Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 56

Hey Sanjh,
What an amazing update. It was sad because of their breakup but I think this was important, although I thought he would just take time for the wedding. But he needed this for himself. I'm sure he'll bounce back once figure out he cannot stay away from her. I think Sumo will now make him jealous. That would be fun. Shravan is at his best when he's jealous. Just update soon. Have a great trip and take good care of your health. ❤️

Lubna.

Awesome update

Saaanjjhhh...first of all i am really really really sorry yar i am this late in commenting ...actually hua kya i read it and was quite disturbed (i usually get reading emotional stuff) and closed if ...and after that i thought that i have already commented i forgot that i did not...today i read it again and realised that i did not comment already so again sorry...

Hi sanjh...happy new yr...
Sorry for commenting late..was busy with my exams..read the last 2 chaps in a go...
Updates were as usually amazing beautifully penned...
OMG so much happened in sharmans life...
Break up 😭 ... but as u said sumo wil be sumo she will make sharavan realize his mistake 😉 ...
Continue soon...
Thanks for pm... 😊

Hey dear...
Wonderful update..!!
Shravan's insecurities got better of him n he brokeup with Sumo...A not so good move Shravan!!
Poor ShraMan...Suffering soo much!!
Lets see what happens next...
Super Exited!!!!
Update soonish..waiting!!
Loads of Love
Nik

Sanjh waiting for update

Originally posted by: Castile2

Sanjh ittne dino baad update aur woh bhi breakup?! 😭

But its sumo so nothing to worry!

And being in Shravan's place, his actions can somehow be justified.. The self doubt and insecurity.

Waiting for the next update!

Till then

Cas 😊

Originally posted by: Naamika

I'm really very desperate to read next part. todays part was perfect build up for upcoming events in shraman's life. Hey next part jaldi chahiye and yes Enjoy your trip,happy journey.

I know why shravan is behaving like this but I'm sure sumo won't disappoint. One thing I love about sumo in your story is that she is quite impulsive. I know being impulsive is not a good thing but it works for sumo. She never hesitate or wait to show shravan how much she loves him

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

So much emotional update...

Shravan ka dimag Sach meh karab hai..But can understand his insecurities are the main reason..

Glad that sumo itni jaldi haar nahi manegi

Eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hmm ...this was expected. ..but I am certainly not disappointed..your Sumo is not resilient...she won't take anything lying down...so it's actually going to be fun to see their game going forward...great update Saanjh. ..waiting for the next one!