Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 14

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

My my... SM knocked down by Sumo...😳

Don't mind preekar,,if they aint overshadowing ShraMan...😛

Superlike the update ...update soon...😃

Originally posted by: srividyasubbu1

Read it. Too gud. Thanx to you writers tht are keeping EDKV characters alive. This is a different take to the story and I loved it. Just waiting for the next updates, so make it fast.

Originally posted by: Vyshnav

Loved this part❤️ Now cant wait for next part!

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Sanjh...

Haaye kya update diya tune... Maza aa gaya...

"Thank god it was ur shirt nt trousers.." 🤣 sumo ne shravan ko chuup karaya.. That cracked me up too badly.. 😆

Aab sumo uss alisha ke shaadi Mey jaayegi Aur usse jaayegi... Haina...

Amazing chappy as always... Do continue soon n thanks for the pm

Love,

Anu😊

Originally posted by: abcd00

Awesome

I liked it

Preekar will be very ok

But you can show a different plot not lyk ekdv just a bit different ...

Update soon

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

Your Sumo ... yes your Sumo is the one ideal woman ... you have created willful... strong character ... and Sharavan ...awww he is sweet annoying fellow ... already in love with YOUR SHARAMAN... 👏 great work ... waiting for next update...

Originally posted by: vimikrao

What an chappe...

Sumo 's close ness towards Shravan kuch kuch hone laga bande ko... Which was hidden since long ... Trying to come out any moment...

Yes we will see more of romantic Shravan, which we didn't get to see in the show!

Preekar scene u can add but don't give imp than our own Shraman... Show mein Preekar ko hi poora imp diya & sidelined Shraman.!!... Here I don't want that repeat again... Only Shraman...

Let's see what can be done with them

Pls Shravan ko jaldi se apne pairo pe kada kardo per uski poori credit toh Sumo ko hi milni chahiye... Do some miracle & Shravan should stand on his own legs... Than no going back only Shraman story...

He will be soon! Patience dear patience!

Thank u for PM

Update soon

Originally posted by: Uroojj

Very nice update. . really loved it. the concept was different so is the update. I want it to flow like that . please yaa keep updating as soon as possible. Jaldi jaldi can't wait for next part.

Originally posted by: dhanyata

super duper update. Shravan taming😆 Shravan started feeling different with sumo pushkar closeness...he he he ...Good start to ur true love life shravan babu...😳

He will be as jealous as it was shown in the show!

Nice development from shravan's side in this chappy. He loved her companion. Started feeling for her. Wanted to spend time with her. feeling jealousy. He started trusting her more. How he asked her company to Alisha's marriage. ! Woww... If not sumo, then I think he will never try to attend alisha's wedding. Am really excited now. When they attend the marriage together. Alisha ki band bajene wali hai.😆😆

Bahut zoro se bajegi

And yeah... About Pushkar Preeti, already saw more than required in the show. So not much interested. . But if you wanted it anywhere in the story, its ur decision. No problem unless they are not occupying our jodi's space🥱

Let's see...

Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next dhamaka

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Wonderful update . Loved it... everyone believes that sumo is the who can help shravan to recover..do continue soon