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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sb1185


Thank you so much! I am trying my best! I am really glad that you liked it! Will update asap.

I can see your efforts they r fruitfull..
Cant wait for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sb1185

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<font color="#0000ff">Let's see we will think on that later on, they will have their part but now
it's
only shraman.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Let's see what happens next! Till then..🤗</font>




Hahaa...how can i forget tht..Pushkar..[I]The Cupid[I]
i still remember how Pushhkar kept on pushing thm n was making thm realise their feelings for eachother whn Shravan was busy keeping distance with Sumo n Sumo was completly pissed off by his antics..n thn Pushkar talked to Shravan at Malhotra Mansion n with Sumo at her PCT..tht convo was❤️

N as long as Preekar's part is concerned..yaa for now just focus on our Shraman..Preekar some other time😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice going!!! This chapter has increased my eagerness and expectations!!!! Great job!!! continue soon...
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Originally posted by: Safire

Nice going!!! This chapter has increased my eagerness and expectations!!!! Great job!!! continue soon...


Thank you so much! Will try to update asap!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sb1185


Thank you.. You made me blush! 😳 And that particular part, just imagine Shravan's reaction! Our naughty sumo! 😉 Sumo bahut zor se bajane wali hai Alisha ki! Just wait and watch! 😆 Will try to continue soon! But I am writing all these from my phone! It's really gets tiresome! But koi na...aur haan, tu naya kuch likh! Waiting for that too! 🤗


Sure dea..U'll get that soon...update asap😊
Love,
ANU😳
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Thank you 😳
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Good Update
Thanks for ur writing
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Originally posted by: IshyMishy

Good Update

Thanks for ur writing


Thank you 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great work
U beautifully penned it
Plz update soon

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Hola peeps, i am back again, this time with a longer update! That's why it took time. Hope all of you are doing well!

Ok... Without wasting time, lets get started!


Chapter 6


Sumo,... "
"hmmm... "
"Would you like to come with me? "
"where?"
"At Alisha's marriage? "

Suman was shocked! "Are you sure?...I mean you really want to go there? "

"I guess yes! But will you accompany me? " what an odd request, thought Suman! "I dont know, even I am not sure, whether you should go there too! " She just didn't want to see that vile girl's face! But something triggered her mind, why did he want to go! After a much thought, "Ok... I will come with you! " she couldn't just let him go there alone, what if that girl would insult him and...no no no, she just didn't want to see the broken state of him, which she saw couple of days ago.
Shravan was thinking hard too! He didn't know, why he wanted to go there, that too with Suman! Or he just wanted to show Alisha, that her marriage wasn't effecting him! But surprisingly it was true, only Suman was in his mind! He just wanted to go with Suman, and he was sure, she would wear something pretty, not this regular stuff; and definitely it would enhance more beauty into her delicate figure! "When is the marriage?"
"hmmm?. ..."
"When is the marriage? "
"Day after tomorrow...monday.. "
"Ok, see you then.. On Monday... "
Shravan panicked "why, are you taking leave? Won't you come tomorrow? " Now it was confirmed! This man had gone mad! "Tomorrow is Sunday..."
"Ohhh... Ya ok! Bye then! " he scowled!
"Isss admi ko Sundays se bhi problem hai! "
*****


Though it's Sunday, Suman had to go to Malhotra Mansion. One project report that had to be delivered to the Agarwals, on Monday early morning! Considering the traffic problem of Mumbai, she couldn't take risk to give that file on Monday!

She learnt from bahadur kaka, that her boss was busy with his physiotherapist, at outside lawn, and the whole family was there too.

"Arree Suman beta, tum aaj? " said Nirmala, somehow she always become happy seeing suman! "good morning mam, yeh file dene aayi thi. Its the project file.. " pushkar grabbed her hand and said "pehele bhaiya se to mille... Yeh sab baatein baad mein.. "

Shravan was busy doing his exercises, he didn't notice Suman! " bhaiya dekho kaun aayi hai. ..subah se aapka mood off hai, dekho abhi thik hota hai ya nahin! "...pushkar laughed at his own joke leaving Suman blush terribly, and making Shravan happy! Yes, he was happy, seeing Suman, he thought she might had come to meet him, his heart swelled! "Haan woh Agarwals wala file deni thi, kal early morning submit karna hai, kal agar time pe nahin pahuch payi to, socha... "
"De diya hoto jao! Aur kya!" Shravan fumed! "kyun, abhi nahin, tu chal mere sath.. ." pushkar again grabbed her hand and took her to the other side of lawn!

Shravan so not liked it! He was watching Suman, so at ease with pushkar; laughing, whacking him! She was never like this with him! Of course, pushkar was her friend, he was not!

She was looking good though, in that blue kurti, the delicate material of that kurti clung to her body, revealing all the curves she had, how would it feel to take her in arms, she must be soft, how would she react, if he did so, but she considered him, only her boss, she always maintained the professional attitude towards him! It made Shravan a bit uneasy! He was so encaged in his reverie, that he didn't notice, his leg was shaking!

Ramnath was standing beside Shravan, watching him silently! He knew his son, the way Shravan watching suman, it was clear that his son had lost his heart! Again! Ramnath once trusted Alisha, and what she did to Shravan was unbearable ! But this time, he, himself would see, whether she was good for his son or not!

"Wow, Mr Malhotra, you actually did move your leg! This is splendid! " said the physiotherapist, all his hard work behind this man seemed to be fruitful!

" Areee wah bhaiya... " pushkar ran to Shravan, nirmala and suman also came there, "Mera beta jaldi thik ho jayega"...nirmala hugged Shravan with teary eyes.

Ramnath was also very happy, but he noticed, how Shravan was looking at Suman with those love filled eyes, as if it was Suman who was only important for him! " No no,I am not going to sit and see again, not again... "


*****



Suman was getting ready it was already 6 in the evening, and the muhurat was on 8 p.m. "Wow di, look at you, you are looking so good in this lehenga! " said preety.. "Wait wait, iske saath mere yeh ear rings pehen lo! Wow simply wow! Aaj to Shravan aapko dekhta hi reh jayega! "

"Kuch bhi, bolti hai, woh mujhe kyun dekhega! I am just accompanying him, I am his PA afterall.." Suman sighed! Preety didn't say anything, she knew how stubborn her di is! Her di really started liking him, but she wouldn't agree! The way, her di was explaining, how Shravan moved his leg, it was pretty much evident, how much her di cared for her boss!

At Malhotra Mansion, no one was happy! Everybody tried to make Shravan understand that he shouldn't go there! But Shravan was adamant.

"Are you ready... 8 baje ka muhurat hai.. ." Suman rushed in shravan's room! Shravan as usual was looking dapper in a dark green suit, which was close to black, paired with a ash blue shirt, a dotted deep blue tie, and dark deep blue pocket square! "Stop ogling him, Suman.." Suman muttered under her breath.

On other hand, Shravan was absolutely mesmerized, he just stopped breathing altogether! Suman was wearing a romantic slate blue net lehenga-choli, and the dupatta embellished with resham, sequins and stone work in beautiful floral pattern, which had failed to hide the smooth silky skin of her waist; Her hair was loose, with minimal make up and jewelry she was looking heavenly! "Someday this girl will give me a heart attack! " Shravan muttered with gritted teeth.

*****

Its a five star hotel, of course, Alisha being a daughter of a billionaire, made all the arrangements to make her wedding memorable! Well decorated venue, number of cuisines, and the bridal outfits both the couple were wearing was something to look at!

Shravan instantly, hit it off with all of his old friends, he and Alisha had lot of common friends! Suman did feel a little left out, but she was happy to see Shravan happy.

After all the rituals, pandit ji pronounced Alisha and Akshay, husband and wife! Suman was hungry, it was already 10.30..." in logo ko bhuk nahin lagti kya! Shaadi ho gayi, ab to khane ke liye pucho! Par nahin! Aur yeh Mr Malhotra, inko fursat hi nahin, bekar mein mujhe le aye! " little did she know, her Mr Malhotra's eyes were only on her!

Suman went to the bar counter, "juice hi pi leti hoon! Kuch der ke liye to bhook mitegi... Ooo bhaiya ek juice dena... ." "Which one mam? " the bartender asked! "That one, strawberry coloured ..." she pointed! She didnt know anything about this high-figh drinks! Only drink she knew was cold drinks, and juices! "ohhh strawberry margarita! Sure mam! "

"Wow, it tastes so good.. ..can I have one more? " Somehow Suman was feeling so light, as if she was about to fly..."you can have as many as you want, mam! "... "realllyyy? Ok... Then make that two... ." what did they put in this strawberry juice, she surly would ask Shravan about this!

"Suman...Suman..." Suman jumped! It was Shravan. "What are you doing here? "...

"What am I doing here! Haan! Ask yourself! Ab fursat mili tumhe... Main pagal thi jo tumhare sath aayi! Parwa hai meri! " Suman fumed!
"Oh my god! You are drunk! Kya piya tumne! " Shravan worried! "I am not drunk you..." Suman fumbled! "Kya piya isne,?" Shravan asked to the bartender, grabbing her hand! "Strawberry Margarita, sir, 5 glasses! "

Great! Shravan thought! He was about to introduce her to his friends, they were all so keen to meet Suman! All were happy for him, at last he had come out of his home, and meeting people. They were all quite sure it was because of Suman! And now, she was drunk, that too, tequila! Strawberry Margarita, it just concealed the taste of tequila! He was sure Suman drank this as strawberry juice! But what should he do now! He had to take Suman out of that place, she had 5 glasses! Too many tequilas!
He squeezed her hand and said.. "Let's go from here Sumo..."
"Kyun? Abhi to aye hai hum...nope I am not coming! If you want to go, you can...I am not coming! " She twitched her hand from his grip and giggled "looser...you can't even..." she bumped into Alisha! "Sumo, sambhalke.. ." shouted Shravan! "Ohhh I am sorry... Areee Alisha..." said Suman gleefully!

Alisha was literally flabbergasted! "If you can't handle, why do you drink! " "Areee yaar, I amm not drunk! I must say haan, you and Shravan, both of you think same! He also said I am drunk! But I am not! You understand! " Suman couldn't even stand straight, niether she could form a coherent sentence!
"Please Sumo chalo yahan se.. ." Shravan pleaded, for that moment he felt so helpless! "Wow, shravan, your girlfriend is quite a drunkard! Waise karegi bhi kya! When you have a boy friend that too on a wheelchair, aisa to hoga hi! What I think, she needs money, doesn't she? Tabhi tumhare sath hai, jo bhi kamiyan ho, yeh kami to nahin hai tum mein! " Alisha smirked!

Shravan could not take anymore! He didn't care what Alisha said about him; but he would not be able to hear anything about Suman!

"Excuse me... Ladies and gentlemen,... " Suman smiled from the stage holding mic in her hand. Seeing on her stage, shravan got alarmed! He hurriedly went near stage... "Sumo, what are you doing! Niche aao, chalo yahanse! "

Suman giggled, "and here comes my gorgeous boyfriend Shravan Malhotra! Ohhh I am sorry, you people don't know me, I am Suman...Suman tiwari! But he calls me Sumo! " Shravan nodded his head... "yes sumo, come down, ghar chalein please? "
There were quite murmurs, sensing some deama, everyone came near to the stage! "what is she doing? She will ruin my marriage, shravan, do something! " Alisha hissed!

"You,.. " pointing at Alisha Suman said.. " you vile, stop talking to my boyfriend! You have some nerve girl, you have already ruined his life, so don't you dare, again! " ...Alisha gasped!

"okay, so where i was, oh yes, I want to say something...first, I want to congratulate our bride and groom! Wish you all the happiness ahead! But I want to say something to Akshay...you should be warier, you must wary, you are married to Alisha, our lovely bride! You know about her and Shravan right? How she left him on street to bleed! How she left him because he got into that bloody wheelchair! But its ok! She is your wife now! But you must control her, she is still hovering around Shravan! Why! And she tells me a gold digger! Main paiso ke liye hoon Shravan ke sath? Par woh kis liye thi! Haan?"

"Enough Suman, come down and let's go! " Shravan orderd! "Kitna bhahoge, kab tak bhagoge?" Suman said, but this time she listened! "This is what you want, right, thats why you came, with your girlfriend, you are not happy to see me happy! I will never forget this Shravan never!" Alisha howled!

" Ohh shut up, Alisha! Tumne use uksaya! Tumne kaha woh paiso ke liye hai mere sath! Tumhe pata thi na woh drunk thi aur tum, waise tum kis liye thi mere sath Alisha! kam se kam sumo mein itni himmat to hai ki woh sab ke samne mera sath de sake!" he grabbed his Sumo's hand and said softly to Alisha, "love is not making out like rabits all the time, Alisha, now I can understand that, after having Suman in my life! Try to love Akshay, try to stay with him in his hurdles, try not to ruin him. Because not everyone is lucky like me!" He looked at Suman, who was smiling now; and he turned his wheelchair towards the exit leaving everyone startled!




Ok thats it for today! Let me know whether you all liked it or not!

Ps: I deliberately wrote Suman's speech a little incoherent, she was drunk after all! She didn't know, what she was doing, or saying. Ohhh yes, that Strawberry Margarita, had to google for it! After much thinking google gave the answer, as it was only 18.😉

Pss: Ramnath here is not a negative character! He is just worried for his son.

Psss: thank you very much for all the love you all are showering upon me through your comments! It's really means a lot! 😳



Chapter 7 - page 28
Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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