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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Yaar had ho gayi mere se yahan koi chota hai hi nhin😭. Are thanx for the compliment behen aur cholo finally sahi jagah ruk yi Teri train, actoress hi banna hai mujhe, na main Punjabi nhin hu, pure delhite 😆, kya flavour hai lassi ka cause, yaar main aa hi nhin Sakti, address to hai nhin tera mere paas, aur vaise AAP kahan rehte ho Maharashtra main, maine probably what part ghuma hai? I hate Mumbai of all of them dimag kharaab kar diya yahan ke traffic ne, literally 3 ghante lage apne mumbai wale ghar se studio pohochne main, uppar se Jo daat padhti voh alag😕 jabki actual distance sirf 20 km tha

Aww...sho sad baby...mumbai ka traffic hai he bekar...really its very bad aur pollution ke toh baat he mat karo...vaise mai toh satara ki hu...U kno shivaji maharaj right..unke shehar ke hu..😆
Aur actress right...wow..tu toh writer bhi baan sakti hai...Dono options sahi hai...aagar dono me se koi baani toh mai toh shaan se kahungi ke ye mere penfrnd hai...😃

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1095142

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Crazypiya
Amazing update arpita
U r so young but u write so well
Plzz try to take it as proffesion
The way u shuffled between flashback n present outstanding
Storyline amazing..
Mystery jaldi solve karr

Thanku so much piya Di, for your comment, you don't know how much they mean to me, yaar main kya karu abhi boot time jai mystery solve hone ke liye l, Sachi ai shapat😉

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Aww...sho sad baby...mumbai ka traffic hai he bekar...really its very bad aur pollution ke toh baat he mat karo...vaise mai toh satara ki hu...U kno shivaji maharaj right..unke shehar ke hu..😆
Aur actress right...wow..tu toh writer bhi baan sakti hai...Dono options sahi hai...aagar dono me se koi baani toh mai toh shaan se kahungi ke ye mere penfrnd hai...😃

Hai dil Khushi ke diya tune to, hmm I know the place very well, I've visited there as my maasi lives tere and I'm really fond of her son, my nephew, and I visit her every time I visit any where near to the place, though I'm not sure if I would visti this time, humaare kahan director ko mera login choosne se time mile to nahi kaun na

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Areey bhai Yahaan ho kya Raha hai???? Hai kaha Sumo. Hua kya hai shraman ke life mein. Lpease jaldi reveal kardo yaa phir hint to de do ki sumo is all right . Please Arpita you are driving me nuts. Mein yeh soch soch ke pagal ho jaungi ki aakhir hua kya hai.

Coming to this update. It's superb awesome. You are killing it. It's completely different from your previous works and you're nailing it. Shraman had a strong bonding in their teens too. The way Sumo was supporting Shravan in front of Nirmala was nice. And Priya giving them their privacy was good too. Waiting for your next update . Thanks for the pm.

Love

Madhu

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv
Areey bhai Yahaan ho kya Raha hai???? Hai kaha Sumo. Hua kya hai shraman ke life mein. Lpease jaldi reveal kardo yaa phir hint to de do ki sumo is all right . Please Arpita you are driving me nuts. Mein yeh soch soch ke pagal ho jaungi ki aakhir hua kya hai.
Coming to this update. It's superb awesome. You are killing it. It's completely different from your previous works and you're nailing it. Shraman had a strong bonding in their teens too. The way Sumo was supporting Shravan in front of Nirmala was nice. And Priya giving them their privacy was good too. Waiting for your next update . Thanks for the pm.
Love
Madhu

Thanx for the comment mangu lekin mujhe thodha time do batati hu sumo kahan hai.🥱

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

It looks like some movie script ! !

Getting interesting with each update!

kuch logon ko dosti ka sirf sukoon naseeb nhin hota aur aapko junoon aur sukoon saath me mila... gave me ADHM vibes...!

Sumo in Sumo avatar. ..👍🏼

Shravan isn't tooo emotional... his behaviour is justified as we know where he is coming from..!

Amazing story! #intriguing !

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
It looks like some movie script ! !
Getting interesting with each update!
kuch logon ko dosti ka sirf sukoon naseeb nhin hota aur aapko junoon aur sukoon saath me mila... gave me ADHM vibes...!
Sumo in Sumo avatar. ..👍🏼
Shravan isn't tooo emotional... his behaviour is justified as we know where he is coming from..!
Amazing story! #intriguing !

you got that dialougue correct. ADHM's pyaar main junoon hai par dosti main sukoon, ka modified version hi tha.*wink to anushka* thanx dear ya i will be complicating the story a bit, then will detangle it dhere-dhere.

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: pinky.padda
amazing update
totally brilliant
continue soon
superb

thank u dear😆

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Hi Arpita,

Very well written. Their friendship was depicted in a very beautiful and subtle way. Glad to see Sumo protecting Shravan from his own parents. Eager to learn how their friendship grew into love and what happened to her after all. Update real soon.

Lubna.