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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#281

It was really heart wrenching chap...

Sumo's condition is unbearable she is uncontrollable, she is not in her senses to grasp anything... 😲 Unaware of her surroundings... she has not recovered from shock of Nanu's sudden demise & Mami is taunting her for everything... This is test for Shravan's love for Sumo... She has tried to commit suicide... 😭 He is shattered from inside but he should make sure he was there for her... She shouldn't think she is throwing like a ball from one court to another... She has not realised yet she was actually married to Shravan... 😒

As long as Shravan's love there with Sumo there won't be any problem, I just want to see how Sumo will react once she get know she is married ti Shravan...

Nice update as always & Thanx for PM. 🤗

Vinu

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Crazypiya

@Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#282

Ufff wat an update yaasr...
U stole my heart...
No words will be enough to express the awesomeness of this chap ter...
Mind lowing one

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#283

hey dipti

what a chapter. you penned every emotion perfectly. her fear, her pain, her insecurities, everything is on point. And mamiji ki taunts, mami to show mein hi thodi better thi, yahaan to devil hai. accha hua nanu ne SHRAMAN ki shaadi kara liya. and im glad that Shravan is supporting her and she believes only Shravan. i just hope ki sumo agle chapter mein theek ho jayegi.

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#284

Firstly , take care of your health .. a healthy author gives best stories😉

It was an amazing and really heartbreaking update.. U have a way with words ..I really had tears while reading.. Poor girl , didn't register her marriage and feeling that her only support nanu has gone and she need to go too to be with him as its no more her house .. she attempted suicide,thank god he reached in time .. mamiji's vile remarks,so insensitive .. shravan didn't leave her and go , he's so caring .. and I loved the fact that he understood that she needs time to be in marriage as she's still vulnerable .. her nightmare - painful .. about the will , how mami couldn't see that except for a share in villa,everything else is given to preeti , greed surpaases all humanity ..

"she again being transported to another custody.. just like she was when she came into Tiwari Killa 20 years back.. there was no one to give her a bidaai, no one to cry that she was leaving the house she grew up in.." these lines summarise her whole life,all her fears,her being not loved and to belong nowhere and constantly under debt ..😭 shravan would need to reach the bottom of her heart,know her,understand her fears and remove them to make her strong again .. would wait to see what happens next .. tc ❤️

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nadeeka1200

@nadeeka1200

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Posted: 8 years ago

#285

Get well soon

I Love this Story & Thank for the update

waiting for next update

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#286

God. .I felt for Sumo yaar. .and you have achieved a feat here.

.coz there are only very few times that I have melted for this girl .man...those last lines. .absolutely hitched my breath there.

Must be devastating to be so unwanted and uncared for😭

Seriously yaar. .emotional kar dita! !

You know. ..I was actually going to PM you yesterday saying "Is 15th January 2017 going to go down the history as the date when Dips darling deprived us of her usual dose of Hide and seek? "...but I didn't coz I knew that you must be seriously held up.

Take care. ..and write only when you feel well❤️