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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Sanjh...

Haaye kya update diya tune... Maza aa gaya...

"Thank god it was ur shirt nt trousers.." 🤣 sumo ne shravan ko chuup karaya.. That cracked me up too badly.. 😆

Aab sumo uss alisha ke shaadi Mey jaayegi Aur usse jaayegi... Haina...

Amazing chappy as always... Do continue soon n thanks for the pm

Love,

Anu😊

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abcd00

@abcd00

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Awesome

I liked it

Preekar will be very ok

But you can show a different plot not lyk ekdv just a bit different ...

Update soon

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Wiccamaya

@Wiccamaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Your Sumo ... yes your Sumo is the one ideal woman ... you have created willful... strong character ... and Sharavan ...awww he is sweet annoying fellow ... already in love with YOUR SHARAMAN... 👏 great work ... waiting for next update...

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

What an chappe...

Sumo 's close ness towards Shravan kuch kuch hone laga bande ko... Which was hidden since long ... Trying to come out any moment...

Preekar scene u can add but don't give imp than our own Shraman... Show mein Preekar ko hi poora imp diya & sidelined Shraman.!!... Here I don't want that repeat again... Only Shraman...

Pls Shravan ko jaldi se apne pairo pe kada kardo per uski poori credit toh Sumo ko hi milni chahiye... Do some miracle & Shravan should stand on his own legs... Than no going back only Shraman story...

Thank u for PM

Update soon

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Uroojj

@Uroojj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Very nice update. . really loved it. the concept was different so is the update. I want it to flow like that . please yaa keep updating as soon as possible. Jaldi jaldi can't wait for next part.

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dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

super duper update. Shravan taming😆 Shravan started feeling different with sumo pushkar closeness...he he he ...Good start to ur true love life shravan babu...😳

Nice development from shravan's side in this chappy. He loved her companion. Started feeling for her. Wanted to spend time with her. feeling jealousy. He started trusting her more. How he asked her company to Alisha's marriage. ! Woww... If not sumo, then I think he will never try to attend alisha's wedding. Am really excited now. When they attend the marriage together. Alisha ki band bajene wali hai.😆😆

And yeah... About Pushkar Preeti, already saw more than required in the show. So not much interested. . But if you wanted it anywhere in the story, its ur decision. No problem unless they are not occupying our jodi's space🥱

Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next dhamaka

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Wonderful update . Loved it... everyone believes that sumo is the who can help shravan to recover..do continue soon

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Awesome updates sanjh..
Alisha his selfish gf and sumo taking stand..
Pushkar old buddy of sumo and his thoughts about ShraMan..
Shra want to know about sumo..
Fabulous..
Thnx for pm dear

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Reeba shukla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Its awesome... Super duper excited for next update plz update very soon..

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Awesome update..
Loved the total different thought
Waiting for alisha sgravan story
Puskarr the cheeky one.. He can feel the romance between shraman
N ohhh my gid the fialogs r just awesome

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