To Be Continued.. (ShraMan SS)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello people. I might be a newbie to you all but let me tell you I have known each one of you for a long time. Have been a silent member for like more than 7 months and I must say that the forum has had the best writers ever! I have loved every discussion and every story posted here. Hope you'll welcome me as well.

He had literally swept her off her feet. He held his world in his arms, had lifted her along with her dreams and she felt that she belonged to someone who could protect her all her life. They stayed like that for God knows how long, finally Shravan whispered, "now?" This made Sumo roll her eyes and say, " ab yeh bhi mujhe batana hoga, chashmish? Put me down and then kiss me." Shravan obediently brought her down and started to bend closer to her, hesitantly. He had imagined their first kiss in millions of ways but today he was quite unsure, she was the love of his life after all! Here he couldn't afford to go wrong. Hadn't he read it somewhere that most ladies decided a man's potential on the basis of the first kiss! However, he closed the distance, inch by inch and stopped just before her lips. Sumo gave an asking look which scared him even more and he quickly finished the kiss with a chaste peck. "Fattoo!! is this how you kiss your wife? Has London taught you nothing?", with that Sumo grabbed his collars and pulled him to her.
To Be Continued...

I wrote it to soothe my heart which is still #hopingAgainstHope for a season 2.
Do let me know if I can write more. It was my first try so please don't be too harsh.😳
Love
Swarnima.


INDEX
Part1 pg1
Part2 pg3
Part3 pg5
Part4 pg8
Part5 pg10
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The only think that i want say is please continue soon
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Wow..it's nice..
Shravan dnt want sumo to think bad abt his potential so only he is afraid to kiss her first time...nice.
Plz continue soon...
LavSriya..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii Sawarnima!!!
Sunain here 😊

Firstly a warm warm welcome to u as i just joined IF as member.. 🤗
i must tell u...u'll hav hell lot if fun here..ppl here damn good..really helpfull n deary..u'll enjoy alot for sure..thts my garantee 😉
Whnever u need any help u can ask anyone as everyone here wil be pleased to help u..so never hesitate.
Coming to ur update.
Woah man tht was amazing...
captivating start...do continue soon
u seems to be an amazing writer...keep writing 😉
Shravan a fattoo 😆...Sumo tu Sumo hai...Sumo wrestler 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi,
Welcome to India Forum.

I can fully understand you since I also tried my hand attempting a short OS of our jodi Shraman. And to say the least, the encouragement I received here was fabulous. So dont worry..😊

You say it is your first attempt but I am not ready to accept it ... because it is so fabulous...👏

Please continue soon...
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Nice start... please update soon
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That's so sweet of you Sunain 😊😊
Should I say that I have made a friend on IF??
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Originally posted by: pisces17

Hi,

Welcome to India Forum.

I can fully understand you since I also tried my hand attempting a short OS of our jodi Shraman. And to say the least, the encouragement I received here was fabulous. So dont worry..😊

You say it is your first attempt but I am not ready to accept it ... because it is so fabulous...👏

Please continue soon...


Thankyou so much.😳
Me to Eagerly waiting for you to update bringing Shravan back
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Hy swarnima...dolly here..welcome to IF
Coming to your post...it was awesome...i loved it a lot...and also i love the way you write...your writing skills are too good...so i just want to say that keep writing...and i hope this a ss and you'll update soon...😊😊
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Thank you for your comments Naamika, Vyshnav, amlavs, Jerry and Prit.. Will surely update in a few days.😛

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