacts,

- no she did not.. she wanted space. he gave her outer space.. bole to vaccum

now she doesn't want to get married now atleast for 2 yrs, he is not happy with this dicision still agreed... 😕

- he is her best friend.. also he has promised her he will neevr come between her lfie goals in that diary remember?

When ever coffee shop scenes comes I remembered Shravan was waiting there for Sumo till the shop closed... In front of me Namik's face comes he was smiling, looking @ the watch all the time & all... 😭

😭 me too sweety..

Ab kya aage hone wala hai yeh dono like this there is no understanding between these two, 😲 like Children fighting, arguing, kuch na huwa toh Sumo will start crying, I m helpless try an understand, I need to give their debt which has been taken by her parents... & all...

real relationships always take time.. people don't want to give time to their relationships hence they end up wit a ton of unfulfilled expectations while they conveniently ignore the fact that they were also supposed to fulfill the other persons expectations...

Shravan is too naughy that's why she scared, she won't be concentrate on her studies... 🤣

most guys r like tht.. its like Murphy's law.. exam ke ek din pehle inko mood a sakta hai..

In dono ka Tom & Jerry wala fight kab khatam hoga...

beta take a pick.. fight khatam story khatam 🤣

Thanx for the PM

❤️

Vinu

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

You know, somehow I can relate to Suman. She, brought up by her nanu, mama and mami. And of course we know how her mami is. If she wants to repay them (not talking about nanu) it's not wrong actually! I don't know, why Shravan is reacting like this. She just wants some time. But it's good right! They can have a long courtship, they can make up those moments, which they had longed for 12 years. Aur agar aisi koi majburi na bhi hoti, then also, I think Sumo is right. At least, every girl should have their own career before they step into matrimony. I don't know deepti, whether you feel like that, or trying to show, Sumo as a selfish girl, who only think about her own priorities! And not to forget, show mein, Suman deliberately avoided Shravan, for whatever the reason is, but here she is not avoiding him, she just wants some time. Love is important for life, but it can't be a whole life.

And next, about your writing, so my Dipu darling, it was amazing, you know why? Because you made your readers think, whether the characters are worthy to support or not. Way to go girl, love you a lot for writing this. Will be waiting for the next part eagerly.

P. S this is my longest comment on any post on IF. So you can understand, how much I liked it! 😉

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

You know, somehow I can relate to Suman. She, brought up by her nanu, mama and mami. And of course we know how her mami is. If she wants to repay them (not talking about nanu) it's not wrong actually! I don't know, why Shravan is reacting like this. She just wants some time. But it's good right! They can have a long courtship, they can make up those moments, which they had longed for 12 years. Aur agar aisi koi majburi na bhi hoti, then also, I think Sumo is right. At least, every girl should have their own career before they step into matrimony. I don't know deepti, whether you feel like that, or trying to show, Sumo as a selfish girl, who only think about her own priorities! And not to forget, show mein, Suman deliberately avoided Shravan, for whatever the reason is, but here she is not avoiding him, she just wants some time. Love is important for life, but it can't be a whole life.

And next, about your writing, so my Dipu darling, it was amazing, you know why? Because you made your readers think, whether the characters are worthy to support or not. Way to go girl, love you a lot for writing this. Will be waiting for the next part eagerly.

P. S this is my longest comment on any post on IF. So you can understand, how much I liked it! 😉

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Brilliant update...I believe that right now More than anyone else..Circumstances are main villain for shraman like it was the case in the show ... Both are unable to understand each other...

Waiting for next chapter

Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Naamika

Saanjh you said that every girl should have their own career before they step in to matrimony and I totally agree with you on this point but here the case is different.

Shraman had longed for each other more than 12 yrs and now they know that they know they can come close,they can live together with each other so the distance between them is distracting and distributing them and this is the point which sumo is not understanding. And it's just not about completing her studies but she also have to pay her loan and the amount is not small. she have to work for it. So then she will say that I have to focus on my work so plz shravan abhi don't distract me.

The main reason of their distraction is the distance. Once they will be together they will automatically know how to make balance between work and love life and rahi baat work ki to woh to jindagi bhar karna hai toh balance kaise banana hai woh to aana hi chahiye. and neither I'm taking anyone's side nor saying that sumo is sefish. I also said this earlier that this is the story where i admire sumo as much as I admire shravan. I just want her to trust him.

P.s. I'm just saying what I think