shackles -two shots (epilogue updated page 15) - Page 8

Omg...Wat an update...

👏👏👏 spechless...like seriously speechless...yeah quite disturbing it was...but can't find words to speak...and i am glad ki time mere kehne p shravan's point of view likha...this was mesmerizing...like meri state esi h i want to speak oceans but cannot speak out a word (phir bhi itna likh diya lol!!)🤣 hope to see you soon and...can i beg for a epilogue pls pls pls1000000 allah k nam p epilogue dedena pleassseee

Sanjh

A heart wrenching one...and I'm speechless!

We here are in a dire need for a legislation that strongly condems marital rape and provides for an even stricter punishment. But more than that we need the people to change their outlook too...

A daughter's father saying what big deal this is feels like a slap on your face from the least expected person... And this is actually the bitter truth of our society...

Man you have done an amazing job in writing this one. Kudos to you.

I always look forward to reading from you.

Regards
Cas

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

RES

Hi Sanjh,
Just Amazing. Loved this story. You have great writing skills, loved all your work. Keep writing. Waiting for more awesome stories from you.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: Sunain

Res

******

Unres

Bunnyyy...!!!!!!🤗

Hey.. Lalchi... 🤗

WHT A MASTER PIECE THT WAS!!!

Incredible...Mindblasting...Phenomenal...jitni tafreef karon kam hi hogi..it was tht much.

You literally stole my heart...loved it to core!❤️

Beautifully penned...without any dout.

Dont u even dare to call it crap...😡...its the most beautiful TS i got from you😳

Oyeee you are making me blush! Btw thank you..but this is the only ts I have written! 😛

i literally want more...srsly...i wish k tum issey SS mein turn kardo...please.....yar it was damn damn damn Amazing...n the thought of its ending makes me 😭...tu kya plzzz tum issey agay continue kar sakti ho..plzzz literally begging u.I knw u'll nail it as a SS too ur plot is worth reading...chalo agar SS nhi tu ek acha sa lenghty sa epilogue hi day do*puppy eyes**pouting*

please do give it a thought.

Ss ka pata nahin... But epilogue ka kuch ho sakta hai...

coming back to upiii...

haah..In the begining i really felt bad for Shravan😭

His outburst👏

Their passionate moment❤️

Poetry was❤️..apt choice😉

thn her distancing herself from him made me😒

OMG!!!Suman's past 😲😭...really pity her...wakai..men n their virility😡...their mentality is so low.Poor bhabhi😔

She was literally crunching every second she recalled tht moment n tht time she felt only Shravan can console her...n obviously he did😊

He assured her tht he'll always be ther for her n wil wait for her.Seemed she started trusting him n was taking a step closer to him n so was going to give a chance to their mairrage...after all she had suffered through an agonising torment.

I believe Shravan will help her recover soon😳

wel i just loved it...i just love dark stories n so this one stole my heart...made me emotional too but loved it alot!

Really glad that you liked it... 😳

n han the poetry at the end...apt choice dear...was icing on the cake😉

It's one of my favourites!

please meri request par ghor zaroor farmana😳

Lets see

hope to see u soon😃

Love u soo much🤗

till thn..

Love you too my lalchi...

Take Care!

Chunna/Lalchi❤️

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg...Wat an update...

It was so emotional...

In first half I really felt bad for shravan..

Then aft hearing the FB sumo's feelings and all..my god how must she felt in tat situation...can't even blame her...

Finally I felt relieved and happy for ShraMan...

Hope everything will be alright soon...

Oh dear I loved the final shayari...

Can I get more of this??? Continuation plz...as some epilogue??

Love.,.,.

LavSriya

Poor Suman to endure so much when she was just a child...lovely update Sanjh . ..loved the way you handled a sensitive issue...Thanks for the PM!

It was really breathtaking chap...

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

👏👏👏 spechless...like seriously speechless...yeah quite disturbing it was...but can't find words to speak...and i am glad ki time mere kehne p shravan's point of view likha...this was mesmerizing...like meri state esi h i want to speak oceans but cannot speak out a word (phir bhi itna likh diya lol!!)🤣 hope to see you soon and...can i beg for a epilogue pls pls pls1000000 allah k nam p epilogue dedena pleassseee