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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

@Zo wo to hum hain 🤣
Night hon!!
Take care 🤗

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Reshma Ahmed

@Perpetuity

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Perpetuity
Aur pj se 😃

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: anonymousanju
haha rofl priyam ...I didn't mean that...lalita pawar lol na ye to bilkul v na n witch to na yar bilkul I didn't mean that...(bonny ban skti if u want afteral itni achi witch h n sare witches bure ni hote vampire series dkhkr ye to i know ab :-p) n thanks for Damon's. pic :-p

Chill ya 😆
Bonnie Bennett !! Cool 😎

INCENDIA 🤣
You're welcome 😛

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: orion23

<font color="#ff0033">@Bold Thanks so much Nik!!</font>

Oh!! am sorry zoya (about ur name)...I dont know why but it just came naturally...
i'll call u zoya from now onwards n I dont mind at all!! 😊
Edited !! 😊

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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Roshni2015

@Roshni2015

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Zoya,

Darling... Doffing my hat to you girl.. This is beyond magnificent..

I loved it.. Both endings were brilliant.. But I'm more inclined towards the Not So Happy Ending..

Gosh, it gave so much feels.. The end convo was amazing.. It was beyond words beautiful.. I seriously can't appreciate it enough... It was that awesome... Shravan only got a moment of peace.. At least he knew that what he craved for all his life was after all his always.. Aahh the lines he said... I remember a song here Main Rahoon Ya Na Rahoon... Tum mujhme sada baki rehna...

How can you write so amazingly well yaar...

Well, you're brilliant n you must know it already... I absolutely loved it..

Hugs to you girl.. 🤗

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Suruchi

@sheeluneelu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Zoya🤗

Amazing write-up dear

Par ye kya kar diya Shravan 😭..no I can't accept it even in my dreams so I pefer happy ending ...😃

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kennashreign

@kennashreign

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

This was really nice. I liked the difference in the genre. You've left this story at a place from where it can go two ways, an open end or a definite end. I hope you can make this a two shot and add a little more to the end.

Cheers!

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Castile2

@Castile2

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

How could anyone write something so heart wrenchingly beautiful?

Hey Zoya

I had no idea regarding this alternate ending and just came across it...

I have never been able to cope with sad endings before but this was..

I never cry...I that 'strong' person on the outside for everyone in life and you my dear just made me cry buckets.

The first time I ever cried while reading anything was 'A thousand Splendid Suns' and this is the second time I am crying...

But I am not saying I did not like it! I simply loved it...they are together but not together...They are ShraMan they don't need to be physically present in the mortal world to be with each other.

Their love transcends beyond the universe, dimensions, time and death.

Again, beautiful and impeccable as ever Miss Zoya!

Regards
Cas

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

This ending was sooo😭😭 omg!! Shravu ko maar diya. ...never felt so much pain...seriously...but i loved the way you write..do write more...and thanks for the pm.

-Dolly

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: 0Bella0
OMGGG dark story finally
Me danca
reshhh
Hey one question how is your bro sista I m sure he'll be fine he has all our prayers dear

UNRESS 😭
karna to nhi Chaahiye but still me doing it
You liar 😡 😡 😡 you told me that you dunno how to write dark story Phir ye kya tha mujhse jhoot bola 😭
I'll maintain that.. Mujhe dark likhne nahi aata.. This was my 1st somewhat bordering dark piece, I'm still learning...
Zoya!!!!!!! Kaha hai ye ladki moi isse chhodegi nhi 😡
She made me cry sabke saamne meri chop ho gayi 😭 😭 😭
Lol in my defence I had given choices and warnings😛
When someone was following her I literally thought sumo tapkegi 🤣 but that guy was none other than shravan
Who knows, mood hua toh uska character bhi koi din nikal lega😆
you know what I didn't read sad ending cuz I can't bear something more sad than this
ye chotu Sa dil bohot naazuk hai yaar
Happy ending mai sad toh aaise tha nahi kuch, ya it was high on emotions.. Maybe that's what got you...
And aajkl 500 & 1000 k notes v nhi chal rahe tissue Kaha se laaungi
Happy ending k liye bohot bohot shukriya [>:D <]
Anytime bro!!!!
Sacchi for me this one is real ending bas!!!!!
Ahhh when sumo took him to her room I was expecting a kiss 🤣
PS. Gutter mind on full swing 🤣
Hahaha... In my head, shaadi ke pehle nothing 😆 Dono bhi aaise hi the...
Their convo in first update took ma heart away 😳
I never loved this dialogue before as I loved it reading here today * aaj nhi sumo aaj nahi* jesus I can imagine shravan saying that
Jesus that would be killer!!!
That car scene
sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob sob
Sorry I removed the massive parts of sobs, it was getting really long😆
AND AT LAST THANKU THANKU THANKU SO MUCH FOR THIS OS [>:D <] [<:D]

@Bold Thanks a ton Preetha!!

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