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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn


❤️ your analysis. and yeah damned right she is not selfish. If she was selfish she would have happily married either giving mama mami thenga or made shravan and ramnath pay up they would readily do that.. wouldn't they..

If I were in her place.. I'd do the same..ask for space and value my own self respect. but she doesn't want courtship also rather does not have the idea of it or is scared with Shravan's eagerness to get physical which for him having spent 10 yrs in London may be normal to look around. He had Aditya as his roommate with his 10 yr GF Diya who did not deny "anything" as we saw in Goa

For me she wants space. and he is afraid to give that because of how far they have been already.. for him their relationship is longer than a decade... for her its brand new after her realisation!!

Thanks for the long analysis..🤗 I was stuck in the next part and you got my "grey cells working" mon ami !!




She is just naive. But I am sure, our naughty Shravan sab kuch sikha dega usse! 😉 And I am happy that my comment made your grey cells working. Now I am more eager to know the rest.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh


Hey Naamika, it feels good to talk to you, after a long time. What you are saying is correct! Here the main problem is distance! But Suman just needed the time, as she wants to concentrate on her studies. Study and work both the aspect of life, but the different one. If you don't study, you can't get a decent job. And remember she has a debt of huge amount. She is just saying, she can get married only after her exams are over. I don't think Shravan should react on that. And he, himself is a lawyer, that's too from oxford. He should understand the importance of study in anybody's life. That's why I said that. Because if I were, Suman, I would do the same. By the way, don't get offended my wakil sahiba! It's just my POV. And you know, that how important your views, and comments to me, you always make me happy with your thought process. Hope you understand, till then, love you.. Inna sara... 🤗

Dear how i can be offended by your post or comment. You know that how much I admire your writing and even your comments. My comments are surely proof of that. And rahi baat shraman ki to I was just saying that the main reason of their distraction is the distance and actually If I were sumo then may be I would do the same but here I think I trust Shravan to much that he'll make everything alright.
Let it be, dipti ki story hai woh dekh legi that how to solve Shraman's problem. You tell me when you're going to post next part. I'm waiting for update and Happy makar sankrati.❤️🤗
Edited by Naamika - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ye kya hai dips
Ye konsa naya Twist hai, it increase only mu between them...
But loved your written style...
Eagarly waiting to next part to know how they understand each other...
Thanks for regular update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naamika

Dear how i can be offended by your post or comment. You know that how much I admire your writing and even your comments. My comments are surely proof of that. And rahi baat shraman ki to I was just saying that the main reason of their distraction is the distance and actually If I were sumo then may be I would do the same but here I think I trust Shravan to much that he'll make everything alright.
Let it be, dipti ki story hai woh dekh legi that how to solve Shraman's problem. You tell me when you're going to post next part. I'm waiting for update and Happy makar sankrati.❤️🤗


Happy makarsankranti to u too. See the inbox.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn



Adi.. can I call you that?

first of all thank you so much for analyzing both sides.. that means you guys do read carefully 😃

as I write this story further.. I Am also in the same dilemma and thinking both ways whom to side with.. I cant really.. yet.


Ofcourse u can call me that ..
Oh! I'm loving it and I read and reread many times during the day .. I can connect with it coz love is not as they show in movies,all fun,easy,charming;instead it is like in your story,real and true wherein we often fail to deliver our emotions correctly via words,even if our intentions are true and our love is abundant .. often circumstances are the devil and we top it up with our fears and hurriedness .. Don't take sides .. show both their perspectives .. shravan needs sm1 bang a lil sense into him to see what he still can't and definitely late marriage means increased courtship period,more friendship,more understanding,more memories;they can make for all those years lost ...😊

where is today's update😭
Edited by adityasingh.246 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh! Ab nanu nahin rahe,i feel very sad😭
And Shraman got married...
Now I am curious to know what next...
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Posted: 8 years ago
What to say yaar. ..was chuckling at the' main toh sanyasi ban jaoonga' line...and then got super emotional. .never really understood what Nanu meant for her till those last few lines. .he was actually everything. ...
Aur simple hi sahi. ..par shaadi toh ho gayi. .now is the fun to wait and watch..super update as usual!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG..rally felt bad on nanu's dismiss 😭 my eyes welled up on last para...how perfectly u penned down nanu's importance in her life;;;hats off 👏
simplesi q nahi nut they got married
and that shravan's Beautiful devil wala thought i really chuckled there 😆
...now eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
this was so damn emotional 😭.. how u turned the emotions in same chap from light to serious .. 👏
I found it difficult to see through diya's pov coz diya and sumo's lives and their circumstances are way different and comparison is not justified..unlike diya,sumo is living in burden and never got to choose for herself ..I somehow agreed with sumo's decision here..poor girl.. shravan wouldn't talk to her also ..
that "Shravan's part of mind" was 😊👍🏼Though,I loved to see the caring and thoughtful shravan,who didn't let her travel alone and was there for her all along..
And now with nanu's death,difficult time for sumo as she lost her strength,her motivation from childhood..and she didn't shed a tear..a lot of emotions buried in the depth of her vulnerable heart .. tough times ahead .. let's see how things go from here ..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

this was so damn emotional 😭.. how u turned the emotions in same chap from light to serious .. 👏

I found it difficult to see through diya's pov coz diya and sumo's lives and their circumstances are way different and comparison is not justified..unlike diya,sumo is living in burden and never got to choose for herself ..I somehow agreed with sumo's decision here..poor girl.. shravan wouldn't talk to her also ..
that "Shravan's part of mind" was 😊👍🏼Though,I loved to see the caring and thoughtful shravan,who didn't let her travel alone and was there for her all along..
And now with nanu's death,difficult time for sumo as she lost her strength,her motivation from childhood..and she didn't shed a tear..a lot of emotions buried in the depth of her vulnerable heart .. tough times ahead .. let's see how things go from here ..


Thanks adi.. always like your analysis !!
Please do think of writing something on Shraman soon 😃 I am sure you can come up with something awesome.

Diya gave her POV.. it was important for Suman to find some parallel for comparison rather than shutting down her mind to the idea completely. circumstances are different but can be handled...is hope enough. and hope takes the world forward..

I wrote this part 3 times.. and scrapped all story lines I came up with since yesterday evening hence the delay..




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