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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey hi...Sry m late..
Read both the parts in a go..
First of all..Welcome to India Forums...U'll enjoy every minute spent on the IF..Every1 is really mm..They are the best I would say*no words to tell abt all these lovelies*
N i would love to call u Swara...Hope u r ok with it..😊
So now coming to the update...Both of them ver fab..!!!Sumo ne Directly kiss kiya...Desperate I should say..😉N the second one was cool...Lagta hai Shravan ne bade aache classesliye hai london se..😆
You remember during our childhood days you had once hurt yourself falling from your cycle? You were crying in pain and I tried all I could to lessen it. That's exactly when I realized it was love for me! And again when you fell while you were running around, the time you came here to gift that book? Every single cry pierced my heart, and that's when I realized that the love I had assumed had faded by time and fate had surfaced itself one more time. Imagine the pain I went through when had met with that accident. I died a million deaths! Loved this piece...
...P.S: would u try to give a lill longer chappy if its possible??😊
All in all amazing chappies...Update soon..
P.S: the name swara is reserved for me...*if u dont mind*😉
Love,
ANU
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Swarnima, welcome to forum...

I read both the part one go...

nice starting...
continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hiii sawarnima!!!

Firstly m deadly sorry for making u wait for such a long time..m really really sorry..yar mein bhi kya karti..koi naam dimagh mein ahi nhi raha tha..but thankfully endedup with three..so wil tell u all three n u also tell me ur options so tht i can pick the apt one for u..plz..deal! 😉
So mine were 1-Twinkie 2-Swaru 3-Nimmi
plz be honest if u liked none of thm as i literally won't mind at all😃...n do let me knw ur options too.
N sorry once again.!

Wel coming to the update...Woah man..wht was tht..
Excellent peice yar...loved it alot...was really beautifully penned!"
Full of cuteness..❤️
Really loved the begining..lol..Boldie Sumo..Pussy Shravan😆
Suman's apology made me teary..n the way Shravan consoled her ws fantastic..his heart pierced whn ever she cried..awwh..so much love❤️
Oohh man the last line was fantablous..srsly..The Best one...i never ce across such brilliant teasy line ever..this was the besteast among all i ever read 👏 👏
"Now tht i have learnt,won't u let me practice"...❤️
My fav part 😳
plz update soon..as i won't be able to wait for so long😃
Love ya🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing Update... Loved it

Continue soon

Thanks Jerry😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

so sweet and so cute
amazing
continue soon

Thank you😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Amazing update😊...beautifully written. But so short...😭we need more to read about them. Please continue asap

Hi Dhanyata, thank you. Sorry dear I'm a new writer will havta learn a lot before writing long pieces without them turning monotonic. But the next one will definitely be longer that this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Joyness

Lovely . ..loved it please continue

Thanks😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Swarnima, very beautifully written. That's Shravan for us, on one he can be so intense and romantic but on their other he would think a lot before taking the first step. Nice flow of story, very relatable. Update soon. 👍🏼

Lubna.

Hello Lubna, thank you. I really wished somebody told that. That's just what I had tried to depict. Hope it came out nicely.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Safire

Ha!! Shravan Malhotra has learnt kissing from Suman Malhotra😉very nicely written chapter!!! Expecting much shraman scenes in the future...

Hello Safire, we all know how slow our Mr. Lawyer Malhotra was in these matters! If Sumo hadn't taken charge he would have made her wait for another decade!😆😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Hey hi...Sry m late..
Read both the parts in a go..
First of all..Welcome to India Forums...U'll enjoy every minute spent on the IF..Every1 is really mm..They are the best I would say*no words to tell abt all these lovelies*
N i would love to call u Swara...Hope u r ok with it..😊
So now coming to the update...Both of them ver fab..!!!Sumo ne Directly kiss kiya...Desperate I should say..😉N the second one was cool...Lagta hai Shravan ne bade aache classesliye hai london se..😆
You remember during our childhood days you had once hurt yourself falling from your cycle? You were crying in pain and I tried all I could to lessen it. That's exactly when I realized it was love for me! And again when you fell while you were running around, the time you came here to gift that book? Every single cry pierced my heart, and that's when I realized that the love I had assumed had faded by time and fate had surfaced itself one more time. Imagine the pain I went through when had met with that accident. I died a million deaths! Loved this piece...
...P.S: would u try to give a lill longer chappy if its possible??😊
All in all amazing chappies...Update soon..
P.S: the name swara is reserved for me...*if u dont mind*😉
Love,
ANU

Hi Anu! Never expected such a warm welcome! Thanks a lot!
Swara!! I love it, call me anything with love I'll be more than happy plus Swara has a nice sound. I give u its copyright😆😉 Tell me u also find my name way too long!?

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