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Swarnima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Hi Swarnima, welcome to forum...

I read both the part one go...

nice starting...
continue soon...

Thanks. Surely will.

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Swarnima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Sunain
Hiii sawarnima!!!

Firstly m deadly sorry for making u wait for such a long time..m really really sorry..yar mein bhi kya karti..koi naam dimagh mein ahi nhi raha tha..but thankfully endedup with three..so wil tell u all three n u also tell me ur options so tht i can pick the apt one for u..plz..deal! 😉
So mine were 1-Twinkie 2-Swaru 3-Nimmi
plz be honest if u liked none of thm as i literally won't mind at all😃...n do let me knw ur options too.
N sorry once again.!

Wel coming to the update...Woah man..wht was tht..
Excellent peice yar...loved it alot...was really beautifully penned!"
Full of cuteness..❤️
Really loved the begining..lol..Boldie Sumo..Pussy Shravan😆
Suman's apology made me teary..n the way Shravan consoled her ws fantastic..his heart pierced whn ever she cried..awwh..so much love❤️
Oohh man the last line was fantablous..srsly..The Best one...i never ce across such brilliant teasy line ever..this was the besteast among all i ever read 👏 👏
"Now tht i have learnt,won't u let me practice"...❤️
My fav part 😳
plz update soon..as i won't be able to wait for so long😃
Love ya🤗

Hello Sunain, isn't it said that every wait is worth if it's worth waiting! Glad that u put so much of thoughts. Well Swaru was in my list too, so think we can settle with that. BTW does everyone call u Sunain or u too have a nickname like me?

Thanks for the much needed encouragement and appreciation. Shall surely update but it might take a bit longer since a no. of tests and quizzes are lined up!😭

Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Hello Sunain, isn't it said that every wait is worth if it's worth waiting! Glad that u put so much of thoughts. Well Swaru was in my list too, so think we can settle with that. BTW does everyone call u Sunain or u too have a nickname like me?
Thanks for the much needed encouragement and appreciation. Shall surely update but it might take a bit longer since a no. of tests and quizzes are lined up!😭

Hiii Swaru!!!

umm wel my name is Sunain..n sadly only Piya gave me a nick name no one else..she calls me Suu...n i hav never thought of giving myself a nickie..😛

wel best of luck for ur tests n quizzes..😉

n yaa plz dont forget to pm me..coz me myself wud be busy these days so wil hardly get online..plz do try.

love yaa🤗

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Swarnima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

I'm updating after so long hope you haven't forgotten me😳, sorry if had you waiting.😊

"Sumo? "

"Hmmm."

"Now that I've learnt, won't u let me practice?"

She took a second to understand before she blushed harder and dug her face deeper into the crook of his neck.

"Arrey! Ab kya ho gaya? You weren't so shy earlier? My turn now."

She immediately sat up, flushed red, "Shravan they must be thinking what's taking us so long. Don't you think we should go down take everyone's blessings?"

"We must but only after I have my share of kiss from you", he said sitting up, tilting her face up by her chin. She closed her eyes tight.

He smiled, "my silly Sumo" he murmured while he tenderly kissed both her eyes one by one to ease them. He then, moved towards her cheeks and then down to her lips which were even more rosier than usual because of the crying and of course, their first round of kissing.

Today his happiness knew no bounds. How he used to daydream about this moment since their childhood times! Even when he was in London Sumo was always his. Though he was angry with her she never failed to meet him in his dreams. But at that time he was pretty certain that real lifes weren't so bright and blissful as one's thinking, he was very clear that he couldn't have any future with Suman, then too it was always her and no one else. No one else could make do things as she could. Even though she wasn't there, she was the one he was trying to prove. Everything he achieved, every zenith he attained it was for him to rise above her standards. If only he could have known that she was longing for him even as much as a tenth fraction as him, he would have left everything and ran back to the Sumo of his dreams. Thank God for Preity that today he was finally aware of her truest feelings for him!

"Bhaiya.. Sumo.. ", Pushkar called out when Shravan had almost reached her. She was startled like anything! Sumo rose up with a jump to hover around here and there like a madwoman mumbling unheards.

"Awesome timing!", he said with a sigh. "And this woman why does she be have to so afraid now! Did she forget that I'm her husband, for crying out loud!", he thought.

"I don't think I'm required to knock before entering?", Pushkar inquired from outside their room.

Shravan came behind her and slyly slid his arm around her waist, making more confused than already and pulled her to him firmly before answering, "not at all Chote, please come in."

Pushkar smiled on seeing his most favorite people finally happy together.

"So Bhaiya how did you like your surprise? You should thank me properly enough as I'm the one who brought your Sumo here."

"Chote you can ask me anything today and that is yours", Shravan said still having his grip around her with full haq.

"Will do that later tonight, but let's come downstairs as Badi Ma is saying that she'll leave in some time, she wishes to see you both before that."

To Be Continued..

Thank you for reading.

I'm afraid I didn't bore u all.

Do tell me if you liked it.

Dear readers your encouragement helps me write, thank you.

Special thanks to Sunain and Anu who have been very generous in appreciation.

This part was dedicated to Naamika.

Love,

Swarnima

Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago

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Naamika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Awww! Thank you for dedicating Such a lovely update to me. Just loved it and. This version continuation of edkv is jist perfect. Everything is just on point.WELCOME BACK

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Reeba shukla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

I read all the chapters in one go and found its nice.. Do continue dear.. Waiting for next chapter

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Wow it was short but truly sweet. Loved it👏

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

amazing update

totally romantic

absolutely loved it

continue soon

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deltadawn

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

lovely continuation of story dear.

The teacher became the student and now is back in his groove 😆

this is what I expected from episode 156..

heartfelt apology from sumo - check

shraman romance -check

sanskari buoy finally hitting puberty - check

👏

Suman's apprehension is too cute which is as always after taking the action lol.😉

Nirmala amma is leaving? good riddance. I am still in original EDKV zone of mind. if you want to make her character likeable then I believe she needs to apologize to him as well...