FINALLY~~ A ShraMan SS Part 7_Page 18||COMPLETED|| - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
what
suicide
where is shravan
very interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Unressed at 1 😉

Rite now everyone is like.."Kahan hai Shravan" 😆
Anu u better tell is soon or else u knw yahan sab kitna besabr hain jannay kay leay Shravan kahan hai tu sooch lo kya ho ga 😉...sab bhoki sharniyain bani bathein hain😆 😛

Plz yar update soon...curiosity kills 😳
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Shravan is assumed dead...hopefully sumo finds him
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Really curious to know what is happening
Hope shravan is OK.update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone...M early..Time tha toh socha aaplogo ko aapke haq ka update dedu...M really very very sorry to all those who were expecting an pm from me...My sincere apologies...College vaale inne projects deete hai ke pucho mat...velle log hai bilkul...Sorry to everyone...Please meri apology accept kar lena and enjoy this update...NO PROOF READ

FINALLY

Part 2

"Di please...Aaisa mat kaho na...Pushkar please samjhao na Di ko..."

"Sumo, Yeb sab humlog tumhari bhalai ke liye he kar rahe hai.."

"Ha di...Hum sab aapka aacha hi chahte hai..."

"Ha Sumo...Kab tak tum aise he rahogi...4 saal ho chuke hai aab...Tumhe aapni zindagi ke nayi shuruvaat karni chahiye..."

"Please di...Aapko bharosa hai na humpe..."

"Haan Preeti Par..."

"Par var kuch nahi...Aapna muh dholo aur chalo niche...and I promise...Yeh sab iss time aakhir baar hoga..."

"Thik hai..."

In the living room

"Pushkar kya hua...Kaha hai suman??"

"Mumma who baas aa hi rahi hai..Lo aa gayi.."

Preeti came downstairs with Sumo...she was lost in her thoughts...

"Betho beta...Jeevan beta ye hai..."

FLASHBACK

4 years ago..

"Sumo mera passport...Chill Shravan ...yahi hoga...Packing ke vaqt kahi misplace ho gaya hoga..."

"Sumo flight hai meri 6 ghanto mai...Aur ye passport...Damn It..."

"Shravan...ho sakte hai ye tumhare aach ke liye he ho...matlab kuch rok raha hai tumhe jaanese..."

Shravan stared at her for a long minute...

"Sumo ye trick aab purani ho chuki hai..(chuckles)ao mera passport..."

"Nahi...mai nahi dungi...10 din nahi hue shaadi ko aur tumhe aabhi hi London jaana hai...Biwi ke koi parva he nahi hai tumhe..."suman sits in the mess ont the bed, pouting

Shravan sits in front of her on his knees and holds her face in both his hands...

"Sumo..Tumhari parvah hai issiliye toh jaa raha hu...ek baar vaha ka sab kuch wrap up ho jaye...phir vaha jaane ki naubat he nahi aayegi...Aaur papa bhi yahi chahate hai ke mai yaha settle ho jao...aur tum bhi toh yahi chahti ho na...Aur bas 2 weeks ki hi toh baat hai..."

"Nahi Shravan ...Ye 2 weeks ki nahi 1209600 seconds ki baat hai...kaise rahungi mai tumhare bina..."Her eyes become moist

"Sumo..." He wipes her tears.."Pehle bhi toh tumne 10 saal nahi...patanahi kitne second mere bina gujare hai...To hiss baar bhi vohi sahi...Aur mai bhi toh tumhe utna he miss karunga na..."

"Lekin..."

He cuts her sentence off..

"Ruko...mere paas tumhare liye kuch hai..." He goes to the wardrobe and comes with a envelope...

"Yeh lo..."

"Kya hai ye??"

"Kholo toh sahi.."

Sumo reluctantly opens the envelope...

"OMG...!!!!Honeymoon ki tickets...!!!!"

She displays her 1000 watt smile...

"Haa...inn do hafte isse apne paas rakhna...shayad kuch dard kaam ho... Aur vaise bhi dooriyaan toh zaroori hai na...Aane ke baad aur maza aaye ga..."Shravan smirks..

"Tum bhi na...Chuup karooo" Sumo blushes heavily...

"Haaye sumo...tum kitni cute lag ragi ho..."He kisses her nose.. "Aab blush karna baand karo warna mai aapne aap ko control nahi kar paaunga aaur meri flight chuut jaayegi.."

"Chuup raho...aur ye aapne kapde thik se fold karo...Mai niche se khaane ka saaman laati hu..."Sumo rushed out of the room blushing as if someone had thrown tomato juice on her...

"Paagal Ladki..."

FLASHBACK ENDS

"toh Suman tum aapne bare mai kuch baatao..."Jeevan asked her which shot her back to the present...The living room was empty...Only Jeevan and Suman were sitting on the sofa...

"I am sorry...Kaun ho tum??"Suman was totally unaware of the surrounding...

Jeevan was totally confused.."matlab itne deer se yeh ladki kuch sun hi nahi rahi thi...hmm hota hai.."

"Its ok Suman...Mai Jeevan hu..Jeevan Kashyap..Tumhara hone wala Pati..."


So...kaisa laga...hope u'll liked it..aur haa...thank u to all those who liked and commented...sry for not replyin...mai toh ghadi ke kaante bar bandhi hu yaar...Luv u all...

Love,

ANU

P.S:- Constructive criticism is most welcome...

P.S.S:- I know ki mujhe botoh saare tomatoes aur jote milne vale hai...par dekho..sabr ka phal miitha hota hai..


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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Res
look whoz here 😃
me first 🥳
Baray kpi zalam loog hain tumharay College walay...Poor Anu 😆
N thnk u shooo much for the pm...muuhhh🤗

Unres

Anuuu...my shona...🤗
Woah yar..wht an update...totally MIND BLASTING
Loved it...Flashie was damn cute...❤️
Seems like Shravan had an accident 4 years back n is missing since thn..rite😃..kya karoon curiosity mein dimagh bullet train jaisi speed mein doar raha hai😳
Srsly..Jeevan Kashab..[ROFL]...N how dare he said hez her would be husband..moh na toor doon salay ka 😡
being protective...just for Shravan 😳
Anu plz plz plz continue soonish..m hell excited to knw wht unfolds ahead. 😃
love u❤️


Cheers
Sunain.
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
captivating update... something went wrong when shravan was going to London. Hope shravan returns back "finally" for his sumo . continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
What is this Anu... Don't tell me this is without Shravan story hai... Shravan ke paas chali jaayegi Sumo... Par kaha hai Shravan plz don't tell he is dead... Sumo is trying to kill herself that is 3rd time...

Plz don't keep suspense.!.. jaan atki huyi hai...

Continue soon

Ho sakta hai toh plz send PM...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Jeevan Kashyap???🤣
Ok that cracked me up..

Flashback was sooo cute!
Continue ASAP!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Shravan nahin tho sumo nahin hai aur hum fans bi nahin hai😭 So my wishful thinking is shravan is lost somewhere and how he returns will form the future story!! Now I can't wait anymore so update soon please!!!!!

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