Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 15

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Awesome updates sanjh..
Alisha his selfish gf and sumo taking stand..
Pushkar old buddy of sumo and his thoughts about ShraMan..
Shra want to know about sumo..
Fabulous..
Thnx for pm dear

Originally posted by: ReebaS

Its awesome... Super duper excited for next update plz update very soon..

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Awesome update..
Loved the total different thought
Waiting for alisha sgravan story
Puskarr the cheeky one.. He can feel the romance between shraman
N ohhh my gid the fialogs r just awesome

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome update

loved it

please keep pushkar in your story

we need him

continue soon

Originally posted by: amlavs

Nice update...

Sumo is rocking girl..

Pushkar is sweet guy...

Shravan seems enjoying sumo's company...and he is getting effected to her closeness...

Let's see Wats gonna happen next...

LavSriya

Originally posted by: Sunain

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Unres

Hiii Sanjh..!!
firstly m really sorry for the delay..hope u didn't mind😳

I was waiting for you to unres 😊

Secondly..the update..haahh..
Wht an update dude...was brilliant😉

Thank you 😳

Sumo said she wudnt hag had done tht...n stayed with him instead..which amazed him to core..hez still exploring her..n never fails to be amazed by her antics.
Pushkar entry was amazing...u pulled tht really nicely..Pushkar noticed the glint in Shravan's eyes in her presence..quite a good lawyer i can say..according to Pushkar Sumo is just like a ray of hopw in Shravan's life n only she can help him peal himself out off his miseries..n so is she.

Pushkar notices everything! In the show also, he was the one who realised their feelings remember?

Shravan was heastitating at first but on Sumo's insistance n encourgement he decided the other way..good going..
Pushkar himseld didn't missout anything.
Ohh tht office scene...alluring i wud say..😳

Tht part was really beautifully penned!!
the way u narrated their predicament in eachother's proximity was fantabulous

Thank you again!

Shravan didn't wanted her to leave so soon as hez developing a habbit n desire to be just with her n spend lots n lots of time with her...seems like someone has fallen in love😃
Finally he asked her to escort him to Alisha's wedding...woah..this is going to be so so so much fun😆
N i believe to hear a yes from her for sure.
N yaa m hell excited for the nxt part..cant miss the entertainment cuming ahead😉
Tht day Sumo ki Sumogiri wud be on fire...so i guess i shud be prepared for the massive blast
.haan😆
Alisha baby...u r soo dead 😈

Haha 😆

Anxiously waiting for the nxt upiii..
plzzZ keep it soonish..don't make us wait long😉

Will update asap 😃

All in all u did a fantabulous job ⭐️
Arey mein tu Preekar kay baray mein bhool hi gae😛
Hummm...i wud suggest make it diff from the show..it cud be like Preekar always fight like mad cats n dogs n Shraman always endup resolving their issues n laughing at their siblings childlike antics.
N thn Preekar slowly slowly come closer..thn their alliances..wait how bout they fled to marry..but thn we'll miss Shraman romance..now see for urself wht convinces u the most i hope u wud hav received some other suggestions also😉
But han don't drag their part alot..as i also don't want thm or their lovestory to overpower Shraman's..😊
Taddaa!!

Originally posted by: arshuaar

awesome...
beautifully written...
different concept...
... loved it...