shackles -two shots (epilogue updated page 15) - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Castile2

Sanjh

A heart wrenching one...and I'm speechless!

Thank you.. 😳


We here are in a dire need for a legislation that strongly condems marital rape and provides for an even stricter punishment. But more than that we need the people to change their outlook too...

So true... But what can be done..

A daughter's father saying what big deal this is feels like a slap on your face from the least expected person... And this is actually the bitter truth of our society...

That's why suman was more broken!

Man you have done an amazing job in writing this one. Kudos to you.

I always look forward to reading from you.

Awww that's sweet of you... Again thank you...

Regards
Cas

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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Sanjh,
Just Amazing. Loved this story. You have great writing skills, loved all your work. Keep writing. Waiting for more awesome stories from you.

Lubna.


Thank you... Glad tou liked it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Poor Suman to endure so much when she was just a child...lovely update Sanjh . ..loved the way you handled a sensitive issue...Thanks for the PM!


Thank you... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: vimikrao

It was really breathtaking chap...

The view which was seen by Sumo's eyes it made her broken from inside... Its too much to handle for a 10 year old girl... The trauma was haunting her since childhood...

Shravan has handled the situation very well... He loves her so he can wait her to be his one day...

Great story... Is there epilogue... If there plz write soonish

Keep writing & if Destined is ready to update... Than update soon...

Thanx for PM


Thank you for liking it... I will try to write an epilogue! Lets see..

And Destined will be up by 2-3 days... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Sb1185



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plz try to write epilogue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Kudos to u for taking up such an issue...n handling it soo well...
Not an easy thing to perceive and express effectively ! #Brilliant !
I am amazed!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaggy8

plz try to write epilogue...

+1
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
painful revelation
marriage is a pure and trusted relationship but some people make fun of it
or ese logon ki wajah se dusro ka ese rishton pe yakeen nhi rahta

but that dialogue
shravan mere liye wait karo ge
umar bhar
it is heart touching
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Emotional Ker Diya yaar... Very very emotional update yaar.. I m speechless.. Waise thanks for PM dear.. Your pms means a lot for me..seriously
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing ending
absolutely loved this story
thank you for writing it

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