To Be Continued.. (ShraMan SS) - Page 11

Originally posted by: arhi2016

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Originally posted by: evaviego

awww... this was so cute...

fabulous SS Swarnima..

i was just smiling all through the chapters..

How i wish sumo had confessed in the show as well..

by the way i loved your writing style.. some lines just make me go awestruck..

Would love to read more from you. 😊

Originally posted by: krutish22

Read all part in one go... it Simply superb..

Thanks for such a beatiful ss

Hiii 😃
Without wasting a sec coming to the upiiz..

Chapter 3
U wont believe i have a 100 watt smile ruling my face rite now 😃
God this chap was so so cute n lovely❤️
Shravan teasing her Sumo all flushed 😳...n his haqq jamana..loved it[8-<]
as usual Pushkar kabab mein hadi...jo sayhath kay leay bilkul hanikark nhi😆...After all yaa aur Preeti hi tu in love birds kay cupid thay 😉 likin iska mtlb ya nhi kay Shraman k romance ki band bajaay ya 😳
Ab yay Nirupa Roy i mean Nirmala kahan chal dein 😉


Chapter 4
Shravan...is such a romantic hunk...i wud say now my grin has turned into 200 watts one😃
Really loved it...this one was soo beautifully penned!
Specially Nirmala-Sumo convo...tht was outstanding...no words to define its beauty❤️
The trio moment was also very sweet.
Pushkar is such a tease sometimes 😆
I knw Shravan's imp work very well 😳...hormones jag gaay hain sahab zaday kay😆😳

Chapter 5
Haah...Swaru...wht shud i say...m all speechless...U R A TERRIFIC WRITER!!! 👏...srsly i mean it!
By now my grin has turned into a 1000 watt one 😃 n literally my jaws r hurting😆
Oohhh Gawd!!!...The Shraman moments were Shramanlicioualy Delicious❤️
Loved it to core...just kept on admiring thm
There were so many emotions n feels in this part...love u yar...u made my day...reading this was a sheer pleasure for me😳😃
Its true...it isnt the end its just the beginning...beginnig of two souls two life two hearts ONE!...Its just a fresh start😉
It was a mindblowing jouney.

Haah...now coming to the Epilogue...i knw i knw...u want the silent readers to write an ideal one but sweet heart therez no way m gonna let u go so easily...mjhy Epilogue chahiyay woh bhi tumhara likha hoa...n thts final..i wont mind at all if u write it after ur exams i'll wait till April..but i want one n from u...bas no more further arguments ..itna zabardast SS likha hai n how can i miss the opportunity to read an Epilogue from such a stupendous writer...no ways...i knw u'll surely nail it so plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz ek epilogue likh do PlzZz meray leay*puppy eyes*
m literally begging u...maan jao na Swaru...pulleeezzz
I'll be eagerly waiting for ur reply plz Yes hi honq chahiyay...fingers crossed😳


TADAA!!! 🥳
Yaa i completed it...woah..tht was hell fun...yar i missed it sooo badly😃
Ab lag raha hai asli Sunain bahar araho hai...😛
Really Swaru u r a mindblowing writer...jitni tafree ki jaay kam hai ⭐️
hats off to u bae 👏
M all flattered after reading it...plz di give us another story soon..will be eagerly waiting to read more n more from u=:D]😉
Now m feeling bad n sorry...meiny itni dear kyun kar di yahan atay atay aur itna khubsorat SS parhanay kay leay.. 😔
But therez a saying na "better late thn never"...so m hell elated tht i finally read it😃
Trillions of hugs n kisses for u my dear🤗...love yaa❤️


Take Care!
Sunain ❤️

Hey buddy...
Sorry for commenting late...
Read all parts in one go and I loved them immensely dear...!!!
Wonderfully written... 👏
This is what we want to see in the last epi as well...Atleast few moments of Happy ShraMan together... 😕
But your writeup gave that feeling...Thank you for that ...!! 😊
I really loved how Shravan feel contended after listening to Nirmala's confession that she loves Shravan the most... 😊

And I loved your view about the title...!!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of writing buddy... 😊
Do write more on ShraMan ...would love to read..!!
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Originally posted by: Nik03

Hey buddy...
Sorry for commenting late...
Read all parts in one go and I loved them immensely dear...!!!
Wonderfully written... 👏
This is what we want to see in the last epi as well...Atleast few moments of Happy ShraMan together... 😕
But your writeup gave that feeling...Thank you for that ...!! 😊
I really loved how Shravan feel contended after listening to Nirmala's confession that she loves Shravan the most... 😊

And I loved your view about the title...!!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of writing buddy... 😊
Do write more on ShraMan ...would love to read..!!
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Originally posted by: Sunain

Hiii 😃
Without wasting a sec coming to the upiiz..

Chapter 3
U wont believe i have a 100 watt smile ruling my face rite now 😃

😊
God this chap was so so cute n lovely
Shravan teasing her Sumo all flushed 😳...n his haqq jamana..loved it[8-<]
as usual Pushkar kabab mein hadi...jo sayhath kay leay bilkul hanikark nhi😆...After all yaa aur Preeti hi tu in love birds kay cupid thay 😉 likin iska mtlb ya nhi kay Shraman k romance ki band bajaay ya 😳
Ab yay Nirupa Roy i mean Nirmala kahan chal dein 😉


Chapter 4
Shravan...is such a romantic hunk...i wud say now my grin has turned into 200 watts one😃
Really loved it...this one was soo beautifully penned!
Specially Nirmala-Sumo convo...tht was outstanding...no words to define its beauty❤️
The trio moment was also very sweet.
Pushkar is such a tease sometimes 😆
I knw Shravan's imp work very well 😳...hormones jag gaay hain sahab zaday kay😆😳

Chapter 5
Haah...Swaru...wht shud i say...m all speechless...U R A TERRIFIC WRITER!!! 👏...srsly i mean it!
By now my grin has turned into a 1000 watt one 😃 n literally my jaws r hurting😆
Oohhh Gawd!!!...The Shraman moments were Shramanlicioualy Delicious❤️
Loved it to core...just kept on admiring thm
There were so many emotions n feels in this part...love u yar...u made my day...reading this was a sheer pleasure for me😳😃
Its true...it isnt the end its just the beginning...beginnig of two souls two life two hearts ONE!...Its just a fresh start😉
It was a mindblowing jouney.

Haah...now coming to the Epilogue...i knw i knw...u want the silent readers to write an ideal one but sweet heart therez no way m gonna let u go so easily...mjhy Epilogue chahiyay woh bhi tumhara likha hoa...n thts final..i wont mind at all if u write it after ur exams i'll wait till April..but i want one n from u...bas no more further arguments ..itna zabardast SS likha hai n how can i miss the opportunity to read an Epilogue from such a stupendous writer...no ways...i knw u'll surely nail it so plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz ek epilogue likh do PlzZz meray leay*puppy eyes*
m literally begging u...maan jao na Swaru...pulleeezzz
I'll be eagerly waiting for ur reply plz Yes hi honq chahiyay...fingers crossed😳


TADAA!!! 🥳
Yaa i completed it...woah..tht was hell fun...yar i missed it sooo badly😃
Ab lag raha hai asli Sunain bahar araho hai...😛
Really Swaru u r a mindblowing writer...jitni tafree ki jaay kam hai ⭐️
hats off to u bae 👏
M all flattered after reading it...plz di give us another story soon..will be eagerly waiting to read more n more from u=:D]😉
Now m feeling bad n sorry...meiny itni dear kyun kar di yahan atay atay aur itna khubsorat SS parhanay kay leay.. 😔
But therez a saying na "better late thn never"...so m hell elated tht i finally read it😃
Trillions of hugs n kisses for u my dear🤗...love yaa❤️


Take Care!
Sunain ❤️

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Wow I'm in lack of words to describe how I feel like, never has any one appreciated me this much ever!!

And here my sister is like what's wrong with this girl why is grinning like an idiot to her phone!

whn i was reading everyone was fast asleep so meri tu full time bachat hogae😆

warna meri family koi moka nhi chorti mjhy insane bolanay ka🤪

And listen if Ive been able to write anything at all, then it has been the encouragement and love from the lovely people here especially the way you support any new writer is really commendable!

So the credit goes to you.

And if you keep on praising like that then one might be able to write a novel someday.❤️

hy hy hy...break lagao...mein maan sakti hon k mein booastup kar sakti hon likin jo bhi sab likhtay hain woh unhi ka kamal hai more likely unkay brain cells ka tu plz mjhy tu un bacharon ki mahnat ka credit mat hi do!😳

Loved that you loved the haqq jamana part. Shravan really never got a chance to go that in the show 😆

Obviously i loved it...jab koi kisi par haq jamata hai tu apna apna lagta hai tu Shravan ka ya gesture tu❤️

Nirupa Roy🤣 we hate her

If only uske hormones thoda pehle jaage hote toh we would have witnessed some romance at least!

'ShraManlious' love with this word.

I so agree😆

It was a pleasure for me to share this story with you.

(just my stupid expection from the the extension of the last episode)

It was a pleasure for me too n dare u call it stupid😡...its such a beautiful SS😃

Now that you have said it I'll havta write an Epilogue, I must but darling after I completele at least one third of the syllabus which will be Feb mid, I hope ull wait.

Yaay🥳...epilogue milay ga😃

Waiting for your updates as well.

Yar phlay sab ki updates parh loon phr hi apni update ka soochon gi...par koshish karon gi k jaldi karon😉

Love, hugs and kisses to you too.

for u too my dear!

Take care

Swarnima

P.S.: I have thought of a nick name for u as well. Thank you so much Suzie(let me know if you like it) for being a Love

Awwh i loved it...Thank u shoo much❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Sunain

@bold

Love u too...Glad i cud make u smile😃